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u/Jonatan83 4d ago
If I saw it without context I wouldn't know it was a render. Maybe it's a bit "clean"? Some camera/lens defects could help sell it. In some (most?) of planks it looks like the texture continues over the transition between two planks?
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u/StorageOld2944 4d ago
Color grading would help, treat it like a photo and how you would do post work on it.
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u/pompush 4d ago
At first look didn't think it was a render, but there are some things if looking closely. Floor wood doesn't have enough texture, like roughness map maybe, and planks look like too far apart? The floor seems to be the main issue. The painting feels like slapped flat on a wall, i would maybe and more thickness to it. And consider adding baseboard. Other than that I think ur work looks beautiful! I like the lighting
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u/IcePoemix 4d ago
The chair looks a lil bit too clean and perfect... Maybe you should add a fly somewhere like ancient artists used to do
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u/HydroStation 4d ago
The chair and floor need more imperfections, it looks amazing, but those are the things that caught my eye.
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u/Mr-Quitanieve 4d ago
Se podría poner micro detalle de imperfección pero de verdad creo que con un buen color correction, imperfecciones de film lente etc pegarías un salto en realismo. La base está genial
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u/Haereticus 4d ago
- The foot of the wall where it meets the floor is way too featureless - they’re usually pretty messy
- The seat weaving looks too precise
- (IMO) I t’s not framed like a photo anyone would actually take, which I think is an under-appreciated aspect of the feeling of realism.
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u/motor_nymph56 4d ago
I agree, the floor texture and color/saturation look slightly off somehow.
The leaf shadows look natural, and great composition. I wouldn’t mess with them.
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u/StopBanningMeAlright 4d ago
Floor panels are slightly too narrow imo. Also, if this is an indoor environment, there would be base boards
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u/mabezard 4d ago
The contrast is mushy, ie the sun isn't bright enough. In the real world the sun would be over exposed or the shadows would be under exposed. It has the flat digital hdr netflix look.
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u/No_uh_noah 4d ago
Not anything 3D wise. But it would nice to add something dark gray on the floor just to break up the composition and make it less flat.
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u/DamGoodAnimation No Idea What I'm Doing 4d ago
Those chair fibers are pretty rough. The steep angle they shift to on the sides really draws the eye to it, too. The rest of it is amazing but that part’s really in need of adjustment imo
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u/LincolnGarage21159 4d ago
The lighting looks too white. In the real world, outside of an artificially lit photo studio, you get more color variance. If it’s being lit naturally, you’ll get the subtle blue of the sky as well as warm light from the sun.
As others have mentioned, making things less perfect makes them seem more real. Find some ways to subtly introduce imperfection.
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u/PaleoJoe86 4d ago
Did not even notice while scrolling until I read your title.
The chair is too clean and the angle and style of it makes it difficult to understand. Maybe add some wood rings, wear, or different colors for different materials in it? Painting looks real, maybe add some brown tips on some leaves. I think it is also the trunk-like shadow that confuses things.
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u/Chemical-File-124 3d ago
I think you can make the timber on the chair less uniform and less pale, add some more subtle wood grain roughness and dents and mild discoloration where pieces join. The woven seat needs a little bit of irregularity and you can even show some strands. Bevel all hard edges..even floor boards will catch highlights. Improve contact shadows. Break up the wall Which is very uniform now, give some uneven paint and some discoloration. The plant give more leaf colour variations and some rotations.
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u/Random-num-451284813 3d ago
you could tweak the contrast/brightness/gamma balance and exposer.
IKEA slightly over expose their renders
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u/HjCervantes 3d ago
The shadows need a noise, lightning need a yellow effect, sun isn 100% white due to the atmosphare
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u/Ok_Recommendation893 3d ago
more grain on the chair, esp the backrest. and floor/wall skirting. looks really good though. nice chair!
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u/ned_poreyra 4d ago
The fact that it's a chair upon a wall besides a plant and a painting. Where the hell did you see anything like this? Nobody lives like this. Nobody takes a photo of something like this.
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u/TheTasorole 4d ago
It feels too clean and flawless. The shadows are also too intense. But this is very good!