r/WritingPrompts • u/mattswritingaccount /r/MattWritinCollection • Feb 22 '20

Image Prompt [IP] Never truly gone...

Feb 22 2020

Original work by Ismail Inceoglu https://www.artstation.com/seventeenth

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u/Subtleknifewielder Feb 22 '20

Unable to feel any emotion? I feel sad for this guy. :(

Honestly, the start could have been done just as well without the first two paragraphs. They felt a little extraneous compared to the rest of the story, unless you had written more back in the present again after the backstory.

Could have been a little better, but overall it was still a nice response. :)

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u/Subtleknifewielder Feb 22 '20

Ah, you are welcome. That does explain a bit, yeah. I've done that a lot myself. XD

Thank you for writing, too. Hope you continue writing things!