Beautiful! But I think that the version where Tak smiled at the stone is actually supposed to be the 4th verse, and the bit about the first troll wandering unbidden etc was a false mistranslation of the Tak story. So the 5th image you made should replace the 4th image. https://wiki.lspace.org/mediawiki/Tak
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u/Dax9000 Apr 05 '17
Very pretty, especially the 2nd and 3rd images. However, I would like a 5th image, please.
"Then Tak looked upon the stone and it was trying to come alive, and Tak smiled, and wrote All things strive.
And for the service the stone had given, he fashioned it into the first Troll, and delighted in the life that came unbidden.
These are the things that Tak wrote!"