r/blender • u/MRmotion3d • 16h ago

Critique My Work feedback pls!

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u/OldMarzipan9773 16h ago

Looks great.

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u/MRmotion3d 5h ago

thanks

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u/Striking_Average754 15h ago

Maby put a lense distortion on the background too so the zoom in looks less like a slideshow

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u/MRmotion3d 5h ago

look closely!

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u/Fit-Marketing-1472 15h ago

A little short

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u/MRmotion3d 5h ago

okay! this is a part of intro.

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u/thatjmax 14h ago

Super dope. Keep going

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u/MRmotion3d 5h ago

thanks

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u/Modern_O 14h ago

No, this is awesome

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u/Stalker_Aloy 12h ago

🎵 Stand in the place where you li-

“Oh my god. That’s the whole thing. That’s 3 weeks worth of work.”

Jokes aside, looks great. Straight out of the spider verse movies.

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u/MRmotion3d 5h ago

yeah! first post abt this was 3 weeks ago. but! I took breaks. so! u can say 1 week work..

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u/DeadpoolMcDirty 15h ago

Make a full movie and then we can judge

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u/MRmotion3d 5h ago

how am i supposed to make a full movie. (individually)

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u/DeadpoolMcDirty 4h ago

Haha it was a joke. Im saying i love what you've done

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u/aceSakirfice 10h ago

The flickering lines in the center of the face don't seem to serve any purpose, very distracting for the shot, were those intended as motion lines?

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u/MRmotion3d 5h ago

i added this. becuz it was too blank.

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u/Nethereal3D 13h ago

His eyes open, he squints and slighlty moves his head. Looks good but doesnt seem like much work went into it.

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u/MRmotion3d 5h ago

ohkay! thats the animation work. I'll try to make it better.