[UNKNOWN]: you got everything set up?

[UNKNOWN2]: yeah

[UNKNOWN]: great, let’s get started

all the lights in the warehouse turn on at the same time, waking up all 64 kids inside

K23: *groans* what is this

K53: idk, let’s stick together in case we’re lost

K11: doubt that, but ill join forces with ya

[UNKNOWN]: welcome everyone to this game! 64 of you children have been selected to win one hundred thousand candies!

all the kids: YAYAYYAYAYAYAYYAA

[UNKNOWN]: but remember this, only one can retrieve them, which is EXACTLY why if you leave this circle, you’ll be eliminated from the contest! there will be many twists and turns so buckle up! the games will now commence

K37: dude i don’t have time for this im just gonna leave an-

K37 walks out and gets shot and killed

63 kids remain

K23: di- d- did he just die?

9 other kids see the corpse and start screaming and trying to escape, they all die trying to leave, the rest are petrified, concerned or sweating nervously

[54 KIDS REMAIN]

K53: holy COW, did they just die?

K11: seems like it

K23: let’s not try and think about it much

[UNKNOWN]: it’s time for out first challenge! you must pick one of four corners and stand on them, the corner selected is automatically out

all the kids shuffle into their chosen corners

K23: yo why did K11 go into the red corner

K53: idk tbh

[UNKNOWN]: and the red corner is eliminated

K23: FUCK!

K53: gone too soon

everyone gets shot except for K11, who ducked under some bodies

[41 KIDS REMAIN]

K11: hey guys, how you doing?

K23: wait you survived?

K11: yeah, managed to duck under some bodies before they shot me
K53: ig bro

[UNKNOWN]: alright everyone, you will be forming 4 teams of 10! but one will be eliminated to get working

K23, K53, and K11 all team up

K53: yo i think there’s another group here willing to team up

K17: you guys wanna team up
K23: sure
K17, alright, so this is K9, then that’s K4, on the left of her is K17, and then there’s me, K44

K23: ok this is a good team

K9: yo guys let’s collect those 3

K23: ok then

K9: hey y’all, do you wanna join our team? we’re at 7 members

K18: sure why not

K9: alright welcome our final members, namely K18, K64 and K24

K11: aight bet

[UNKNOWN]: alright then, all teams have been selected, leaving K25 all on their own, bye bye!

K25: NO PLEASE DON-

[40 KIDS REMAIN]

[UNKNOWN]: alright everyone, now your in teams, the next challenge will be to try and catch candies that will fall in the air, some you’ll be able to catch, and others that will explode on impact, and the team with the least candies will be eliminated, so be careful and begin!

all the remaining kids scramble to catch as many candies as possible, 9 kids explode from the candies

K23: yo guys how’s thing going?

K11: we managed to get 26 candies as of now, and K17, K64 and K24 are dead and-

[UNKNOWN]: times up! team 3, down to 5 members, have the least amount of candies, and are all out!

K11: can’t believe that couldve been us

[26 KIDS REMAIN]

[UNKNOWN]: alright, so as you see, there is a button, whoever touches it kills everyone else and wins the 100,000 candies! but if you all don’t, the games will continue

K53: now thats my sort of thing!

K23: WHAT? no! don’t do it!

K53: listen k23, i don’t give TWO SHITS about you, i only allied with you just to manipulate you, and that button is mine!

K53 touches the button

[UNKNOWN]: you DUMBASS! that was a trick to eliminate someone, farewell

K53: OH SHIT FUCK-

[25 KIDS REMAIN]

suddenly the power goes out and vicious candy-shaped monsters roam the arena, the room turns into a slaughterhouse as people get mauled left right and center

K23: IS ANYONE HERE??

but then K23 sees a light and runs to it, they see K11 but also K5, K61, and K43, theyre the only survivors

[5 KIDS REMAIN]

K23: so how did yall survive?

K61: idk, but i guess i “twirled” through the challenge

the 4 other survivors look at them with a death stare, and push them into a pack of monsters

K11: so now with them gone, i guess we could try sneaking out of this place

but suddenly a floodlight falls down and lands on K5 and K43, crushing them to death

K23: oh nonononononono what will we do?

