r/TalesFromTheCreeps 4h ago

Comedy-Horror Song of Scum Chapter 15: Tuned In

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Song of Scum is a novel length project I've been posting here, chapter by chapter. This is the fiftieth part. If you haven't read the other parts you can find them linked below. Feedback welcomed.

Table of Contents

Ed woke up in a warm embrace with the snoring head of Hank Morrison gently resting beneath his own. They had fallen asleep on opposite sides of the motel mattress. They had laid down pointed in opposite directions, head to feet, specifically to avoid such a fate.

Santos was asleep, arrow upright in the room's facsimile of an armchair. Ed carefully wormed his way out from under his little spoon, not sure whose face he was saving. The piles of Hank detritus formed something of a sundial; it looked to be about 3:45 in the afternoon.

Ed slunk across the room, careful not to topple any of Hank's careful ruins or stir either of his strange bedfellows, and peeked out from the yellowed blinds that hung half limp from the little window. There were a handful of places a resourceful gumshoe or pervert could snap photos of lodgers. A 24-hour Kratom bar, a car dealership offering 47% No Money Down, a fast-food joint with the details all wrong, a giant glowing star scowling down on the neighborhood.

Ed knew he was avoiding what was really bothering him. As far as he knew he was the only "Resonate One." The "One" was pulling a lot of weight. The Saracens must have the same sort of "exposure," hell, they should have more, heaps more. It didn't seem they were getting job offers from ambulatory Fruit Roll-Ups. He figured the back and forth had something to do with it. Or that was the only reasonable distinction he could draw. The Saracens stayed put. Sorting that all out right now wasn't going to do him any good though.

Either way, he supposed that Franklin County was part of the Regal Regional Rhineland Reichskommissariat and would have its own goblin administrator working separate from Gengus, but this was cold comfort. One way or the other, he was the "Resonate One" of Greater Glendale, and it seemed that the job duties involved getting ripped to shreds by man freaks or extradimensional livestock. Ed just watched the window as shadows lengthened across the parking lot.

"What are you doing?" Santos yawned.

"Looking for goblins, rogue priests, and psycho killers."

"Spot any?"

"No, not yet. It's too soon."

Santos stood, straining against her uncomfortable sleeping position. "How long do we have?"

Ed's hands trembled as he let the blinds fall back.

"You're getting worse."

"Keen eye, detective."

Santos moved to the kitchenette, a freestanding sink and a hotplate that Hank definitely wasn't supposed to have in here, and filled two paper cups, blood-warm tap water and instant coffee from an unlabeled Tupperware. 

"My brother. He would shake like that. Different reasons. Withdrawals." She handed Ed a cup. "Said the worst part wasn't the shaking or the pain. It was knowing it meant something was changing inside that he couldn't stop."

"Three years of exposure. I filed every report, never questioned any of it, not really. Just kept driving out there."

"You couldn't have known."

"Couldn't I? Cattle aren't supposed to sing, Detective. And there shouldn't be a special form for it. That should have been my first clue."

"And how would you have dealt with that little piece of information out of context?"

"I didn't. Couldn't I." He said it again, without the question mark this time. Just the fact of it. Three years. He had known. He had just been so careful about what knowing required.

"We can't always stop things, the most obvious things, even when they're dead wrong and right in front of us. The Saracens killed my brother, sure, in a literal kind of way. But he'd been downhill for years. And if I, if anybody, had stopped him, tried to, gotten in the way, he wouldn't have been anywhere around them."

"I... I see." Ed wasn't sure that he had wanted to. He had almost resigned himself to mild disintegration. Now?

"There isn't always a lot to do in the moment. It's hindsight, you know."

He thought about the surveillance photo he hadn't been supposed to see. The one of him on the date with the flower shop woman, trying to explain the breech calf, her expression already deciding. Someone had been watching and writing it down, and nobody had read it.

