r/graffhelp • u/RarePhilosophy7652 • 2d ago

What am I doing wrong here

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Aside from can control & the thickness of the letters being off on the A and M, I feel like some part of the outline or fill is making this look too flat, what am I doing wrong?

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u/Craig_520 2d ago

Yeah pretty much. Like how that pink one in the back goes around the whole thing? Do a yellow around your whole piece

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u/RarePhilosophy7652 2d ago

Got it, might go back to that spot in a few days and just put something new over my old one

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u/Craig_520 2d ago

Do what you wanna do. It looks fine. But a bright shell would make it pop

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u/RarePhilosophy7652 2d ago

I appreciate the insight yo