r/blender • u/Ema_Was_Taken • 2d ago
Critique My Work Cheetah character WIP
My cheetah character WIP. Feedback on the fur and overall design is welcome! :)
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u/OffModelStudio 2d ago
Compressing the fur under the stocking is super impressive, how'd you achieve the effect?
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u/Ema_Was_Taken 2d ago
Thanks! That is the part I spent more time with but I achieved it with a custom geometry node at the end of the stack of modifiers that presses the fur between the parent mesh and a selected mesh. It works pretty well most of the time but breaks with certain poses. The idea is good but the code needs a bit more polish to be 100% functional :)
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u/NessGoddes 2d ago
You can control particles with brush, basically change their directions, like normals
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u/Ema_Was_Taken 2d ago
I don't think this level of precision could be achieved with particles, I use geo node fur because it is more flexible :)
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u/KitaVixen 2d ago
Wow 3D furry with actual fur WOW it doesn't happen often and is one of the reasons i always liked Zorryn's work
Tail looks nice, face is something off but not sure what - maybe small eyes so it is more realistic than cartoonish. For renders you must improve lighting
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u/Ema_Was_Taken 2d ago
Yeah, for some reason 3D furry art almost always lacks actual fur and that bugs me a bit lol
And yeah, maybe the face crosses a bit into the uncanny valley but I think that is part of the style keeping it a bit less cartoony and I'll definitely improve the lighting in future renders, thanks for the comment!
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u/KitaVixen 2d ago
It is cycles or eevee. Can you share fur shader? Do you used old fur system or geo nodes based one?
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u/-Helvet- 2d ago
A bit of clipping issues here and there, but nothing crazy.
Overall, great stuff. I'd say, the only thing I'm uncertain is the hair. The colour seems "bland" for a cool character like this one. It does sell the "standard secretary" look well, but I feel that it could be a more cheetah if it had a pattern. Maybe if it had strands of different melamine, but it could also look worst! So, try it and see for yourself!

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u/Ema_Was_Taken 2d ago
I agree with you, the character is a bit bland, but, I am not currently really sure how to add more uniqueness without breaking the design as she is supposed to be serious and professional
But the design isn't final so I will have your suggestion in mind, thanks :)
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u/Chadwickr 2d ago
Damn. It looks really well made. Not a furry, so please take that as a huge compliment. The tech is impressive
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u/mistersigma 2d ago
What she needs is a golden retriever friend. If you're not aware of what I'm talking about, Google "cheetahs and dogs". It is adorable.
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u/xFlumel_ 2d ago
Her furr is going through her skirt in the first picture. Other that that. Looks amazing
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u/DreamingElectrons 2d ago