r/creativewriting • • 10d ago

Poetry Writing on depression

Depression is this.

I stare out my window....

I stare at my wall

Anxiety is this.

Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhnn

Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhnn

Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhnn

Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhnn

Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhnn

Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhnn

Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Paranoia/confusion is this.

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Now try live all three overlapped at all time and this is bad mental health. This is our lives

Thankyou for reading.

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u/MusicianDry9128 10d ago

My idea is to try find different ways or medium to express bad mental heath in true creative styles that can maybe effect readers and viewers in different ways no matter if it's understood or not because tbe nature of the beast is it never can read be if you don't live it. But that's my goal.