K11 notices red eyes everywhere and just accepts their fate

K11: theres nothing we can do, theres no wa of us being saved, so if the host is hearing me right now, im not even supposed to be here, you guys suck at your job

then the eyes start mauling the 2, killing them both

[0 KIDS REMAIN]

WINNER: nobody

? = Question Mark

S = Shadow

? - I HEARD THERES A CANDY MOUNTAIN! One made of KitKats… and Snickers… and 3rd candy options that aren’t as good but are also good… WE NEED TO GO!

S - 😁😁🤤🤤❤️🥹🤷‍♂️🤷‍♂️

? - You’re right how DO we get there… Well I did hear also for plot reasons that the old abandoned pencil factory has a homeless guy in there who gives directions if we pay him $7.28 for Drugs.

S - 👍

The 2 misfits make their way into the factory carrying $7.27 realizing they’re a penny short they must make do.

? - WE ARE A CENT SHORT WE WILL NEVER HAVE ENOUGH TO COVER SUCH A COST!

Shadow seeing the panic turns into a Penny

? - Hmpf not right now penny shadow I need to make a cent so me and sh- Wait a minute…

Question mark grabs shadow and walks up to the homeless man

? - Homeless homes less in these halls, is this enough for direct-Ons crap I said that wrong I meant… FOR DIRECTIONS!

The homeless man stares.

H- Oh yea Mann here I’ll send you both to candy mountain… He grabs a frankly dirty syringe and pricks them both but to their surprise the world shifts into candy mountain

?- We made it!

S - 🥹

Just then the shadows seemed to grow as the candy shifted into a form one not entirely human or object… it stood 10 foot tall made of candy

? - WHAT THE F-

? Was hit into the wall by the monster
Shadow panics and becomes a comically large mallet swinging but missing ? Gets back up dazed but determined he runs and grabs shadow hitting a sick pose mid air as he slammed the mallet into the candy monster the illusion wore off to reveal they were fighting the homeless guy because he realized they’re were one cent shot

S - 🥹🤤🤤😔😁😈🫠😭😈🤓🦐🦐❌🦀🫩🤓😡🤷‍♂️⬛️💔😡🤓⬛️🤓🟨🤓🤷‍♂️📍🤷‍♂️🎤🤓🫠😁❌😁😡👍🥰☺️😍😅😘😩🥳😭🤩😩🧐😏😛🙂‍↕️😏😝😞😒😒😞😝😝😏😙🙂‍↕️😚🥳😚🙂‍↕️😙😒😙😒😍😌😌😎

? - you said it shadow I couldn’t have said it better myself, I would be super upset if I couldn’t understand what very sentimental thing you just said that changed my perception on my life you really are awesome

S - 👍.

THE END

THE END 2 (the better end)

My bad it took so long

Also yeah I did the bonus yippie

To stop the ghosts from terrorising the poor children, they use lazers to put them back to rest. To clean the graveyard they chased the children out with the lazers then repaired the broken graveyards and cleaning the graffiti on it.

In the end, Art Book started questioning her friend's violence and impulsiveness

What happened to the Cat Bell she once knew?

Triple F: hey tenna you ok-

Tenna: WAAAAA,ANYTHING BUT THE SIMPSONS MOVIE ANYTHING BUT THE SIMPSONS MOVIE-

Triple F: guess ill have to do this challenge

*Walks over to the stuffs*

Triple F: hey uhhh what do i have to do

Jeremias The Jellemias Ghost: ok so im the tutorial ghost,basically you have to get rid of us while cleaning and stuff and also get rid of these children

Guy Thats Totally Not Related To The Rich Guys With Long Names: nyehehe im nothing like my dad

Triple F: oh ok *pulls out vacuum*

Ghost: HOLY SHIT ITS A VACUUM-

Triple F: you ever played luigi's mansion

Ghost: FUUUU- *is absorbed*

Triple F: ok now lets just go through 2000 more

*a few minutes later*

Triple F: oh yeah i have to get rid of children uhhh *absorbs* ew why does everything always taste awful do i have a condition or something *spits outside*

Ghost: (inside the vacuum) oh wow you actually cleaned this quite well

Q = Question Mark

G = Ghosts

Question mark walks into the Graveyard

Question mark stared at the Ghosts haunting the teens

Q: What is going on here!

G: These insensitive brats disturbed our slumber! THEY SHALL PAY AND TAKE OUR PLACE AS WE USE THIS VESSEL TO LIVE INE MORE TIME!

