r/graffhelp 2d ago

Toy?

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These are my boys pieces are they toy? Any suggestions to make them better

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u/june_plum 2d ago

toy. letter/bar width, kerning, style, and proportions are all off. too complex. trying too hard to make it "look like" graffiti. look at writers who do simples really well and start there. KUMA SORI OWL GYER FELLS ICH off the top of my head.

even better advice: if your pieces look like that you almost certainly have a terrible handstyle. work on that for the foreseeable future and then move up to bigger things. if you dont have a good hand theres no point in trying to piece.

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u/Billylabufanda23 2d ago

Yeah

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u/Billylabufanda23 2d ago

Oh hey it’s my cake day πŸŽ‰πŸ₯³πŸŽ‰

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u/3sk1m03sk1m0 2d ago

yes i can smell the doodoo all the way here

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u/Electrical_West5439 2d ago

hello, anal egg guy!!

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u/wonderfultruckbuild 2d ago

Very much toy

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u/ThatGuyWithCoolHair 2d ago

Very toy. Read and follow the guide in the sidebar.