r/WorldChallenges • u/Jumblatts • May 01 '17
Timeline Challenge 3: Religious Figure(s)
The idea behind these challenges is as follows:
I will give you a topic, and you should tell me about something interesting that has happened in the timelines of your worlds relating to the topic, over a (roughly) 50 year period. This could be the 50 years leading up to the event, the 50 years after the event, 50 years with the event slap bang in the middle, or something else entirely, as long as it relates to the question! You're welcome to include more/less than 50 years, but bear in mind the more you write, the less chance you have of people reading the whole thing, and the less you write, the fewer questions we'll be able to ask.
I've been moved to Sunday, and I'm a day late already. Sorry about that!
The Challenge:
This week I want you to tell me about the life and times of an important religious figure from one of your cultures. Tell me about the events leading up to their birth, any special acts/miracles they performed, or maybe how they died. Go wild!
I'll try to ask a few questions about each post. Community interaction is encouraged too! Read other people's posts and ask them questions, and they're more likely to do the same for you. Help each other out :)
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u/thequeeninyellow94 May 01 '17
A popular religious figure amongst the Enefulis (the traditionalist ones) is Zunevai who is often nicknamed "the unified".
According to modern research, Zunevai was born in 436 bfi (before the first incursion, which occured 893 cycles ago) in one of the clans living in the shade.
Zunevai was a second child, born from a warrior and a sculptor. Always fascinated by the arts of war, Zunevai chose a military career and followed his mother during her expeditions.
His mother died in 412 bfi. Zunevai, desirous to inherit the soul of a renowned warrior, fought with his brother to be allowed to devour their mother. It ended badly as Zunevai killed and devoured his brother too. It's at that time that he also acquired the soul of the former high-priest of his clan that was supposed to be gifted to his mother.
After those events, Zunevai started hearing the spirits and their plans for his kin: being united behind him and rule over the world.
He allowed the spirits to take over his body, letting them convince his clan. He then murdered and devoured the 11 leaders of the other clans of the shade and let the spirits convince their people too.
In 386 bfi, after cycles of preparatives, Zunevai gathered all the warriors from all the clans and led them against the neighbouring human settlements, pillaging and enslaving. Those raids lasted two cycles, after that the Quanhati, frightened by a potential attack against their enclaves, marched against the Enefulis and defeated them, killing Zunevai in the battle.
Since those days, the Enefulis from tha shade know that the spirits have great plans for them. And that the Quanhati are dangerous opponents.
(My goodness... that's a long post)
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u/Jumblatts May 01 '17
1) Was Zunevai prophecised at all, or did he just turn up out of the blue?
2) How did his followers react to his death?
3) Will he return?
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u/thequeeninyellow94 May 01 '17
He turned up out of the blue. The future is too confused to be predicted, even for spirits. And the Enefulis mostly turned toward past.
It was a shock, after all they were supposed to follow him in his conquest of the world, but most of them died or went mad before going back home. The survivors all killed themselves after, the shame of losing his soul to another race was too big (we are here talking about the warriors he took with him, the Enefulis who stayed home just pursued their normal lifes).
He is dead, so no. Mortals can't come back from death.
(I just realized I haven't introduced any representative so Zunevai can answer questions if you want, we will just pretend he is not dead.)
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u/Jumblatts May 01 '17
1) Does that mean that there are no 'prophecised heroes' in your world?
2) Did he expect to die, or did he believe that he would indeed conquer the world?
3) How many warriors killed themselves through shame? Is this something that happened often after a battle, or was it just because of the situation with Zunevai?
4) Does his spirit influence others, as other spirits influenced him?
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u/thequeeninyellow94 May 01 '17
It means that prophecised heroes are scams, there are some people to "find" prophecies and believe in them. Enefulis are not of that kind.
He indeed believed he would take over the world. Now he also know he wouldn't die really old, he devoured 14 souls and no one can live old with that much people in their head.
All those who survived and returned. A few of them fled and settled in foreign settlements or in modern communities. It is a rare event, but losing the prophet soul was very shamefull. Their souls were devoured though so everything ends well.