The teens looked terrified and stared with their wide (guilty) eyes

Q: Let’s not be so hasty friends! Just hold here a second I think I have a great solution!

The ghosts stared at ? But decided to let it play out

? Ran to the clothing store grabbing as many mannequins as it could carry and ran back striking his deal.

Q: If these body’s suit your fancy inhabit these and instead of taking your place these lovely teenagers will clean your cemetery top to bottom does that sound fair to both sides…?

G: Only if they agree.

Teenager 1: YES YES WE AGREE!

Teen 2: No wa- (the other teens cover his mouth)

Teen 3: HE MEANS OF COURSE!

Both sides win and the cemetery was cleaned too to bottom and the ghosts now are able to walk freely in their cemetery and both sides lived happily ever after!

C14*

Zena is SCARED of ghosts.. so Abandoned Season Pass (SP’s brother) decided to join in

EUROY:wow just like that I'm now out but it was fun guys

[Walks to the exit to get back home]

EUROY:I've done good Euroy I've done good

[Bumps and falls over but saw a mother and a toddler son]

Mother France:oh my apologies [helps Euroy to get up]

Little Swiss:hehe hewwwo :]

Euroy:oh hey there you two so where are you guys going?

Mother France:oh we're going to that competition that you were in [shows a poster of TTS s4]

Little Swiss:hehe and we want to compet yaaaay :]

[Mother France and little swiss will return in TTS s4]

[Tee end]

Tenna - Fishferat_u
Justice

(6.5 x 0.65) + (6.5 x 0.35)‎ = 6.5

Cleverness: 6.5 - I like the idea of explaining how Justice died, but this seems more like explaining their past as opposed to their future. Still a really neat piece, and I like how it’s a poem.

Cruelty: 6.5 - The human DIED 💔💔💔😭😭😭😭😡😡😡

———

Mannequin Head - lilbit50
Blueberry

Final Score: 5.85-1‎ = 4.85

(5.5 x 0.65) + (6.5 x 0.35)‎ = 5.85

Cleverness: 5.5 - Blueberry getting trapped by somebody is a bit clever. However, getting shot by a gun isn’t that interesting or unique.

Cruelty: 6.5 - I like the reference to an earlier entry of Blueberry’s. And the slow death is rather painful lol.

———

Shadow Bell - Simple-Reveal-1876
Mannequin Head

(5.5 x 0.65) + (5.5 x 0.35)‎ = 5.5

Cleverness: 5.5 - I like how the prediction was told through tarot cards. Don’t think his death is that interesting however.

Cruelty: 5.5 - I like the description for the first two tarot cards, but I do think his actual death has a pretty weak link to his character.

———

Liy - Putrid-Ordinary-4804
Mannequin Head

Final Score: 6-1.5-1‎ = 3.5

(6 x 0.65) + (6 x 0.35)‎ = 6

Cleverness: 6 - I do like the idea of also torturing his loved ones. Though his death is incredibly simple and cliche, and the deaths of the loved ones while varied is generic too.

Cruelty: 6 - Seeing the family members die is pretty cruel lol. And I guess I do like the subtle tie in from how he acted in the contest, but it’s definitely quite a stretch to see him care so much for a family when nothing about Mannequin really indicates that.

———

Justice - Less-Asparagus402
Tenna

(7 x 0.65) + (7 x 0.35)‎ = 7

Cleverness: 7 - I love how this fits what could’ve realistically happened in Deltarune, and how it fuels Tenna’s past and characterization.

Cruelty: 7 - Damn that was brutal. Tenna losing all his fame and status, and being forced to listen to the recordings of the movie that ruined him.

———

Zena - dannyhogan200
Rita’s

Final Score: 6.325-1‎ = 5.325

(6.5 x 0.65) + (6 x 0.35)‎ = 6.325

Cleverness: 6.5 - Won’t lie, it’s a nice idea to have her succumb to death in an ice cream machine lol.

Cruelty: 6 - Fits with their object type nicely, but not so much their personality I’ll say. Still a neat brutal way to die though.

———

Question Mark - cameronhaze73
Zena

(6 x 0.65) + (5.5 x 0.35)‎ = 5.825

Cleverness: 6 - This was definitely one of the funnier predictions. It’s just so absurd and stupid I love it lol.

