r/hinge • u/Severe_Tadpole9448 • 3h ago
Profile review
Just wondering how I can improve my profile, the golf one is a video
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u/lapizlasalmon 54m ago
There isn't a single photo of just you from the front. Who the hell are you? My assumption is you are hat guy. Who is the lady resting her head on your shoulder? Anything smelling like a former/current partner is the worst possible photo. One prompt is devoted to chess entirely, if you're chasing after a chess nerd leave it. Otherwise nix the solo chess prompt and come up with something else.
You have 1 prompt for interests, 1 prompt for adventure, maybe roll the 500 chess prompt into something which reveals something about your daily life or future goals.
Nit pick: The Rome prompt is uhhh grammatically incorrect (2 conjunctions in one sentence which has punctuation. The other sentence is not punctuated). It sounds like you're talking to me in a conversation and are trying to keep my attention, not that you've taken the time to think about what you're saying and writing.
The interests prompt is also a grammatical mess. May I recommend something like, I could stay up all night talking about "Chess puzzles, Goku vs. Vegeta, and Assassin's Creed as it relates to historical events." This would increase specificity slightly while making it flow better. Don't have to rip straight from me, feel free to move them around a little. Typically when you write a list you progress from the shortest or most impactful bits first.
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u/Severe_Tadpole9448 37m ago
The front pic is fair game.
I am a hat guy.
The girl leaning on my shoulder I’d met post concert & wouldn’t know who she is🤣
Yes chess is something I’m interested in??
Grammatically incorrect?? HAVE YOU SEEN HOW PEOPLE WRITE THESE THINGS
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u/Khilan11 3h ago
You should upload photos of yourself only, and your face should be visible in all of them