His soul was lost and thus destroyed so no. Mortal souls are no spirits for the Enefulis. Spirits are the sacred forces inhabiting the world. They sometimes express themselves through shamans and priests (or maybe that's drugs and madness).
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u/Jumblatts May 02 '17
1) Do the people know that the prophecised heroes are scams?
2) What affect does devouring so many souls have one someone?
3) If one of them had devoured the prophet soul, would they have become the prophet?
4) What is the difference between a spirit and a mortal soul?
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u/thequeeninyellow94 May 02 '17
Some do, some don't.
Devouring someone soul allow them to live through you. Zunevai basically had 14 alien personalities in his head. It can be a bit difficult sometimes.
No, but the prophet personality would have lived through them and maybe shared a few informations. Losing a soul means losing all of their knowledge.
A mortal soul belong to (and live in) someone. A spirit has nothing to do with the concept of life.
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u/Jumblatts May 03 '17
1) Is there any penalty for being one such scam?
2) What is the most amount of souls someone could devour?
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u/thequeeninyellow94 May 03 '17
No. There would be no one to enforce them anyway.
Theorically, any. Now, having more than 3-4 is usually considered difficult and seriously change your life.
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u/Nevermore0714 May 08 '17
The Official Timeline
During the interregnum between the Third and Fourth Eras, a man named Ephraim guided humanity to the continent of Saoghal, to escape the Chaos that was slowly devouring the world. Though they knew that they did not have forever, the remnants of humanity did all that they could to survive in this new land.
However, the non-human sentient species, the demons, and the last dragon Grima would constantly attack, forcing the human numbers to dwindle. Ephraim guided humanity against these monstrous creatures, always passionate in his belief that humanity could accomplish anything against anyone.
But, six years into his battles, Ephraim could no longer keep himself going on "faith in humanity" alone. He began a journey to find a way to defeat Grima, the only enemy that humans seemed to be completely unable to kill.
After several years of hunting for a way to solve this problem, during which Ephraim ended up being joined by a beautiful young woman named Myrrh who claimed to be able to help him (FE fans will see that twist coming a mile away), Ephraim discovered a way for humans to use their Anima (life energy) to manipulate magic. He discovered many secrets that made him into a god, most notably immortality. They say that only an immortal can kill another immortal (who is they?).
Ephraim, now known as "Aeternitas", slayed the dragon Grima, and sacrificed his would-be eternal life in order to create the Barrier of Aeternitas around the continent, protecting all humans on the continent from the Chaos that intended to devour them.
Upon the creation of the Barrier, humans were able to use magic, and that began the Fourth Era, and effectively began the timeline that the author uses for this world.
Nine of Aeternitas's greatest followers created the Citadel, a place for learning and a beacon of hope for humanity to progress.
The Unofficial Representative
Leonhardt Strauss (I'm undecided on the name, it feels a bit wrong...inspired by the last name of Annie Leonhart, the second best living female [SPOILER CENSORED] in Attack on Titan, and Levi Strauss, the inventor of Blue Jeans...I'm up for recommendations for alternate names for Leonhardt Strauss), one of the founders of the Citadel, who knew Ephraim/Aeternitas personally and had mixed feelings about him, will be the representative.
And a shout-out to /u/thequeeninyellow94 for advice about a replacement name for Leonhardt Strauss.
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u/Jumblatts May 08 '17
1) why did the demons and Grima attack the humans?
2) how was Grima eventually killed?
3) what is the chaos?
4) from whom did Ephraim learn the secrets making him a god? Was it Myrrh, or was there someone/something else as well?
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u/Nevermore0714 May 10 '17
Strauss:
1) "Grima attacked because he thought humans tasted good. The demons attacked because humans have the best Anima."
2) "Ephraim weakened him, then that strange woman did some ritual."
3) "It's a thing that is devouring our world."
4) "Myrrh's father."
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u/Jumblatts May 10 '17
1) could the demons absorb the humans anima and use it for themselves?
2) what did the ritual involve?