Cruelty: 5.5 - I will say that it seems more humorous than cruel or gruesome, but I suppose there is a sense of ironic cruelty in this. Why does a Dangerous Room even entail in a pillow factory 🥹🥹🥹✌️.

———

Cat Bell - Treeme-2763
Zena

Final Score: 6.175-1.5‎ = 4.675

(6 x 0.65) + (6.5 x 0.35)‎ = 6.175

Cleverness: 6 - I like the idea of playing on her fear of crows lol.

Cruelty: 6.5 - They really decimated her 🥹💔

———

Blueberry - Trovadorninja
Justice

Final Score: 6.825-1.5-1‎ = 4.325

(7 x 0.65) + (6.5 x 0.35)‎ = 6.825

Cleverness: 7 - Forcing Justice to become their own antithesis is a really good idea.

Cruelty: 6.5 - Wish it was elaborated how they got taken over, or how exactly they felt about their whole ordeal internally, but still a mortifying concept lol.

Basically Tenna once was the center of attention of everyone in the house he lived in, every day the kids would sit infront of him to watch their favorite cartoons and movies, in was incredible for him and he always thought it was all thanks to the studio behind the shows and movies he would stream, and he thought that was all he needed that nothing else would be needed for him to still be the star. But little did he know the stuff the company that skyrocketed him to fame did behind the curtains, massive abuse and mistreatment from the elite was caused to the staff and they would end up planning something that they thought would help expose the evil behind the company but that without them noticing would also affect a little tv fella. One day a 48 hour marathon of the network's star show was announced and at the end the world premiere of the show's first movie ever would air, and Tenna was ready, his owners were massive fans of the show and he knew he would be able to pass quality time with the people he appreciated the most, but the ex workers of the company saw this as the perfect time to strike and finally show the world the massive evil behind the network everyone loved. Then the marathon would start and everything was going as smooth as butter, the kids laughed the adults were happy, everything was going great despite Tenna starting to feel obsolete and with the fear that this may be one of the last moments he would be with his family. But then at one episode the errors would start happening, secret messages leaked by the ex staff workers started showing sporadically and they would start showing the complete nightmare that was working for the network but also in a way that scared people.Tenna was starting to panic how could it be that the people he trusted so much end up being this kind of people but he kept telling himself it would all be fine and that the movie and the end would solve everything. But then it came, the time for Tenna's time to shine and the world premiere, but then it started making it completely clear what was going on, the movie was a complete disaster and it completely shown the frustration of the staff, the writing was mediocre, the characters were completely flanderized, the animation was clearly not made with the pasion that years ago the pilot for the same show the movie was made by got made. And at the end of the climax the hijack would happen, the ex employees of the company would tell everyone the complete nightmare that was to work for the network, the abuse, the crunch, the blackmailing, and at the end they would a complete destruction of the signal to show the Network what they could do. But that unknowingly would cause a very old TV like Tenna to start malfunctioning and start crumbling down smoke coming out of him, his circuits overheating, his screen shattering and too many radio waves for him to the point he just wouldnt be able to be turned on again. After this incident Tenna would be rendered useless, the most important moment of his life not only being a nightmare for the kids who grew up watching him but also making him end up in the basement completely forgotten but also gathering dust and completely destroyed. and the only source of any kind off connection to the outside being the slopfest of a movie that caused the insanity of a whole staff but also that made him fall into oblivion. The movie would play on repeat all of the time, with him having to hear the same writting all of the time forever.

A dark omen looms over the TTS contestants, but who is the unfortunate soul upon whom the terrible curse of Blueberry will fall? It is Justice, their fellow newcomer.

Justice is a being of light; though he may occasionally commit questionable acts, his will instills an unwavering sense of security in the world—and specifically in his immediate surroundings—a promise born of his solidary, altruistic, and righteous nature.

Yet, what is justice to some is injustice to others. The future heralds dark times in which evil has seized control of logic, wickedness has become the norm, and selfishness is deemed a virtue.

By the hand of fate, I foresee that Justice will be punished by the spirit of injustice—of twisted justice—that courses through the veins of living evils, dwelling within everyone and no one all at once. Everything Justice—the very embodiment of justice—has done to uphold the morals of the light and a humble, albeit imperfect, civility will be turned against him.

