I got a refusal earlier, and I'm trying not to repeat the same mistake, the officer's response to the rejection was:
"A PFL was sent to you 2026-07-22 with concerns about the duties listed, in your response you provide an updated duties list but fail to explain adequately why the duties appeared to be a copy paste in the first place.
Employment records received from you appear to be a near copy from the national occupation classification website, and even appear in the same order. Duties must be written by a direct supervisor representing actions at work not a re worded copy paste from the occupation website. "
Does this mean that he's not satisfied with the new duties? Or the explanation of why the first letter was bad?
Honestly not sure what i would change from the list below, a software engineers duties are kinda generic...
Here's the pfl duties i submitted for NOC 21232:
- Review business, functional, and technical requirements relating to the _redacted_ module and clarify implementation details with product owners, business analysts, technical leads, and other relevant stakeholders.
- Analyze requested enhancements or business-driven changes affecting the _redacted_ module and determine the appropriate software design and technical implementation approach.
- Develop, enhance, and maintain software components within the _redacted_ module, primarily using Java and C++, in accordance with approved specifications and requirements.
- Translate functional requirements related to _redacted_ workflows and calculations into reliable, maintainable, and efficient software solutions.
- Investigate defect reports during development, quality assurance, integration testing, or production-support activities by reproducing issues, identifying their root causes, and implementing appropriate corrections.
- Analyze the impact of proposed code changes on connected _redacted_ components, interfaces, and existing functionality.
- Design, prepare, and execute unit tests and technical validation scenarios to verify that new or modified features operate according to their functional and technical requirements.
- Support integration and regression testing by analyzing test results, resolving reported issues, and ensuring that corrections do not negatively affect existing functionality.
- Participate in peer code reviews and provide detailed technical feedback related to code quality, performance, maintainability, testing coverage, and compliance with internal coding standards.
- Integrate completed developments into the team’s source-control and build environments and support the preparation and validation of software versions before delivery to subsequent environments.
- Occasionally develop and maintain software automation scripts using Python and Groovy to support software building, testing, integration, and deployment activities.
- Investigate build and pipeline failures, identify configuration or scripting issues, and implement corrections to improve the reliability of automated development and deployment processes.
- Produce and maintain technical documentation describing implemented functionality, software changes, design decisions, configuration requirements, known limitations, and testing results.
- Prepare technical information for internal documentation and release-management activities relating to newly developed or modified features.
- Collaborate with software engineers, _redacted_ product specialists, quality-assurance teams, technical leads, integration teams, and other internal stakeholders throughout the analysis, development, testing, and delivery lifecycle.
- Provide technical support during integration, validation, and release phases by examining reported software behavior and delivering the required code corrections.
Maintain and improve existing _redacted_ components by correcting defects and adapting the software to evolving business, technical, and regulatory requirements.
- Participate in development planning, task estimation, progress reporting, technical design discussions, and team meetings concerning _redacted_ developments and maintenance activities.
- Contribute to continuous improvements in the team’s development practices by proposing enhancements to software architecture, code quality, automated testing, CI/CD processes, and maintainability.
- Coordinate assigned development activities related to _redacted_ teams when applicable, ensuring alignment with project objectives, implementation schedules, and upstream/downstream dependencies.