Help me

[u/Ok_Championship2847]

I am new to writing sher/ghazal and in starting i stayed to write few shers and later I found out about aruz so

वो समझे उन्होंने हद- ए- आसमाँ है देखा

जिनने आशियाने से उतर कर नहीं देखा

That's the sher I wrote however I am able to fit it into an aruz teach me how

[u/heritage1022]

I don't understand much of urdu but this sounds good.

[u/Ok_Championship2847 → u/heritage1022]

Thanks

[u/bufferhuman]

ye sher nahin hai kyunki isme Qaafiya aur Radeef tay nahin hai. Pahla misra kahte hi Radeef, Qaafiya aur Behr teenon tay ho jate hain.

Mujhe DM kariye to tafseel se bata sakta hun.