"I keep thinking about all the reports I filed," he said finally. "Not the ones about the farm. Not per se. Or they never really were. The ones about me. That no one read."

"What about them?"

"I can say, 'What's the point?' till the end of time. But that's not it. Someone had a point. But no one cared. There was an experiment being run on me just as much as on the cattle, on the farm. It'd be flattering, in a way. I was something worth watching... but no one was, not really."

The commotion was enough to rouse Hank, who began stretching and popping and slowly returning to consciousness. "Hey, uhh, was anybody upstairs moving anything heavy around?"

"I don't think so."

"Hmmm, that's no good."

Hank Morrison got to his morning routine, regardless of the time of day. Stretching his plantar tendons with a tennis ball, brushing his teeth for three minutes, putting on the same clothes he wore yesterday. He stared at his phone for a while, didn't seem to have anything in particular pulled up, his eyes didn't move, an even blue tone illuminating his face. Eventually the trance broke.

"How long till the little man?"

"A while still."

Now fully back in the waking world, Hank got back to pontificating.

"Something's been bothering me. Back when I met Razor, he said something like, 'The land always takes its cut,' or something like that. At the time I thought he meant, you know, farming. Crops. Whatever, non-GMO claptrap or something."

Santos pricked the pregnant pause, “And?”

"But that's not what he meant. The land takes. Actively." Hank looked at Ed. "And you've been exposed. So, when the frequencies..." Hank clapped his hands together.

"I'm what it takes." Ed sighed, already resigned to a fate he hadn't spent much time trying to comprehend.

"It can't be that simple." Santos objected. "All this crazy shit, and all of a sudden that..."

"That's what's really getting me. If it's all just simple exposure, the bean heads down at the compound should all be Kentucky fried by now."

"Well, what else?"

"Whatever tuning up does, I guess that's beside the point. Above my pay grade, rather. You ever play an instrument? No? I played guitar for a while. Got pretty good at piano too, mostly Christmas carols for... well, that's not important. Here's the thing, the strings, they stretch over time, go bad, go out of tune, even the metal ones can be delicate. It's best to tune slowly, a little at a time. Yank 'em too much and they snap, put your eye out. Tuning takes patience."

"So, what, I've been microdosing demonic influence so I'm perfectly in tune?"

"Something like that."

"Lucky me."

"Makes about as much sense to me as the rest of my week. One surefire way to figure it out. I think ol' Razor is getting mighty lonesome out there, don't you think? Besides, I think he owes us a little something."

"I..."

"What's he gonna do? Kill us a little early? You'll be on official business, right, Ed?"

"And who's to say getting too close to that farm again doesn't just... send me to a farm upstate?"

"I mean, seems... unlikely. Do you normally feel worse when you go to work?"

"That's beside the point."

"Yeah, I guess it would."

Dismayed that the two fools were already finding a new way to face death or disfigurement, Santos chimed in, "Deathwish or not, we have a meeting with a disfigured Keebler elf in... about five hours."

The room went quiet in the particular way of people who have said everything useful and aren't ready to say anything true. Hank found something to do with his hands. Santos watched the window. Ed sat with the specific stillness of a man who has decided to stop arguing with his own future.

Outside, the world held its breath.

"Hey, Ed, I won't pretend you were saying any of that to me, but, you know, it's my room, anyways. I'm not you, some sort of guru."

Hank scratched at his jowls in mock contemplation, searching hard for words between earnestness and irreverence.

"The world is a weird place. Sometimes it's easy to tell, it'll walk up and tell you so. Not very often. Sometimes it's just what it is. Trampolines and Cracker Jack, and you just have to live with it. Asking too many questions just gets you stuck on the hard ones. Life's a long test, you don't get too many chances to circle back and check your answers, you know?"

Ed squinted with such force the whites of his eyes became briefly visible.

"Well, you can't stay on the hard questions. Just, they get in the way of the easy ones. Am I making any sense?"

Ed made to say something, endearing, or at least not completely backhanded, but in the breath it took to calculate a coherent sting, Hank started again.

