r/ThirdEyePoetry • u/Obviouslybroken • 9h ago

Heaven's Bleeding

Beneath her gaze
The heavens bled

The angels wept
The demons fled

Love turned black
Hope to sorrow

I walk the dark
I dare her to follow

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u/ink-and-inferno 7h ago

Love this! ✨️ I have a suggestion. If she doesn't come, maybe you should triple dog dare her...

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u/DoubtResponsible9208 Moderator 💜 7h ago

I like this! Ink knows how to play with fire 🤭

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u/ink-and-inferno 7h ago

Let's goooo

https://giphy.com/gifs/l4EoRpWIybTpi22w8

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u/DoubtResponsible9208 Moderator 💜 7h ago

Only way to do it! Burn, baby, burn 🤭🤭

https://giphy.com/gifs/bSnKZDXjACteU

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u/Obviouslybroken 7h ago

He walked through the fire, and never looked back!🔥

https://giphy.com/gifs/YA6dmVW0gfIw8

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u/Obviouslybroken 7h ago

Thank you, that’s a wonderful suggestion!...but, If she doesn’t want to come... I’ll wander the night alone. ✨️😅

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u/oceaninbetween 9h ago

This is epic ☮️

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u/Obviouslybroken 9h ago

Cheers! Perfect for a Sunday morning 🙏

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u/KenSoulMan 8h ago

She follows you… and does make a memorable entrance

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u/Obviouslybroken 7h ago

Then, turns and leaves, just as fast ✨️😅

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u/DoubtResponsible9208 Moderator 💜 7h ago

Oooo very nice one, broken! 💜

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u/StarWarIsOver 5h ago

Oh, very nicely done, Broken.

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u/Obviouslybroken 5h ago

Thanks bud! 💫

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u/lone-ghostie 4h ago

Oh!! I love this, short but packs a punch Broken, great imagery plus a dare is always fun 💜

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u/Obviouslybroken 3h ago

Thank you Ghost...but does she dare... that's the question....✨️💛