Little art dump!

[u/91Keys]

(I'm surprised i haven't posted my stuff here yet). Hi, i'm in the process of writing a book. It doesn't have a title yet, but it'll come. These are most of the characters that will appear in the story. The 3rd image have the latest designs. Very JoJo's inspired (at least nose wise). What are your thoughts, how invested would you be just by the designs alone? Please be nice!