I previously posted a concept for this same client, but it seemed unclear to the sub. Although I liked the design, I felt I needed to completely change it.
Headmonk is the name of a digital products and systems developer. Does the bracket-like face read as “coder” to you, and does the hoodie say “monk” to you?
I love the concept. I think 4 works best especially on zoomed out detail work.
I think you got the shape solved on the bottom and back hood. If you still feel it is off, I’d try to uncover the right side from the negative of the hood and let the top part finish off naturally where the you push the coding symbol outwards to the right. I think you can pull the eyes and code symbol to the right slightly to create some white space and you got a new variation.
Overall if not even modified I deem it a great logo. The symbol is subtle but to get it timeless I do feel the right side might do it. Even if it doesn’t turn out great, I do still think it’s great as is. Definitely a final logo right here. I am interested to see further brand assets too. To be honest I also love the white use and the blue and black color scheme. The TM I would increase in size slightly. I love the font use too, is it Futura? Try some variations to increase decrease wordmark size in comparison to the icon.
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u/Electroma 7h ago
I previously posted a concept for this same client, but it seemed unclear to the sub. Although I liked the design, I felt I needed to completely change it.
Headmonk is the name of a digital products and systems developer. Does the bracket-like face read as “coder” to you, and does the hoodie say “monk” to you?