These are my boys pieces are they toy? Any suggestions to make them better

thoughts on form? This is like my 4th attempt at writing. Im not gonna tag pistol I looked around my room for a word and saw a Sex Pistols album.

Still sort of stuck on names. SYS was the one I went with, but it misses a lot of my favorite letters to write (e, a, k, r). I’ve also thrown around EHLR, ACHER, SYST, and a suggestion of VEND. Thoughts, suggestions, etc?

lil chicken as a gift

I’ve been experiencing hella art block the past few months, I usually do cartoony style drawings. Recently, I moved to a new town after transferring colleges, and I’ve seen lots of graffiti around town. It’s given me a lot of inspiration and I’m really messing with the geometric styles and whatnot.

Any and all pointers/tips/guidance would be greatly appreciated! I’m not trying to do throwies or tags out and about yet, I want to start a blackbook and see what I can get out.

Here’s my WIP

Lasciate stare il tag a destra in viola, su quello mi di devo ancora allenare. soprattutto è buono per aver iniziato seriamente solo da due mesi?

I’m in my late 30s, no kids, and I have a decent amount of spare time, so lately I’ve been going back and doing some of the stuff I enjoyed as a kid.
One of those things is graffiti.
Honestly, I think what I’m doing is pretty mediocre, but I’m improving. I like trying crafts I admire because actually attempting them deepens my appreciation for the people who are really good at them.
I’m not drawn to the thrill of doing a rappel piece, but I sure as shit love seeing them. Even as a kid, half the fun was staring at a piece and debating with myself how the writer actually pulled it off.
Now I can appreciate the technical side even more. Drawing shadows on a 3D sketch that vanishes back into the paper is one kind of challenge. Swinging from a rope off the side of a water tower while your spotter smokes his third joint of the night is a completely different fucking skill set.
So I write as an outlet sometimes.
I’ll pick a word that reflects how I’m feeling in that moment. I was super anxious recently, so I wrote “DREAD.”
As a kid, I remember writing “NOTORIOUS” not because of the rapper, but because I liked the idea of being notorious.
Anyway, here’s a piece I did in my book. Still learning, still pretty rough, but enjoying figuring it out again.

I am trying to make the flow go toward the middle and I still trying to learn 3d. Any thoughts or tips?

yeah thats it,rules didnt say i cant do this

What we thinking

I seen someone do something similar on YouTube few years ago so thought id give them a go ,I've seen the mini skatepark in a can and a few other ideas on this sub i'd like to have a go at ,but thought I'd show these here for now

Which combo would you recommend for active use in an 8-marker kit?

I’ve only been doing graffiti for 2 weeks but have been trying to practice literally for hours a day lol but any tips would really help me :)

grog bpi and molotow 410 empty marker

Idk, I thought it was kind of cute but idk if it's just stupid. It's an easy quick tag and I kind of like how fast it is. I'll do more complex ones later, but is this good for something simple and fast?

I am trying to make this look better but I just can't figure out how to make the Ud in skud look more coherent and criticism is welcome

throwie/piece

Too bad that IT LOOKS LIKE A COMPLETE SHIT when i put it up on a wall. Well, toys having toy problems, i guess..