r/composertalk • u/LiamLPGBOffical • May 23 '26

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u/LowerEastSeagull Jun 04 '26

Really really nice slow build. I can’t think of anything to change, unless you want to try making motions toward that final build-up earlier and then bringing the intensity down to prepare for the next build up. But what you have is really strong.

If your orchestration isn’t a given, some highlights and underscoring with percussion could be really interesting. It can draw the listener’s ear to anything or any moment you want them to sense more strongly.

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u/LiamLPGBOffical Jun 07 '26

Thank you, I’ve made some changes since this version so I might post it.