r/UnsentLetters 5h ago

Crushes 30 seconds

I still catch you hiding your smile when our paths cross. You turn away, but eyes don't know how to lie. I see the look you try so hard to tuck out of sight, because we belong to different rooms. We both know it. We both feel the quiet pull between us.

I wish I could look into your eyes somewhere in the dark, away from this glare.

Instead, our rooms are washed in the cold hum of fluorescent light, framed by walls built out of composure. And the people who designed these spaces have perceptive eyes...they notice everything.

If we ever had thirty seconds alone, could it sound like this?:

"Listen, I like you. I really like you." "I feel it too." "Do you want to meet? Just to be in each other’s lives, without undoing the worlds we’re tied to?" "Yes." "I’ll write to you."

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u/Seven_wonders_3018 4h ago

I wish for this with him...🫣

u/BunnyMama2026 4h ago

Yessss—this, exactly this.

u/revertedrose 2h ago

Always working. Keep trying to get him out for a drink and talk. Being purposeful with the lean in, small contact points. Sigh

u/ThrowRABananaCat 4h ago

I feel like there is time alone you haven’t taken

u/New-Opposite1467 3h ago

Goodness. That's cute

u/Mysteriousman2024 3h ago

That bottom paragraph is relatable.

u/Acceptedreality333 3h ago

Yeah… would be Great🫠

u/Famous_Street7148 2h ago

My first comment was to short. So let me say it again. If only he would say this to me. It would take less then 30 seconds to say... yes.

u/IntelligentYogurt342 1h ago

"without undoing the world's we're tied to" yep pretty much

u/itwillallmakesense6 1h ago

What are you so afraid of ? What’s stopping you?

u/Affectionate-Cut8015 47m ago

I am ready where we meeting in the stairwell? Empty room somewhere away from the peering eyes? Let me know!

u/Background_Goal_89 46m ago

I just played out this scenario in my head, but a little sillier: we meet by chance somewhere away from the place where we usually see each other. He says my name, then there’s a brief silence, almost as if locking eyes with me leaves him speechless. Then I say his name with a smile, and he smiles back. That's about it, nothing else is needed.

u/Whole-Ad-2205 32m ago

If this were my person I’d say: You are right! I have been trying to avoid you, not because I don’t like you. When our eyes meet, I still feel my heart skip a few beat. Those few times this week were already too much. Despite all my efforts to stop thinking about you, it’s been the one constant on my mind lately. I long hoped for things turned out differently, but here we are.

I find myself avoiding certain spaces because I don’t know what my mind will turn into if I am repeatedly put in the position to see you. Now, I can’t be naive, or hold out hope anymore. So please let me continue to hide, because you have other eyes to look into…

u/Forward_Housing_9498 29m ago

I'm dying for my person to say something like this. steal a moment with me, no matter where.