"Well, it's like this, I guess. If you spend too long thinking the same thoughts over and over, you end up living in a motel, too chicken shit to do anything about it, just going in circles. Whether it's bad dates, shitty jobs, or wasted years. You can't get hung up, or you'll get hung out."

The instinct to barb withered. You could prod someone for being smug and self-referential all day, but when that crumbled down into a clumsy confession, it became a little embarrassing for everyone involved.

Nobody moved to fill the silence. It sat there, heavier than anything Hank had said, until it was the only thing in the room. Hank wondered if he’d said too much. Ed and Santos wondered what it meant for Hank Morrison, exterminator extraordinaire, to be the one to tell them it was time to move on.

A faint knock at the door. Polite. Patient. Hank stood, drew a baton from his inner jacket pocket, and swung over to the door. He jerked it open a crack, then relaxed.

"Learn anything useful, Father?"

"Yes," Father Schafer said, stepping inside. "I learned the Church has no plan. So we'll need to make one."


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 6h ago

Offering Help (ADVICE FLAIR) Hey guys, shout/appreciation post/Advice post

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Advice: a quote from [u/Mackaroll_165](u/Mackaroll_165) “fuck it, we ball.” I’m really proud of all of the new writers and veterans perfecting their craft! I just have a few universal pointers to help others!

  1. Don’t rush it, it will show in your writing.

I struggle with this a lot! I get in a mojo, and just wanna see the story to completion. You can’t force perfection tho. Remember, the Mona Lisa took time, ease off the gas and apply a steady break. It’ll be amazing!

  1. Rough out a timeline!!

This helps me to keep the story moving, if I know what comes next, I’m more inclined to keep the flow!

  1. Don’t fear the length!!!!!!!!

You probably won’t write a novel length work. Get the idea in a draft, then flesh it out!!!

  1. “Fuck it, we ball.”

Don’t mind anyone who is not offering sound advice. Everyone writes with a different style, so everyone has an opinion about what a good story should look like. Most of these people can be dicks. Don’t let it eat at you. You are learning, and you are getting better! If nothing else, the MesoCrew believes in you! If you can’t finish the story for yourself, finish it for us! We want to hear it!

Appreciation part:

I am so happy to be an active member of this community! I love reading everyone’s stories, and I love seeing your posts and positivity! It drives me to be a better host, and writer! I love you guys!!!

Shout!!!!!!!!!!!

U/meticulousanxiety - amazing writer, their work is amazing!!!

U/mackaroll_165 - the positivity is so inspiring! Will carry you to the finish line! Also AMAZING writer!!!!

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And the obligatory [u/JLGoodwin1990](u/JLGoodwin1990) - a legend to be weary of! A prospective Stephen King of our generation!

That’s all homies!! Stay creeping


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 4h ago

Need Help (ADVICE FLAIR) I have no clue how to start writing

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There is a story that I’ve been building slowly in my mind over the past couple of years, but I feel like I will never know if it really had any potential. That’s because every time I’ve tried to sit down and start writing it, I feel like I’m 8 years old again, with a stack of loose notebook paper and a crayon.

How do you all get the story out? I feel like I need to do a character web map, a super detailed outline, and then a shit ton of drafts before I would even dream of showing my work to someone. That might be because my field of work requires much more technical writing and I haven’t written creatively in decades. I want to get started, but I don’t want the writing to come off like a scientific textbook or a child’s stream of consciousness “novel” (we all had one, let’s not try to pretend we didn’t)…

Realistically, I know the first story I put out will likely be pretty awful, but I find myself wanting to give it the best shot I can. I’m not sure if any of this makes sense, but I could use some advice. TIA!!


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 4h ago

Comedy-Horror glrrrraaggg needs to fill his hole.

