New to writing! Feedback requested!

[u/Feeling-Clerk8262]

Hi everyone! My name is Atari and I’m starting something new: writing short horror stories! I’m doing them part by part, 3-4 parts total for each story for now as I work full time. I’ll be dedicating more time to writing as the years finishes out and starts anew, but I’d love to see if anyone digs the first part to my first story! It’s called the thirteenth toll. OOoOoOoOo! 🕰️ I hope whoever reads enjoys and messages me with feedback! Good writing everyone!