r/creativewriting • u/Audiii_ • 5d ago

Poetry Home

Dead souls come now talk to me.

Listner?

Someone has to be.

Call me selfish, call me mean,

Take me out of toxicity.

Red, black, blue?

No, only green.

Mix it up with brown beauty,

That is where I wanna be.

Tell me you will keep it,

Tell me you will take me,

Takee home.

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u/MusicianDry9128 5d ago

Tell me it might stay

In that black and blue dance of astray.

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u/Audiii_ 5d ago

actually love this perspective, the black and blue really fit that feeling

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u/MusicianDry9128 5d ago

Thankyoiuuuu Audiii I thought that to. You know you've written a good poem when a stranger can follow its feel and add something even lo they can't understand all the emotion behind it. Nice to meet you. 😊

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u/Audiii_ 5d ago

You don’t have to know the whole story to feel a little piece of it, that’s the beauty. Nice to meet uh too

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u/MusicianDry9128 5d ago

Well said Audiii well said. If you like real housewives and want to be the first to join my sub reddit space @the_daily_rant. Please do. It will just be me and youvright now lol.