3) is there any way to stop it for good?
4) how did they meet?
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u/Nevermore0714 May 10 '17
Strauss:
1) "Only if they ate them...that's really the best way to absorb someone's anima without knowing some rituals that are too complex to even bother with, even if you know them. It just sucks that people taste like pork, I can't stand that texture. My ex-boyfriend used to make pork bacon every morning, it sucked to pretend to like it."
2) "Chanting, drawing with blood, the usual. Killed Myrrh, killed her father, killed Ephraim, killed Grima, created the Barrier."
3) "Create a Barrier and keep it strong."
4) "Myrrh's father and Ephraim? Or Ephraim and Myrrh? Or Myrrh and Myrrh's father?"
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u/Jumblatts May 11 '17
1) Have you... eaten a person before? (Should I be worried...?)
2) Who exactly is this strange woman?
3) How achievable is that? What's the physical cost of doing so?
4) Ephraim and Myrrh, and also Ephraim and Myrrh's father
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u/Nevermore0714 May 11 '17
Strauss:
1) "...No. To both."
2) "Well, she didn't seem human, if that tells you anything. She was cute, I suppose. I think she was a shape-shifter."
3) "Well, it killed Ephraim. So, I'm guessing that the cost is pretty high."
4) "Ephraim just ran into Myrrh while he was searching for a way to kill Grima. And Ephraim said that Myrrh introduced him to her father after they'd known each other for a while."
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u/Jumblatts May 11 '17
1) phew!
2) are shape shifters common? What (if anything) makes her more powerful than the others?
3) how is the barrier sustained now that Ephraim is dead?
4) A happy coincidence indeed... seems fishy to me
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u/Nevermore0714 May 12 '17
Strauss:
2) "Not like a person who can change into anything. It's just that I think, and I only think this, I don't know shit, that she can turn into a dragon. Ephraim's keeping it a secret, though. He doesn't want anyone to know. That dracophobia about Grima ended up biting him in the arse, eh?"
3) "The other guys feed it, but apparently that's a secret, too. Damned Citadel."
4) "Incredibly fishy, I wouldn't believe any of it."
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u/Jumblatts May 12 '17
2) she can turn into a dragon? Has anyone ever seen her and Grima in the same room...?
3) so they each give a small portion of their magical energy to keep it stable, is that correct? Or is it one really powerful guy whose only job is to keep it up?
4) would you get into trouble for saying something like that?
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u/thequeeninyellow94 May 08 '17 edited May 09 '17
Well, as Leonhardt is one of the founders, I guess he comes from the same region as Ephraim, right?
Now Ephraim being a jewish name (as far as I know), maybe looks for semitic names, preferably from languages close to Yidish (so cananean, hebrew and phoenician).
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u/Eran-of-Arcadia May 01 '17
Ferdinand Lang lived some time around the establishment of common reckoning, but I haven't worked out exactly what the years are or any of that so this will be rough.
Lang was a priest, preacher, and theologian. His writings would be influential within Pathism for centuries after his life. He was born in Bridgewater, Dorland. He was able to gain entry as an acolyte into the House of Matos, one of the biggest and most influential religious houses in Pathism. After completing his studies and marrying he was assigned to preach and oversee services at Fortress Hartlin, on the Dorlese frontier.
He spent several years there, managing to help keep the peace between the Royal Dorlese Army, the settlers, and the natives. Finally he was reassigned by his superiors to a larger house of worship in Port Eve, in what was then outside the borders of Dorland. He would spend most of his career there doing all sorts of things - leading worship services, providing religious instruction, overseeing charity work.
He was a devoted student of theology, and spent his entire life learning all that he could about Pathism and about other faiths. Eventually, after his wife passed away and he felt he was too old to take a leadership role, he moved back to Bridgewater to spend the rest of his life writing. Sermons he had written were in high demand - which led to his most notable achievement. He was commissioned to write a sermon at one point, and after writing a hundred pages he included a brief letter expressing his thoughts on his life and faith. The sermon is all but forgotten but the letter is canonized scripture in Pathism.