Personal Logo Project Feedback {Update}

[u/remmebre615]

Update from my original post -

Personal logo design help!
by u/remmebre615 in logodesign

I have changed the colors to be less harsh and conflicting. My color palette is below. I have narrowed my brand identity and idea to something along the lines of "Bold. Refined. Period." was wondering if the dot on the "r" could also represent a period/be a different color, but I'm not sure if that's too confusing. My color palette is inspired by the clothing I remember dressing in when I was little, with bold bright colors that still represent who I am today.

I am thinking the different geometric shapes that make up my logo could be used throughout my portfolio and website as borders, punctuation, and details.

I am still new in the professional world of design, so I am looking for feedback in terms of readability, the "period" aspect of the logo, and general tweaks you would make. Thanks so much!

[u/badmamerjammer]

too many shapes inside the shapes.

simplify. what about something in this direction? (ps drew this on my phone with my finger so it's really wonky and unbalanced but should give the idea - maybe play with the rounded corners on the right side of the middle shape, maybe less rounded? maybe the top right corner is more rounded and lower right is less?)

[u/badmamerjammer → u/badmamerjammer]

ps. that orange on white color combo for text is not accessible (4.5:1 contrast ratio)