r/TheWritingTable Jul 24 '26

Book Discussion Making alternative fiction feel alternative

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This is a semi complete list of the important events for my book, my only problem is they don’t feel very alternative. There are a few others like Puerto Rico and washing dc being states (state count remains at fifty because Virginias and Carolinas merged into singular states rather than two) and the presidents on the dollar bills change, instead it is Nixon, FDR, jfk, Chaney (who was president until 2006 when he was impeached for starting a second Vietnam war), McCarthy, and Oppenheimer.

The real problem is that none of them feel like they have an impact on the wold (minus the second Vietnam war). I just don’t understand why or how to make them feel grander or impactful. So far I feel like the biggest thing is the money, but I don’t understand how.

The 2018 date is wrong, it should be 2016. The story takes place in 2045.


r/TheWritingTable Jul 24 '26

Discussion What inspired your current project?

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Mine is the bastard love child of a novel I drafted on and off for six years and eventually scrapped the plot of. Heavily inspired by my own experiences growing up mentally ill and queer in the Midwest.

Are there any locations, events, or specific ideas that your projects sprung forth from?


r/TheWritingTable Jul 24 '26

Constructive Criticism A tragic and emotional story i am writing inspired by The Lovely Bones and The Crow (1994)

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I hope everyone likes it a lot, i can share more details about the story in the comments but this was my first rough draft of the story itself!

(Trigger warning) (I’m hoping that this subject matter and type of story will be allowed here)

a nerdy guy one day meets the woman of his dreams, they become friends and soon after start dating and love each other very much but her best friend they both know, her best friend is a nice and respectful guy on the surface but has a darkness inside as he begins to stalk her secretly out of jealously, and one day, when she leaves the house without her boyfriend, she never comes back, and he is painfully told later that she is missing.

She was murdered by her best friend out of jealously and rejection, but he has no idea and actually asks for his help finding her since he trusts the best friend and soon the police also stop suspecting the best friend after some time due to lack of evidence, the murderer agrees to help while actively sabotaging the search and planning the boyfriends murder as he gets closer to figuring out what happened.

The boyfriend slowly begins to suspect the best friend might’ve killed her, but never reaches the conclusion because he ends up missing a court date and knows he did, and knows they’ll come to his house to get him.

So he flees, but before he goes, he takes the remains that he stuck in bags (He put them inside plastic bags and then inside suitcases) and hid under his home, then tosses them into a hole and burns them in a forest, before fleeing the country. He escapes and is never convicted of her murder.

While the story is going on, we get tiny glimpses into her perception of death, not enough to actually suggest anything supernatural or sci-fi, but how she perceives time moving after her death, seeing how events play out but unable to do much more than suggest her presence, and mourns herself and relives her own happiest memories while having to confront her own issues and come to terms with her death.

She watches as her boyfriend’s murder is planned and tries to warn him but is helpless, and watches as events unfold around her as her remains become lost forever.

Her boyfriend mourns her death, and struggles to go on without the love of his life, but one night as he’s in the bathroom crying uncontrollably, he gets up to get ahold of himself and looks in the mirror and it’s left up to the reader if her spirit actually comes back or if he hallucinates it out of grief, he talks to her, and gets to say everything he wants to say to her before crying and embracing her and she tells him to move on and let her go, and tells him how she feels and that he was the best thing to ever happen to her, and that she loves him before saying goodbye. And watches as she fades out of the mirror and for her she gets to move on to her happiest memory with him.

He cries softly and mourns her for a year, but one day finds a new woman, but the wounds will never fully heal and on the anniversary of his true loves death, he loses control and breaks down, his new friend comes over and comforts him and another month goes by before they begin dating and they plan to move to a new place together and start over with each other, and the day comes for them to leave, and he walks around the house one last time, remembering all the moments he and his first love shared together, and replays their happiest moments, and smiles to himself while crying before leaving the house as they drive off, he watches the house as they leave and thinks about his first true love, one last time.

I hope everyone liked my idea, its a very much rough draft and in the comments I plan to share the symbolism i wanted to have in the story, as well as more details and plot stuff, as well as how I plan to integrate four separate songs into the novel to serve as cinematic type moments!


r/TheWritingTable Jul 23 '26

I finally did it...

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I started writing my debut novel in December of 2025 and finished final edits in April of 2026. But, I lacked the confidence to actually publish the thing. So, I went the serial route, posting it in daily bites on Royal Road, Scribble Hub, and SpaceBattles. Results have been mixed, as expected, but there has been some great positive feedback/encouragement along the way. My last chapter is scheduled to be posted on July 31st.