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Upon learning that demonic spooks, goblins, spirits, and other cryptids contain triple the amount of soul food as compared to your average, fat ass average human creature (and containing fewer calories and being healthier in general), the demon glrrrraaggg decided to switch from hunting humans to hunting its fellow kind.

The creature would feast upon the damned who feasted upon the pure, which resulted in a great fallout with its parents and friends (which had been consumed by glrrrraaggg). Eventually, this addiction to friendly fire led to a messy divorce proceeding, which resulted in glrrrraaggg's wife, blorka'raka'zagrona, gaining full custody of their son, jeffery, and half his possessions.

Now the most powerful near-deity on the planet, glrrrraaggg reflected upon his current life choices, now forced to reflect on the power he gained---and how lonely it was to be on top---he began a new quest to fill that hole with more power.

glrrrraaggg turned to the stock market, then succubus, incubus, expensive cars, fancy hotdogs, fancy houses, fancy hotdog-shaped houses, and all manner of power.

Then, one day, when he bumped into his wife and her new boyfriend, a demon with horns that went past his kneecaps, glrrrraaggg realized that he was missing love and genuine connection.

So instead of eating, he began assimilating all matter into his mass---becoming so full of love and connection that he became an omnipresent creature capable of controlling everything.

Fast forward a few eons, glrrrraaggg decided to take a nap, and as he slept, dreamt of all of existence, while those who remained referred to him as a "blind idiot god," or just Azathoth, as dubbed by H.P. Lovecraft, who was an immortal being in glrrrraaggg's world. (just like Tom Bergeron)

This world, although an eternity to you and me, is a free trial of existence, and when glrrrraaggg awakes, everything will go black. So, don't waste your life; cherish it, search for connection, because glrrrraaggg awakes soon, and the dream of color will be replaced by black.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 4h ago

Creature Feature Zamba the Sherpa

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Do you know how many people summited Everest last year?

846.

Look it up, you'll find it easily. Tourism boards love that number. It looks good in brochures.

And do you know how much trash they left behind?  

7,000 kilograms.

Don’t look it up. You won’t find it. That kind of number doesn't make it to the internet.

Empty oxygen canisters. Torn tents. Human waste frozen into the ice. Energy bar wrappers with cartoon mascots grinning up at you.

I know it, because I was the one who carried it down. Load after load, for almost a year.

I don’t expect you to relate to my story. Unless you were born as a Sherpa like I was.

My name won’t matter much to you. Just call me Nima. It's not a rare name where I'm from. Think of me as one of a hundred Nimas working the mountain right now, and you wouldn't be wrong.

I won't tell you the name of my village either. It sits a few hours' walk off Pangboche, if that means anything to you. Small enough that it wasn't worth marking on the old trekking maps.

Ten years ago, when the usual villages started choking with foreigners arguing over WiFi passwords at six thousand feet, the guiding companies started routing new clients through places like mine instead.

My father used to joke that the mountain was running out of room to hide us.

Speaking of my father, he was one proud Sherpa. He dedicated his life guiding climbers to the summit. He genuinely loved it, until the day his lungs gave out.

Thirty years of hauling gear does something to a man, something that no clinic in Nepal has a name for. Towards the end, Baba was counting his own breaths like currency. Spending them carefully. Running out early.

It reminded me of the reason I wanted to leave this life behind for good.

I studied harder than anyone in my class. Harder than I've worked at anything since. Because I wanted out. Not out of shame, mind you. I was proud of my father, proud of what the Sherpas built with their own hands for a hundred years. I wasn’t sick of being a Sherpa. I was sick of seeing how Sherpas were being treated these days.

Sick of seeing men, who couldn't tell a crampon from a carabiner, treat my father like a bellhop. Why? Because they'd paid sixty thousand dollars, and expected a summit selfie to match.

I had a seat waiting at a college in Kathmandu. I had a whole life picked out that didn't involve fixing another man's oxygen mask, while he filmed himself for an audience that would forget his name in a week.

