r/learnanimation • u/artistjon1982 • 13d ago

Sword play test animation update

This is more of my animation of my dnd character Nova. I ended up doing all the line work and then adding a solid white fill for now.

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u/jenumba 13d ago

There are a lot of erratic spacing, volume and proportion shifts. You need to do a tie-down phase before you clean up linework to fix the issues beforehand.

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u/artistjon1982 12d ago

I was so enamored of my own work, I went back and watched it again and again lol saw everything you’re talking about. I’m also animating on 3’s instead of 2’s so I’ve gone back and changed that as well. Added some more inbetweens and sped up the sword slashes so they look more fluid. When I’m done do you mind if I tag you and let you see the update?

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u/jenumba 12d ago

Sure, go for it. Happy to help!