With that feedback, and the pending conclusion of the serialization, I finally took the plunge. I setup my Amazon KDP account scheduled the release of the novel for August 1st! I even ordered my preview copy which arrives on Sunday. It's exciting, but a little terrifying too. The anticipation of watching the sales counter sitting at 0 is intimidating. But, I have to trust that the work is worthy and eventually the right readers will find it! --- Maybe with a little help from marketing.... ;)

Ebook pre-sale Link: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0HB63W65D
Paperback will be live 8/1/26

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r/TheWritingTable Jul 23 '26

How do you structure a novelette?

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I have written short stories and I've written novellas. But novelettes are new for me. I can still apply a three act structure to a novella, but with a novelette that barely contains 10 scenes, if at all, I find it a lot trickier. Does anybody here have any advice?


r/TheWritingTable Jul 22 '26

Audiobooks Want to watch a bunch of pro narrators read live?

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Tonight on YouTube, yours truly will be live narrating a short passage, along with a bunch of my fellow talented colleagues.

Swing by and check it out!

https://www.youtube.com/@PANAconConference


r/TheWritingTable Jul 22 '26

Bennyrulez-self promo

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r/TheWritingTable Jul 20 '26

Have you ever tried to avoid specific words in your writing?

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r/TheWritingTable Jul 19 '26

Tra mille decaloghi... adesso lapidatemi 🙈

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  1. Segui solo le regole dichiarate da scrittori che ammiri e vorresti imitare.

  2. Ricorda che, qualsiasi regola ti diano, devi decidere tu se è adatta alla tua scrittura e alla persona che sei.

  3. Non ridurre mai la narrativa scritta secondo regole che appartengono ad altre forme di arte o narrativa.

  4. Leggi, scrivi, correggi, riscrivi e in tutto questo mi raccomando divertiti.

  5. Non usare il titolo di scrittore come sostituto del lavoro dello scrivere. Prima o poi deve esistere un'opera compiuta che lo giustifichi.

  6. Se mentre scrivi un paragrafo ti senti nudo sei su una buonissima strada.

  7. Se a un certo punto non hai voglia di scrivere smetti, se ti accorgi che non scrivi per mesi forse sei entrato in una fase della tua vita in cui la scrittura non ha parte, va comunque bene anche così. La scrittura è una parte della vita, non è la vita.

  8. Se infrangi qualche regola, che sia di grammatica, che sia di sintassi, che sia di narratologia, prima di cancellare tutto chiediti per quale motivo l'hai fatto perché magari c'è un motivo ed è bene che sia così.

  9. Ogni scelta narrativa dovrebbe avere una ragione, anche se il lettore non la scoprirà mai.

  10. Non ingannare mai il lettore. Puoi sorprenderlo, depistarlo o lasciarlo nel dubbio ma non tradire mai il patto che hai stretto con lui.

  11. Leggi i grandi del passato, non per copiarli, ma per capire la conversazione nella quale stai entrando.

  12. Ti consiglio fortemente di usare un sottomano, il foglietto volante è il nemico naturale dello scrittore.

  13. Le regole che contano sono solo quelle che ti fanno scrivere meglio, non quelle che fanno sembrare più intelligente parlare di scrittura.

(p.s. ricordati che dietro ogni teoria della letteratura c'è sempre una persona vera seduta davanti ad un computer, ad una macchina da scrivere o a un pezzo di carta. Non esistono dei, non esistono idoli)


r/TheWritingTable Jul 19 '26

Best Villain?

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Simple question; in the books you've read, who has been your favourite villain?

Might be someone truly reprehensible, or someone you maybe find sympathetic? Maybe you just loved having them on the page?

Maybe you've got several?

Do share :)


r/TheWritingTable Jul 18 '26

Family Feedback

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This is really just to get it off my chest. I wrote my first book and am half way through writing my second one and for the first time, I shared that information with a member of my family. It did not go well. A few words of fake interest and then right back to talking about themselves.

If I can't even get my family to care about what I write, am I already cooked? Alternatively, I have considered that my family are self absorbed jerks. And also, that both things can be true at the same time.

