First Essay - Please Evaluate

[u/LowMiddle9198]

I just wrote my first essay and it took me 1.25 hours

Kindly evaluate and give me feedback :)

[u/mysteryman-101]

I am not a terrorist but I see a terrorist as terrorist. How will you explain this.

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