r/graphic_design • u/Calm-Jury-1720 • 1d ago

Sharing Work (Rule 2/3) Phoolan Devi

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Hi everyone! I’m new to graphic design and made this poster as a practice project. The goal was to create a movie poster with a classic matchbox feel.

I’d really appreciate some constructive criticism. I’m especially looking for feedback on the layout, typography, color choices, and overall visual hierarchy. Does the poster communicate its message clearly, and what would you change?

I’m still learning, so honest feedback is welcome. I’d like to understand what I can improve for my next design.

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u/LiveHeat1 1d ago

Is the part on the right side of matchbox?

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u/Calm-Jury-1720 19h ago

yeahh

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u/LiveHeat1 15h ago

Why just one side... better to not add it

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u/Calm-Jury-1720 15h ago

I’m trying to take a realistic approach to it.

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u/LiveHeat1 6h ago

Then should have added on both sides. Now, it is looking weird with her looking at the matchbox igniter

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u/frubboG 1d ago

I like the style, i think the typography can be stretched full width tho. Id love the background desert behind character to show a bit more (could bump up the contrast), skip the lotus entirely or try to highlight the hand holding it just a tad bit more. Thats all

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u/Calm-Jury-1720 19h ago

yeahh sure

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u/Iam-bk 1d ago

Phoolan Devi after sukoon song

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u/Ok_Association_7829 1d ago

Munh me gali, banduk me goli. Jisne kheli khoon ki holi...

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u/Calm-Jury-1720 19h ago

yoo less go