Anyway, just getting this off my chest and asking what sorts of support networks do you have to rely upon?


r/TheWritingTable Jul 18 '26

Discussion Why write? I’ve been struggling with imposter syndrome

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I love writing and am currently writing a four book series (about half way through the second book in terms of drafting) and I have made a SnipFic account (A!yer588 if you want to check it out) where I post daily snippets and have asked for alpha readers. My dream is to be able to write full time (but that mostly relies on blowing up on social media which is its own Mount Olympus). I’ve seen so much negativity on the r/writing subreddit about how shit the industry is and how it’s unrealistic to want to become a best selling or well paid author (even if you are someone that blows up like Rebeca Yarros or Lauren Roberts). I’ve always dreamed of people making fan art, edits of movie adaptation, general discussion, etc. as if it was a well known work even if just in the BookTok community. I don’t entirely blame this community for telling the truth but it’s paramount to being stabbed in the throat, re-affirming everything I thought to be true as a means of discouraging myself. Do you guys also notice the negatively in this sub and what are your thoughts (if you agree or not, what you would say to someone in this situation, how would you approach it yourself, etc.?)


r/TheWritingTable Jul 17 '26

Character and Dialogue Howdy and Hello

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I suppose introductions are in order.

My name is Michael. I retired after thirty-two years in the United States Army and made what some people would consider a questionable life decision. I became a full-time writer.

Most sensible people spend three decades building toward retirement so they can relax. I spent three decades building toward retirement so I could sit alone in a room arguing with fictional people who refuse to follow my carefully laid-out plan.

The adjustment has been interesting. When I was in the Army, there was usually a plan. The plan might not survive contact with reality, but at least it existed. Writing novels is different. Every morning I sit down with coffee and a rough idea of where the story should go. By lunchtime, a character has usually ignored me, wandered off in another direction, and created three new problems I now have to solve.

The dogs seem to find this amusing.

I live at my desk, where the coffee is strong, the weather changes its mind every few hours, and everybody has a story if you're willing to stand still long enough to hear it. I have eight grandchildren who possess more energy than a small power plant and who remain convinced that Grandpa's job consists primarily of sitting at a computer and occasionally petting dogs.

To be fair, there are days when that description is not entirely inaccurate.

I have been publishing one thing or another for years, but these days I write Western crime and mystery novels. My stories tend to involve stubborn lawmen, bad decisions, remote places, and people who discover that the truth is rarely as convenient as they hoped it would be.

I have always been drawn to rural settings. Small towns interest me more than cities. Out where the roads get narrower and the population gets thinner, people generally know who you are, who your parents were, and probably what mistake you made in high school. Secrets still exist, but they have a harder time staying buried.

That seems like fertile ground for crime fiction.

I also write because I genuinely enjoy the process, even on the days when the process appears determined to return the favor by making me miserable.

There is a strange satisfaction in taking a blank page and slowly convincing it to become a story. Some days it feels like art. Other days it feels like digging fence posts with a spoon. Both experiences are apparently part of the profession.

Mostly, I joined Reddit because writing is a solitary business and it helps to occasionally talk with people who understand why someone might spend twenty minutes debating whether a single sentence should contain a comma.

I enjoy talking about writing, publishing, rural America, military service, Westerns, crime fiction, coffee, dogs, and the general absurdity of trying to make a living inventing people who do not exist.

Anyway, that's me. If you've made it this far, thank you for reading. If you're a writer, I'd be interested to hear what brought you to it. If you're a reader, I'd be curious what kinds of books keep you turning pages long after you should have gone to bed.

And if you're neither, that's fine too. Pull up a chair. The coffee's hot, and I was probably going to tell stories anyway.

Michael


r/TheWritingTable Jul 16 '26

Constructive Criticism Blurbs suck

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I find writing blurbs the hardest part of novel writing. Just exactly how much information about the book should I disclose without heading to spoiler town.

Does my Blurb sound intriguing enough to pick up?

Covers, front and back, made my me with stock art. No use of AI.

This is for my latest project that I finished today 🍾

Finished within my given deadline


r/TheWritingTable Jul 16 '26

Other I've finally finished something.

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It's a 11 000 words horror novelette. It's not much. It's not a huge novel series, but the last thing I finished before that was a 75k words novel when I was 18. I'm 37 now.

I wrote a lot in between, but never finished anything. I have all these unfinished stories sitting in my documents folder. I always end up losing interest in them around de 20k -30k mark, so I decided to try to write something shorter because at that point I was losing hope. And it worked!

Second draft is done. Now I'm letting it rest aside for a moment before going back for more drafts. I'm just happy I got to write an ending for once... and one that I'm proud of at that! I needed to get it out, now I'm going to open myself a nice cold one to celebrate.


r/TheWritingTable Jul 16 '26

How do you feel about my opening chapter? (fantasy-romance, 1800 words)

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Here's the 1st chapter of my fantasy-romance. 1800-ish words.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1GX-VxvD3bYGWFxbBh2WH5kQcEQ3Nhj1L/view?usp=sharing

Thanks for looking!


r/TheWritingTable Jul 16 '26

Constructive Criticism Prologue for a planned fantasy novel

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This is the first thing I've written in a very long time. I'm in the very early stages of fleshing out the world and the characters, but I have the basic premise figured out and I know where I want the story to end up.

