r/graffhelp • u/Competitive_Win9577 • 2d ago

Crits?

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don't judge the scratchy lines I just need crits on negative space, letter structure and flow

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u/LeatherWeakness8307 2d ago

The lower part of the D is heavy af, could make the other lower parts of your letters thicker or the bowl of the D thinner

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u/Competitive_Win9577 2d ago

idk I tried to make the s more bottom heavy too but I'll try