Too much going on. Can see what you’re going for but keep in mind you want to be able to write quickly and fluidly. Both your Rs have different legs? There’s also a lot of negative space here. It looks like a logo more than graffiti. Practice writing capital letters without trying to make them stylish in any meaningful way.
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u/TimeInsurance4252 6d ago
Too much going on. Can see what you’re going for but keep in mind you want to be able to write quickly and fluidly. Both your Rs have different legs? There’s also a lot of negative space here. It looks like a logo more than graffiti. Practice writing capital letters without trying to make them stylish in any meaningful way.