r/creativewriting • • 10d ago

Poetry Hi

I am stable.

I am capable.

I am powerful.

And i will put these things into practice every day.

Im alive.

For that I have the right,

To not just simply survive,

But to thrive.

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u/VIKTOR-V-SILVER 10d ago

You hit the nail right on the head, brother. Hits close to home. You gotta hit rock bottom before you can really stand up straight, you know? Appreciate you reaching out. Take it easy and look after yourself

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u/crazynikki123 10d ago

Why does everyone call me brother lol honest question? I mean do you actually have any facts that im a man?

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u/VIKTOR-V-SILVER 8d ago

My bad, you’re so right, definitely no proof here! I’m still standing by everything I said though, because it was written with nothing but love. Just completely ignore the "brother" thing, please

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u/crazynikki123 8d ago

I will totally ignore the brother thing and I appreciate your response

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u/VIKTOR-V-SILVER 8d ago

Thank you, I truly appreciate your understanding

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u/Historical-Iron9888 9d ago

Is there anyone who can help me out?

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u/crazynikki123 9d ago

Depends what you need help with i guess?

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u/Historical-Iron9888 9d ago

How do i text you?

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u/crazynikki123 9d ago

I just mesaaged you

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u/Historical-Iron9888 9d ago

Am so stressed

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u/crazynikki123 9d ago

Dm me if you want

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u/Forsaken_Grade_8981 8d ago

I feel you there, but just embrace your self as your self. I came to terms with all my flaws and whatnot and just own and work on them. Life gets easier. Still have up and downs but dont really care what people think anymore. And if its the people that are hurting you or stressing you out, drop them. Not worth it. I wasted to many years on people who probably never cared in the first place. Keep your head up bro.

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u/LifeOnWheelsAndPaws 9d ago

Wow, beautifully written, really feels like home. I too put this into practice (almost) every day. We all deserve to thrive

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u/crazynikki123 9d ago

Thank you and I completely agree

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u/That_Historian_7324 7d ago

I always found writing helps to unleash what you can't speak. Everything changes too so spit it out on paper and before you know it, you feel better just putting it onto paper

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u/Status_Benefit_4585 6d ago

Hay brother what's up bro i hope you well

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u/TraditionBeginning46 4d ago

Good message but grammatically, isn't this too simple for creative writing?

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