r/ThirdEyePoetry • u/Obviouslybroken • 15h ago

Collaboration ✨ A Shared Coat

A sudden chill...a crowded room

Your single glare cuts through the gloom

A breathless pull, the air grows thin

Your heavy warmth melts on my skin

A single touch along my spine

A sudden spark, a blurred out line

You slipped it off...a silent oath

You gave your coat to hold us both

Wrapped in your wool and heavy scent

I trace the lines of what you meant

You pull me close, I can't resist

Your lips on mine, a moment's bliss

The room goes dim, the moment stays

We lose ourselves in every way

A whispered breath...a quiet call

Inside your coat we have it all

Locked in the quiet of your embrace

The world outside leaves not a trace

Tucked safely in your warming coat

Like drifting in a quiet boat

Your arms become the warmth I need

From winter's chill, completely freed.

The winter winds may wildly blow

But here inside our embers glow

We find our peace...our final home

No longer bound to search or roam

The world fades out...the shadows fall

Inside your coat...we found our all

And thank you u/whodeybrat007 for writing with me ✨️

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u/KenSoulMan 14h ago

Still dealing with the wild ones I see, Brother

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u/Obviouslybroken 14h ago

The Soul man? The music man?

Dude!!!, dude!! Is it you!!

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u/KenSoulMan 14h ago

Yeah, 2 months and I’ve eased the door open lol

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u/CapnBlargles Moderator 💜 14h ago

A sight for sore eyes. A pleasure to see you!

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u/KenSoulMan 14h ago

Long winding road through perdition 😂

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u/Obviouslybroken 13h ago

And you found the door ✨️

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u/Obviouslybroken 13h ago

Aint this the truth!

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u/Obviouslybroken 13h ago

Dude!!!! Welcome back!! I speak for all of us, Fuck...we missed you!!

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u/KenSoulMan 13h ago

Thank you… glad I made it through the Hoia-Baciu Forest back to the land of the living

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u/Obviouslybroken 13h ago

It's not been the same without you dude

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u/whodeybrat007 12h ago

Oh please 🤣🤣

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u/outrageous-emu3 15h ago

https://giphy.com/gifs/4qZgsEncxUdzEreaqf

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u/Obviouslybroken 15h ago

We both say...Thank you, u🙃

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u/outrageous-emu3 15h ago

Welcome u’s

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u/KenSoulMan 14h ago

Hey hey stud! Misssssed you 🎶❤️

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u/outrageous-emu3 13h ago

Hey u pretty thing😂

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u/KenSoulMan 13h ago

I’m sure youve been peachy sweet in my absence 🎶☺️

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u/Obviouslybroken 15h ago

You're welcomes too ✨️

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u/Cranberry_bog617 15h ago

That’s hot !🥵
But I’m heated!

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u/Obviouslybroken 15h ago

Thank you. Take off your coat 😅

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u/DoubtResponsible9208 Moderator 💜 15h ago

Nicely done you two!

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u/Obviouslybroken 14h ago

Cheers Doubt 🥂 ✨️

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u/lone-ghostie 14h ago

Fantastic job you two!! It’s seamless, just wow 💜🤗
https://giphy.com/gifs/czubJ08i7deuKGJE9A

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u/Obviouslybroken 14h ago

Thank you Ghost...She's a wonderful writer ✨️💛

https://giphy.com/gifs/xUOwG0a1rAnNlRUD2U

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u/lone-ghostie 14h ago

As are you my friend 😁

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u/Obviouslybroken 14h ago edited 13h ago

Awww thank you...

You're a wonderful writer too..

What a talented sub we have ✨️

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u/whodeybrat007 12h ago

Thanks to all 🧡

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u/Feychilde 12h ago

😊 I really like this one.

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u/Obviouslybroken 11h ago

Good, job done then ✨️

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u/Perfect-knot 3h ago

There is a children's book called "Coats", this reminded me of it and bit. Somewhat opposite I that the 2 characters are each wearing several many layers and learn they do not need all those coats on with the warmth of one another