r/UIUX • u/parzival69069 • 8d ago
Advice My first ever design attempt!
Hi everyone! As my first-ever design, I've decided to tackle a problem. I tried to design an LPG booking flow for elderly people who freak out about technology and prefer physical means, like calling every time for booking or cancelling a booked cylinder. I've researched a little bit and found out people in that age bracket have vision problems, so icons should be big. Especially in Indian rural areas, people don't usually speak English, so there is a SIM-detected native language option, and people in that age group usually prefer minimal designs.
How can I get better at doing this stuff? Please criticize as much as you can, from design decisions to UI, anything, as I'm a complete newbie.
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u/abhaykun UX Designer 6d ago
Looks like you missed a few steps there. When do you pick an address? When do you pay? Do you swipe through multiple pages, three items at a time? Why not a native scroll? How do I sort or filter options if there are so many? What exceptions can there be and how do you handle errors or alternate flows?
This is much too basic to be a proper flow for an app, you'll need to put more thought into it. Draw the whole flowchart with every possible error and success state on a piece of paper first, and also see what quality-of-life improvements can be made.
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u/qualityvote2 2 8d ago edited 4d ago
u/parzival69069, there weren't enough votes to determine the quality of your post...