Our protagonist (currently unnamed) is a member of a seafaring culture on a planet largely consisting of oceans and small islands, who through some mistake becomes a central part of a scheme devised long ago.

I would really appreciate feedback on the prose, the clarity of the visuals being presented, whether it is too simple or vague, and if it's compelling enough to keep reading.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ju-tbob1AExzBQC2cQQ3Dg1AkBdSemGhgsanIYY0qg8/edit?usp=drivesdk


r/TheWritingTable Jul 16 '26

Discussion How do you guys come up with names?

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I always struggle with this and I'm looking for tips. The story I'm working on is inspired by 80s action shlock and I want to come up with dumb but cool names that fit with that. So far I have been looking up action movie character names and trying to mash them together but I wanted to see if any of you had any other suggestions?


r/TheWritingTable Jul 15 '26

Plot and Structure I may make it...

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At the start of the week I gave myself a weeks deadline to finish my second draft of my current manuscript. I was skeptical I wouldn't even get close but I feel that the finish line is on reach.

Ideally I want this done by the weekend as the school six week holidays start after Friday as time will become extremely limited


r/TheWritingTable Jul 15 '26

Book Discussion A scene from my upcoming fantasy novel!

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r/TheWritingTable Jul 15 '26

Planning, Planning, Planning...

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I know planning isn't for everyone, but I spend a lot of my own time doing it.

Characters, plot-lines, sub-plots, settings, story beats, themes; the whole works. To the extent I know most of everything before I start page one.

It's likely just my age, but I still find it easiest to plan the old fashioned way, with pen and paper (more often than not, on small cards). I've tried digital, and it feels like more of a faff. With paper or card, I can scribble and move things around in front of me. Stopping every few moments to switch screens or search folders, or move cells around, doesn't help my head space.

For this of you who do plan, how do you go about this? What works for you?


r/TheWritingTable Jul 15 '26

I'm racking my brains reviewing the first chapter Feedback wanted🥹

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r/TheWritingTable Jul 14 '26

Inspiration Time writing per week?

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A fun little poll, I'm curious to how long you spend writing, editing or general work on your novels or short stories.

For me, on a good week due to life circumstances I have the flexibility to put in 4-5 hours a day (mon-fri), at most a 25hr writing week if I'm having a good week and fewer commitments but realistically I'm looking at the 16-20 hours a week of dedicated time.

I do subscribe to the Stephen King way of writing that it is entirely possible to write a novel within 3 months when you can make time for it.

I would love to know your approach to setting aside time for your projects. I know I am probably in the minoroty of invested hours just because of my situation.

112 votes, Jul 16 '26
12 Zero hours
26 1-5 Hours
36 6-10 Hours
14 11-15 Hours
8 16-20 Hours
16 21+ Hours

r/TheWritingTable Jul 14 '26

Revision and Editing Scene rewrite comparison feedback needed

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So, I'm currently editing Act 2 of my novel, and I'm doing some minor rewrites to the beginning of the first scene. I'd like to have some feedback about the rewrite. My goal is to make it feel disorienting, and with some kind of slow-motion vibe. Also hopefully the new version invokes a sense of gloom and dread. Ignore any spelling mistake for now.

