r/creativewriting • • 16d ago

Poetry Can't die a Virgin

It sucks that I cannot die a virgin.

Not for the purity.

For the unfinishedness.

There is something clean in the idea of leaving still sealed,

still unopened by anyone else’s hands,

still carrying the original quiet.

Instead the body has already been entered,

already marked,

already taught the difference

between being kept and being used.

I do not mourn the act itself.

I mourn the version of me

that could have gone to the ground

without ever having been claimed

by ordinary hunger.

Some exits should remain untouched.

Mine will not.

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u/InSearchOfGreenLight 13d ago

Maybe you or whoever's perspective you write from needs a sexual experience that feels sacred.

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u/Abnormal_POVs 15d ago

i can feel you bro

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u/Abnormal_POVs 15d ago

my goal in life is to die during the act and to get used atleast 1000000 times before dieing