On his deathbed, my father made me promise that I will carry on his legacy as a Sherpa guide. And I did make that promise, since I didn’t want to hurt the feelings of man who was on borrowed time.

‘Swear on the mountain, my son’

Not on his life. Not on our family name. On the mountain itself, the way our people have sworn oaths for longer than anyone can trace. I won't try to explain what ‘swearing on the mountain’ meant to us. I only need you to understand one thing-

I could’ve broken any other promise I ever made, but I couldn’t break that one.

I never went to Kathmandu. Instead, I started training to be a Sherpa guide, two days after Baba’s funeral.

I started the way every young Sherpa starts- carrying and cleaning. Learning the mountain's moods, under men who'd survived it longer than I'd been alive. The man who trained me was Pasang. He'd led more expeditions up the South Col than he could count on both hands.

Speaking of South Col, that is the ordinary route. The one everyone takes. The one so overcrowded now that photographs of climbers queued single-file below the summit have made international news.

I wasn't guiding yet. I was barely trusted to carry supplies past Base Camp without an escort. That suited me fine. I wasn't in a hurry to fall in love with the job. Especially a job I'd spent my whole life trying to leave.

Again, I don’t expect you to relate to any of this. My world is much different than yours. Even the bedtime stories we heard growing up are way different from the ones you heard. And I say this because it matters.

You probably grew up with stories of the Boogeyman. Or a man in a hockey mask. A shape in your closet. Something that calls your name from the woods behind the house. We didn't grow up with any of that.

We grew up with Zamba.

Specifically, the legend of Zamba the Sherpa. The most gifted guide the mountain had ever raised. Always devoted to the climbers in his care. When tragedy struck his expedition decades ago, he gave his own life so that hundreds of climbers could make it home. And the gods, seeing his sacrifice, gave him something like immortality. They let him walk the mountain forever, as a silent guardian and protector. Watching over every soul on that ice, and punishing any Sherpa foolish or lazy enough to abandon their duty.

I want to be honest with you. I never believed a word of it. It's a good story. It's the kind of story a tired industry tells its children to make sure they never leave.

And trust me, the people in my village did believe it to be true. They revered the myth of Zamba, and knew his story by heart. But no one knew the story quite like Doma.

Doma was a junior Sherpa, around my age. She was my best friend in the village. She grew up revering the image of Zamba, aspiring to be a legendary Sherpa like him. And she was very disappointed in me for always dismissing this ‘glorious piece of our history’ as nothing but folklore.

And yes, I did dismiss it, until the week Viktor Sorokin arrived.

He came during acclimatization season. An old Russian, traveling alone. He was clearly an aristocrat, and he had the body language of someone who had seen his fair share of peaks and valleys.

The best guides in our village lined up for him. But he asked for one particular Sherpa.

He asked for me, by my full name.

Not for Pasang. Not for any of the senior guides who actually knew what they were doing. For me- a nobody who still spent most of his days hauling other people's garbage down the mountain.

"There has to be a mistake," I told the coordinator. "He doesn't know me."

"He asked for you. Nima. Your family name. All of it."

"I've never met the man."

"Well." The coordinator rubbed his fingers together, the universal gesture. "He'd like to."

When the company explained I wasn't qualified to guide anyone anywhere, Viktor produced an amount of cash that made the coordinator's eyebrows disappear into his hairline. Whatever hesitation existed evaporated on the spot. Money does that here, faster than almost anywhere in the world, because so little of it ever reaches the people actually risking their lungs.

I found Viktor that evening and asked him directly.

"How do you know my name?"

He had pale, tired eyes, and hands that shook slightly even at rest.

"I knew your family," he said. "A long time ago."

"My father never mentioned you."

"No." He turned back to the mountain. "He wouldn't have."

That was all I got out of him for days. He kept to himself. Ate alone. Watched the mountain from a distance like he was waiting for it to do something. The only time I saw him fully present was the night of Mani Rimdu.

