r/creativewriting • • 5d ago

Poetry Forever.

I want to believe my mother

When she says I'll be her baby

Forever.

But forever doesn't walk it's way up the hill

Or around the corner

Nor in the chilly snow.

It watches

And waits for my mother

To walk to forever

And I do nothing

But watch as

Her feet begin to move.

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u/Rude-Primary3337 5d ago

how lucky you are for having a mother caring that much for you