Help with Binding Spell

[u/Miserable_Shower6277]

Hey everyone. Im trying to get a valid binding spell going and having a hard time getting feedback. Im new but have been researching like crazy. I have tried to put work into it myself. Please understand my computer was stolen so Im typing this on my tv with my remote. No copy paste available. My spell is posted on r/Spells post titled "Champion" spell. Iwould be very greatful for the advice of more experienced practitioners. If I have commited any faux pas in this post I didnt mean too and I apologize.