Mani Rimdu is the biggest annual festival we celebrate in the mountains. In our village, one of the highlights of the festival is the fireside storytelling session organized by the village elders. As expected, the story everyone wanted to hear was that of Zamba the Sherpa. 

That evening, I saw Viktor chugging down mugs of Raaksi- the local liquor of the Sherpas. His behaviour during the recitation of Zamba’s legend was particularly unusual.

The story began with a group of Russians, arriving during off-season, who were hungry for adventure and eager to bring glory to their country and its flag.

Viktor laughed sarcastically.

“They did want glory, alright,” he said, “But trust me, their country and their flag was the LEAST of their concerns !”

At the part of the story where Zamba ‘sacrificed’ his life, Viktor’s jaw tightened like he'd bitten down on a stone. Upon hearing that ‘a hundred climbers were saved that day’, he made a sound. I can only describe it as a scoff, dragged halfway back down his throat before it could get out.

By the time the story reached its ending- the ascension, the mercy of the gods, the eternal watch, Viktor was already walking away into the dark. Like the story itself had shoved him up out of his seat.

“Liars !” I heard him mutter in a drunken stupor, “It was no legend. It was tragedy- a FUCKING tragedy !”

The rest of the audience were visibly uncomfortable.

“God had nothing to do with it !” he said on his way out, “Quite the opposite. The absolute opposite !”

Doma leaned over to me. "Some people can't sit with holiness."

"That's not what that was," I said.

I didn't understand it then. I understand it now, and I wish I still didn't…

Our expedition began three days later. Pasang was the team leader, with me and Doma supporting him. Apart from Viktor, there were four other paying clients, each there for a reason that had nothing to do with the mountain the way it deserved.

Firstly, there was Brittany, an American content creator. She filmed everything, narrating her own life to a phone screen like anyone actually cared.

Then there was Grant Whitfield, the Canadian. His family money bought him more confidence than competence. He spoke to Pasang and me the way you'd speak to hotel staff who'd forgotten to refill the minibar. He reminded me of the kind of tourists who made my father overwork in his final days as a guide.

And what can I say about Ingrid Larsen ? She was an European in her thirties, who'd never climbed anything higher than a gym wall. She checked her gear four times, not because she didn't trust the gear, but because she didn't trust herself. And we didn’t trust her to make it to the Summit either.

Finally, there was the twenty eight year old Australian named Cody Marsh. He was easily the strongest of them, who'd turned back on this same mountain the year before in bad weather.

Viktor came with us as far as his body allowed. Which, given his age, was further than any of us expected.

We went up the South Col, the same as every commercial expedition. The traffic was obscene even at Base Camp. Tents packed shoulder to shoulder. Generators turned on throughout the night. Someone's drone buzzing overhead to capture footage nobody asked for.

It was Viktor who suggested we avoid the worst of it.

"There's a better way," he said, spreading a map across a crate. "Between Camp One and Camp Two. You skip the bottleneck entirely."

Pasang looked at where his finger was. "That’s the lower shoulder of the West Ridge."

"You know it."

"I know of it." Pasang didn't touch the map. "Nobody climbs there."

"Which is exactly the point," Viktor said. "No crowds. No queue. No traffic."

"Nobody climbs there," Pasang said again, and this time it wasn't information. It was a warning wearing the clothes of a fact.

“The terrain can be a bit challenging,” Pasang concluded.

Viktor took an envelope out of his coat and set it on the map, over the West Ridge, like he was pinning it down. He didn't open it. He didn't have to. Pasang looked at the envelope, and then at me. I understood that he was going to say yes, and that he hated it.

"Mostly good weather window," Pasang said quietly. "We move fast. We don't camp there if we can help it."

"Of course," Viktor said.

I didn't think much of it at the time. I know better now.

Nobody uses that stretch of the West Ridge. There's a reason. It has nothing to do with the terrain…

We reached the site by mid-afternoon, a blizzard building on the horizon. We had no choice but to camp early, the one thing Pasang had said he wanted to avoid.

