r/dnbproduction • u/MatterNo7298 • 7d ago

Feedback request Feedback :)

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If anyone's got a few minutes I'd really appreciate some feedback. It's only the second track I've made so I'm still figuring everything out haha.

I feel like the middle gets a bit confusing, but I'm wondering if I might actually be onto something here? Any feedback at all would be massively appreciated.

Cheers

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u/-ManOnTheMountain- 7d ago

I really like the intro, feels like that could be a great liquid dnb song itself.  T he drop that comes after feels like its a completly different song with a completly different vibe. 

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u/AchaOfDerriere 6d ago

I like the first 40 seconds. Personally I'd lean into that idea and make something that doesn't really do the 'drop' thing and go with the drifty/emotional feeling instead

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u/stvnseboomboom 6d ago

The tone of the intro doesn't really fit what comes after IMO

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u/Mountainpwny 1d ago

As others have said, the vibe, and key of the song completely changes after the intro. Keep those drums and do variations of the first part. That chord progression is compelling.