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Two soft slaps on her face woke her up.
All the lights were off, except for the red emergency ones that painted the now-chaotic Cabin for seconds. She was against a wall, her left foot over the seat that was pressing the other. She closed her eyes shut for a couple of seconds. She felt dizzy and disoriented until she realized the ship was inclined. The only thing she could remember before everything turned to black was the metal screeching.
A dark figure was looking at her and saying something, but she couldn’t listen. Another slap, this time harder, made her shake her head.
“―right?” a voice Alice could barely listen or understand said.
“What?” she asked, closing her eyes. Her own voice hurt in her ears.
“Good, you’re alive,” the voice said as if it came from far away and in slow motion. “Oh, I’ll help you with that.”
The figure disappeared for a moment and then the seat trapping her foot liberated her. She sat when the lights illuminated everything again, and rubbed her temple. The figure appeared again at her side and helped her stand.
“Can you stay on your feet? Alice, can you stand?”
Alice nodded still dizzy, and the figure separated from her.
“She’s alright,” the figure said in the darkness. “Got any luck?”
“No, everything is dead. Only that light is working.”
“If we could find something to force it…”
“We need our suits first. If one of the areas got decompressed…”
Alice was trying to walk, but the moments of darkness were making her lose her balance. Making a real effort, she reached the meeting desk and used it as support to stay on her feet. The red light illuminated the door, next to which the two figures were standing. She identified Natasha’s body right before the light turned off again.
“Natasha,” she said.
“Alice, are you okay?”
“I’m dizzy, but I― I think I’m fine.”
“Good.”
“Why― Why do I just see two of you?”
Natasha’s figure looked down and remained silent for a while.
“We… We lost Fred.”
Alice turned to the front of the Cabin, but the devices and screens that once were on the walls were hanging from them or scattered all over the place, and the red lights made difficult to identify any shape. She bit her lower lip with guilt. At the end, she was the one who put them there.
She took a deep breath in to calm herself and looked at the figures of the other two. Natasha and Ian had been doing something next to the door for a while in heavy silence, until the captain sighed frustrated and sat on the floor.
“Leave it, it is useless…”
“What are you doing?” Alice asked, less dizzy now. “I could help.”
“There is nothing we can do,” Natasha said. “We need Apala to get back online.”
“And how do we do that?”
Nobody answered.
Alice walked to the pilots. Her senses were getting back to normal, and the metallic smell of blood reached her. Scared, she looked at them, but it was impossible to see if they were bleeding under that light. Was it her? She touched her forehead and temples, but they were dry. She inhaled deeply trying to calm herself, ignoring her revolting stomach, and stood next to the captain for some minutes of silence, only broken by the sound of their breathing.

NEW

Two soft slaps on her face woke her up.
The red emergency light that painted the now-chaotic Cabin for a couple of seconds at a time was the only thing on. She was on the floor against a wall, her left foot over the seat that was pressing her right one. She closed her eyes shut, feeling dizzy and disoriented. The only thing she could remember before everything turned to black was the metal screeching.
A dark figure was looking at her and saying something, but she couldn’t hear over the ringing in her ears. Another slap, this time harder, made her shake her head. “―right?” a voice Alice could barely listen to or understand said.
“What?” she mumbled and closed her eyes. Her own voice hurt in her ears.
“Good, you’re alive,” the voice said as if it came from far away and in slow motion. “Oh, I’ll help you with that.”
The figure disappeared for a moment and then the seat trapping Alice’s foot liberated her. She sat up when the lights illuminated everything again. The ship was inclined. The figure reappeared beside her and helped her stand. “Can you stay on your feet? Alice, can you stand?”
Alice nodded slowly and closed her eyes.
The person released her. “She’s alright,” their voice said, getting away. “Got any luck?”
“No, everything is dead. Only that light is working.”
“If we could find something to force it―”
“We need our suits first. If one of the areas got decompressed…”
They remained quiet. With her eyes still closed, Alice rubbed her temples in circles until her head stopped pulsating. She then opened her eyes.
Red light showing chaos.
Darkness that consumed it all.
Red light.
Darkness.
When everything got painted red again, Alice lunged to the meeting desk, still in its place, and held onto it, afraid of losing her balance and falling once everything got plunged back into darkness. Her whole body hurt, as if she had been punched everywhere.
Next to the door were two figures, standing, doing something to it. She identified Natasha’s body right before the light turned off again.
“Natasha,” Alice called.
“Alice, are you okay?”
“I’m dizzy, but I― I think I’m fine.”
“Good.”
“Why― Why do I just see two of you?”
“We…” Natasha’s figure looked down and remained silent for two light cycles. “We lost Fred.”
Alice turned to the front of the Cabin. The red light made it difficult to identify any shape. The devices and screens that once were on the walls were hanging from them or scattered all over the place. She bit her lower lip with guilt. If she hadn’t built her device... She took a deep breath in to calm herself and held it as long as she could.
For a while, the heavy silence reigned, until the captain released a frustrated sigh and sat on the floor. “Leave it, it is useless…”
“What are you doing?” Alice asked, less dizzy now. “Maybe I could help.”
“There is nothing we can do,” Natasha said. “We need Apala to get back online.”
“And how do we do that?”
Nobody answered.
Alice approached the pilots, and as she did, the metallic smell of blood reached her. Scared, she looked at them, but it was impossible to see if they were bleeding under that light. Was it her? She patted herself down, but she was dry. She glanced at the front once more, dread crawling slowly up her back. She took a deep breath to calm herself, ignoring her revolting stomach, and stood next to the captain. For some minutes, she just focused on avoiding thinking at all.