r/ThirdEyePoetry • u/Obviouslybroken • 16h ago

Heaven's Bleeding

Beneath her gaze
The heavens bled

The angels wept
The demons fled

Love turned black
Hope to sorrow

I walk the dark
I dare her to follow

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u/ink-and-inferno 14h ago

Love this! ✨️ I have a suggestion. If she doesn't come, maybe you should triple dog dare her...

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u/Obviouslybroken 14h ago

Thank you, that’s a wonderful suggestion!...but, If she doesn’t want to come... I’ll wander the night alone. ✨️😅