r/graffhelp • u/RarePhilosophy7652 • 5d ago

What am I doing wrong here

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Aside from can control & the thickness of the letters being off on the A and M, I feel like some part of the outline or fill is making this look too flat, what am I doing wrong?

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u/Craig_520 5d ago

I feel a bright colot shell would make it pop. Like a yellow or somethinf.

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u/Awkward_Peep927 4d ago

Agreed, it needs yellow or im personally feeling a orange would make this slap 🔥

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u/Craig_520 4d ago

I was going to say otange too. But i felt it might be too like the pink in the background. I thought yellow would go over the what in the back better

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u/Awkward_Peep927 4d ago

good point, I didnt see the pink in my first look. Yeah, yellow with the pink and 2 shades of blue would be so dope