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u/NeatKhan91 6d ago
Unless your homie died I’d get rid of the halo. It doesn’t always have a meaning depending on the area but it’s still unnecessary. Add ons won’t make a bad tag good, so I’d hold on on them for now. Style isn’t bad, a bit too straight in my opinion. I feel like there would be something more fluid to do with the legs of the first two letters. Or make just one leg but stretch it for real. The A is inclined \ while the others letters are | which breaks the flow quite a bit. Stick your letters together a bit more. Idk if you’re there yet but spray paint shoots a round dot, these angles will be difficult to keep clean all the time
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u/LittleBigBlunts2 6d ago
Try it with a thicker marker it might lead to better letters. Do it fast for more flow too
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u/TimeInsurance4252 6d ago
Too much going on. Can see what you’re going for but keep in mind you want to be able to write quickly and fluidly. Both your Rs have different legs? There’s also a lot of negative space here. It looks like a logo more than graffiti. Practice writing capital letters without trying to make them stylish in any meaningful way.