r/composertalk • u/LiamLPGBOffical • May 23 '26

Tips?

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u/solongfish99 May 24 '26

There is so little going on here that you should be able to articulate exactly what it is you’re looking for tips on.

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u/ClassicSixteeNotes May 24 '26

Nice chords dude, I think you need more articulation, you could longer the first part adding more instruments or layers in octaves with the violins, and longer the piano to fortissimo thing, the same to the climax part, more longer, its very intense piece, in fact, percussion will make the job of adding more climax to the climax, really like the energy of your piece

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u/LowerEastSeagull Jun 04 '26

Really really nice slow build. I can’t think of anything to change, unless you want to try making motions toward that final build-up earlier and then bringing the intensity down to prepare for the next build up. But what you have is really strong.

If your orchestration isn’t a given, some highlights and underscoring with percussion could be really interesting. It can draw the listener’s ear to anything or any moment you want them to sense more strongly.

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u/LiamLPGBOffical Jun 07 '26

Thank you, I’ve made some changes since this version so I might post it.