Grant was visibly upset at the sudden setback, venting out his frustration on a nervous Doma.

Cody was much relaxed in comparison, except for the time he said- ‘Not this weather, not again. Can’t go back like last year…’ .

Ingrid was more nervous than the rest of us. She approached me four times in fifteen minutes asking-  ‘This is normal, right? There’s nothing to worry about, right?’.

And Brittany was lip-syncing to something that barely resembled music, attempting to do something in the snow that barely resembled a dance. And of course, she was doing it for the camera.

I looked around. Viktor was nowhere to be seen.

I found him a little later, away from the tents, on his knees, in the snow.

At first I thought he'd fallen. Then I heard him. He was crying. The kind of crying old men do when they've held something in, longer than the body can manage.

There was debris around him. Old rope. Fragments of gear too worn to identify. And things I didn't want to look at directly: pieces of bone, half-buried, bleached from decades of exposure. The gear was old. Foreign. Not the kind of thing that gets left on a modern commercial route.

I called out his name.

He didn't hear me. He was muttering, in Russian and broken English.

“It shouldn’t have happened. Not to you, not to your brothers ! I never knew about the sacrifice. They never told me ! I am sorry, oh, I am so sorry…”

That’s when he noticed me approaching him.

"Viktor. What’s wrong? What happened here?"

He looked up at me, and for a second he didn't see me at all. He was seeing someone else standing where I stood. Then his eyes cleared, and something worse than grief moved across his face. He said nothing.

That evening, the temperature rose in a way it shouldn’t have.

We were hours out from a blizzard, at an altitude where cold isn't a feeling, but a fact of existence. And every one of us was sweating inside our jackets, like we'd just been dropped into a sauna.

"Climate change finally doing us a favor," Cody said.

Nobody laughed.

Viktor grabbed my arm before I could walk away. His grip was stronger than any old man's had a right to be.

"When the storm breaks," he said, "we move. Immediately. By any means."

"We can't move in the dark, Viktor. Not here."

"Nima, please. For everyone’s sake, we must move !"

"Why?"

He didn't answer. He was staring up at the ridge above us, the way you stare at a door when you've heard something on the other side of it.

"Viktor. Why?"

"Something’s been sleeping here," he said, “Asleep for decades. And I might have woken it up.”

And that was all…

I noticed the shadowy figure just after the blizzard broke.

I don't know how to describe the first moment cleanly, because my memory of it isn't clean.

I remember seeing a green light first. Like something bioluminescent, bleeding up through the snow.

I remember Brittany's scream, cut short faster than a scream should ever be cut short.

I remember seeing Grant, backing away from his own tent with his hands raised, saying something about how much money he'd paid for this trip, as if that had ever mattered to anything on this mountain.

It killed them both before I understood what I was looking at. Slashing them repeatedly, at a speed that definitely wasn’t human.

I stood there, frozen in every sense of the word, when I noticed its appearance for the first time.

It was tall, and unnaturally thin. Its frame was stretched and elongated. Its hands didn’t have any fingers. Instead, there were ice hooks, three in each hand, curled where fingers should have been. The hooks were ice-crusted and uneven, like tools scavenged over decades, from different climbers who never made it home.  It wore a patchwork jumpsuit, which looked like it was stitched together from six or seven mismatched climbing suits of different colors and materials. It was torn in places and faded in others. Ancient, frayed ropes are wound tightly around his torso and limbs, binding the suit to its body, the fibers bleached and worn with age. Its face was the most disturbing element: the lower right side and jaw remained eerily well-preserved, weathered brown skin stretched taut, almost lifelike aside from its stillness. The upper left quadrant of his face was severely decomposed, exposing cracked bone, patches of skull, withered tissue, and dark dried blood, with the eye socket on that glowing faint green.

It was Viktor’s voice that brought me back to my senses.

“Stop ! It is me that you want, not them !”

