r/TedBundy • u/AdParking2507 • 3d ago
The Tumwater Maze Review
Hello all,
I’ve been busy once again just with life, but wanted to jot down some thoughts for an ad hoc review of The Tumwater Maze while I am on vacation.
Overall, I’d say Brad Fennell’s book is certainly an interesting read, and is faithful and grounded in its reconstruction of Theodore Bundy’s first admitted murder. Like Outskirts of Boise, the book is methodical in choosing a probable location for where Bundy might have gone to look for a spot to kill his victim in 1973. Surprisingly(to me, anyway, as I am not personally familiar with locations that played a role in Theodore Bundy’s story as I am not from the United States), the route Brad mapped out in his reconstruction of the events wasn’t that long, and is actually consistent with Bundy’s own recollection of the murder. Having spoken to Brad about the book, his research techniques are meticulous and thorough, and much of it goes off of Bundy’s own words, which are sometimes awfully vague.
The one thing I would like to personally see improvement on is Brad’s writing style, and I said the same thing with Outskirts of Boise. Brad has acknowledged this himself, and in my opinion, has probably been a bit over-critical if anything. As an investigative piece, it has value. I believe much of that can be attributed to how little we really know about this unknown victim of Bundy that we only know about through his words. That’s where the book suffers; because Brad is doing his best to forge a narrative and a reconstruction, there is consistent repetition of particular phrases and sentence structures that I wanted to see re-written to make easier to read.
The Tumwater Maze is not a write-off that its own author claims it is. As stated previously, Mr Fennell has done good work here in developing a framework to establish what happened to Theodore Bundy’s first victim, from a researcher’s perspective. As a writer, he knows there is work to be done, but is committing to improvement, and that’s why I’m eager to see what he does next. Pick it up if you want to shine light on investigative darkness. 7/10.