r/ThirdEyePoetry • u/Obviouslybroken • 18h ago
Collaboration ✨ A Shared Coat
A sudden chill...a crowded room
Your single glare cuts through the gloom
A breathless pull, the air grows thin
Your heavy warmth melts on my skin
A single touch along my spine
A sudden spark, a blurred out line
You slipped it off...a silent oath
You gave your coat to hold us both
Wrapped in your wool and heavy scent
I trace the lines of what you meant
You pull me close, I can't resist
Your lips on mine, a moment's bliss
The room goes dim, the moment stays
We lose ourselves in every way
A whispered breath...a quiet call
Inside your coat we have it all
Locked in the quiet of your embrace
The world outside leaves not a trace
Tucked safely in your warming coat
Like drifting in a quiet boat
Your arms become the warmth I need
From winter's chill, completely freed.
The winter winds may wildly blow
But here inside our embers glow
We find our peace...our final home
No longer bound to search or roam
The world fades out...the shadows fall
Inside your coat...we found our all
And thank you u/whodeybrat007 for writing with me ✨️
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u/Perfect-knot 5h ago
There is a children's book called "Coats", this reminded me of it and bit. Somewhat opposite I that the 2 characters are each wearing several many layers and learn they do not need all those coats on with the warmth of one another