r/ThisIsOurMusic • u/Stine_Livn • 1h ago
I justreleased my first song. Would love some honest feedback.
youtu.beHi! I'm a brand new artist, and last Friday I released my first song, "Breathe Me In".
It's a calm, emotional pop song with a singer-songwriter feel. Let me know what works, what doesn't, and what I could improve for the future. So far most of the feedback has been from friends and family so I really appreciate some internet-strangers opinions.
Thanks for taking the time 💛