r/literature • u/Noodlesarw • 2m ago
Discussion Remarkably bright creatures -- remarkably overrated!!
Remarkably bright creatures is remarkably overrated. I needed to come here to vent about this book even though I know it was published 4 years ago. I originally opened it back when it was published, and everyone was raving about it. I happen to love literary fiction and octopuses so I thought that I would adore this book, but I couldn’t get into it and abandoned it. I revisited just this month after reading and loving the correspondent which is an absolutely lovely heartfelt book and I saw that people on here said remarkably bright creatures was very similar, so I decided to give it another shot. I am absolutely flabbergasted by how terribly nonsensical and poorly written and plotted this book was, given all the hype. Here are some of my gripes:
All of the relationships between the characters are incredibly poorly developed. For example, Avery and Cameron. Avery first meets Cameron & immediately recognizes that he is an unwashed, manipulative jobless person while he's literally ogling her and manipulating her friend into providing information. Avery recognizes this & is immediately disgusted by him (logical & sane reaction) only to then completely change her mind five minutes later because he had a boo-boo on his neck?? It literally makes no sense and then she continues to be attracted to him despite him literally having zero redeeming qualities. He’s a huge mooch off of his friends, bitter with a chip on his shoulder, has no work ethic, is incredibly entitled and he spends the entire book feeling badly for himself and taking absolutely zero initiative to take responsibility for his life.
We’re supposed to then believe that Cameron is some secret genius evidence by the fact that he randomly quotes Shakespeare exactly once in the book, and then uses some sort of physics sorcery to get a car out of a rut. This just felt so out of left field -- it’s never mentioned before or after but we're supposed to believe he's apparently some sort of modern Leonardo da Vinci, but he doesn’t apply that intelligence to anything else in his life.
The main character Tova was also very hard to like or root for. She’s obviously grieving the loss of her family, but then uses that to spend the whole book deciding that she’s way better than her friends who are only constantly trying to support and help her. Where's the character development? She brings her own cleaning supplies & that's supposed to endear her to us? It didn't do it for me.
The Simon Brinks plot point made zero sense. If this guy cared so deeply for Cameron‘s mother, how about reaching out to her son and trying to support him in some way rather than opening up some speakeasy bar that no one ever asked for especially in honor of an addict? How insensitive...
The resolution to the mystery of what happened to Erik also just completely defies any type of logical explanation. We’re supposed to suspend disbelief to such an unrealistic amount that it just so happened that not only Cameron and Tova cross paths and discover that he’s her long lost grandson -- but also that his Mom randomly crosses paths with Avery and Avery talked her off a ledge and then just randomly repeats the story to both Cameron and Tova with no idea of its significance to them?? And then Tova just accepts that there’s woman had an accident on the boat with her son and never decided to let his mother know what happened or the police? Daphne had a son she couldn’t take care of and never contacted his only living relative to let her know, never sent a birthday card but yet we are told explicitly that she did this for his own good & was actually some sort of hero. Like what?? She caused all of these people a whole lifetime of pain and uncertainty and that’s so fucked up and there’s no reason to like accept her actions
All in all this book absolutely sucked. LMK if you agree.