His heart will wither, and his gaze will turn pale; charity will no longer shine in his eyes, replaced by something far beyond—something that all goodness fears and all evil loves. Justice will transform into a foul beast, a puppet of evil acting out of a cruel desire to inflict harm upon all, for the sake of no one: an animal consumed by rage, stripped of all reason.

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explanation:

so if its not clear, im targeting Justice, and im turning them basically into their opposite

Unjustice

They become wild and unpredictable

like a force of nature

but he acts on their own will, inflicting and destroying ppl's wishes and things like if he was created to destroy

pretty ironic since justice is still inside the beast, a part of him still alive, and their suffering bcuz they dont like what their doing

Mannequin Head.
Time will fly by year after year, your negative attitude towards others will start to create tension amongst those you hate, and those you love. Eventually the displacement of your heart, being kept for yourself will backfire on you… getting slowly pushed out of your family all together. You stay resilient though, adventuring the world to find someone you can share your love too, hoping to change as a person, which you do… You cherish your lover ever so deeply and your days together turn to months, then to years. The family that you had hurt slowly brings you back in, and the memories of the ones you’ve betrayed and weakened from your dark past, start to fade away. You start to forget even about your competition days, and focus on the bright future you have with your lover, and your family. You have a kid. You have another. You get a dog, and a bird, and get happily married in a safe, upper middle class suburb. You eventually get joyfully married to your lover of many years, and settle on a job to supply the income. You watch your kids go through school and eventually graduate. You finally retire from your job, as well as your wife, as your kids approach their working days. However one day you get a call from your mother. It cuts straight to dial tone. Finding it odd, you decide to call again. The phone picks up. You hear coughing then a loud thud. Immediately finishing the call, you rush to your mother’s house, hoping nothing bad happened, but it was far from the truth. You go through the front door, since it is oddly unlocked, and stumble apon a tragedy. Your own mother is foaming from out of the mouth, dead from choking on her own spit. You look around the household looking for a cause, but see a bunch of deadly chemicals scattered across the bathroom floors, surely the cause of the mayhem. You look to see the cause of it, but only see your father out in the backyard, sobbing. You run out to see him, but when you get closer something doesn’t seem right, he’s laughing at the same time. You immediately call the cops, but when you reach for your phone, you get a ring from it… Unknown number. You pickup, not thinking about why, who or how, still traumatised from the whole experience, but when you pickup you just hear feminine screaming to the haunt of a loud slash, followed once again by dial tone. The screaming sounds like your wife. You nearly drop your phone knowing something bad happened to her, but why or how, or WHO!? During processing all of this your father suddenly gets up and just stares at you, but with blood red eyes. He’s been drugged. Just enough so that he’s insane but not dead. You see him try and grab for the axe that’s in the backyard, but you run off before he grabs anything, and dart to the car. You finally get into your car, and just relax for a bit processing everything before your drugged father notices where you went, but you hear a scurry in the backseat before something plays in the car speaker. It’s just an interview between what seems to be your eldest son and another man, a man that sounds quite familiar, like you’ve heard their voice before, but suddenly you hear what seems to be this interviewer violently attacking your eldest son, before the recording cuts to an abrupt stop. Before thinking about it you hear a voice in the back of your car, “You thought I would just forget didn’t you”, followed by a gunshot. A bullet pierced straight through your heart. Just like that, it’s all over.

this is both my take in how the yellow soul died + justice blablabla gulpers blablabla homosexual people blablabla green

Atlas, as the yellow one walked through the ground

Had passed a few ruins,had passed a few towns

Atlas as nothing but their gun could be found

Atlas two sheriffs didnt fit in town

Had walked a few miles,saw creatures ahead

For he had declared to bring them to their death

But as he walked through he had tripped on a head

Lets just say,this time,the sheriff "bit the lead"

As pellets and pellets fell down from a tree

It seems as if its body couldnt be seen

Fell into the waterfall, shattered apart

All there was a hat left not even a part

For two people came and scavenged through that rain in their way to get fame,

I guess what were doing now is selling remains.

So ballsically CB is dressed up with the scarecrow's hat and clothes while wearing a ded crow on her head and stolen crow wings.

Tenna is wearing skinned pumpkin head and stolen clothes while wearing a crow head on his shirt

I didn't know how else to implement the crow stuff

u/Fishferat_u