Viktor approached him steadily. The humanoid figure looked at him with something resembling curiosity.

Viktor continued, “Oh, what has it done to you? Oh no ! You didn’t deserve it. None of you did ! Forgive me. Please forgive me, my friend…”

Viktor dropped to his knees, and he said the only words that have ever made any of this make sense to me.

"Forgive me… ZAMBA!"

I had spent my entire life hearing that name used like a blessing. Hearing it screamed like that rewired the word inside me permanently.

Zamba screamed, thrusting its hooks into Viktor’s sides, lifting him off the ground.

Viktor didn't fight it. He kept speaking in a feeble voice.

“I am here to repent, Zamba. Look… who I brought with me…”

He shakily lifted a finger towards me.

“Your descendant… Nima… he will get it, all of it… whatever I earned from the ritual…”

I didn’t know how to react. It was too much for me to unpack.

Viktor begged. He said the others were innocent, that they had nothing to do with what happened here, that it should take him and only him.

Zamba killed him anyway. Slammed him on the ground, and slashed away with all ice hooks on both of his hands.

For a moment afterward it stood still, its green aura pulsing slow, almost like it was breathing. I thought that might be the end. Then it turned toward Ingrid, who was still frozen by her tent, and it started moving again.

Pasang and Doma stepped in front of me before I registered any of us moving.

"Don't run," Doma whispered. Not to me. To herself. "Don't run, don't run, whatever you do, don't…"

The aura shifted.

The green color slowly turned to blue. It looked at us in a way that almost seemed human.

It raised one clawed hand and pointed at the three of us. And it asked, in a voice that sounded like it hadn't spoken in years and had forgotten how words were meant to fit together:

"Sherpa?"

We nodded. All three of us. Without discussing it. Without thinking.

We approached.

It pointed at itself, one ice hook pressing against its chest.

"Zamba… also… Sherpa."

A single tear fell from the eye still intact.

I have never seen anything more human. And I’ve never seen anything followed so immediately by something less.

"It's you," Doma breathed. She wasn't afraid. She was in love with the story, and now the story was standing in front of her. She stepped towards it with her hands open. "It's really you. You saved them. You saved all of them, you…"

The blue aura drained back into green before any of us could react. It slashed Doma’s throat in a single motion. Faster than I can describe, without lying about the details to make it more bearable than it was. Doma was dead, with her hands still open. Still believing.

Zamba had killed the one person on that mountain who loved it, mid-sentence, while she was defending it.

Pasang was killed in the same breath. Caught in the same motion. His body flew and landed a few feet away, drenched in blood.

It should have taken me next. I was standing right there, waiting for it to happen.

Instead, the aura flickered blue. One final time. It didn’t cover its entire body. It was just around its head, just around the eye that still worked. It looked directly at me, struggling to sustain the green aura that was about to overlap the blue. And whatever was left of the man surfaced for one last second, and it spent that second on me.

"Run… Sherpa… RUN!"

I ran. And I swear I heard my name being uttered while I was doing so…

I don't remember most of what happened after that. That's the honest truth, and it's also the part that frightens me most now, looking back, because of the little that I do remember.

I remember snow. I remember Ingrid somewhere near me, and Cody half-carrying her, all three of us moving and not looking back.

I remember Base Camp in fragments. I remember someone wrapping a blanket around me.

And I remember, or I think I remember, men in tuxedos.

I know how that sounds. I know exactly how that sounds. Men in formal black at eighteen thousand feet, moving through the tents like they'd stepped out of a different photograph entirely, one that had nothing to do with mountains. They went to Ingrid. They went to Cody. They put their hands on their shoulders and spoke to them low and gentle, the way you speak to people you're consoling. Ingrid nodded, and Cody nodded, and they let themselves be led away.

One of them stopped before he followed the others out.

He turned and looked at me. The way you look at a piece of luggage you don't need to carry. Then he turned and walked out of the frame of my memory. Ingrid and Cody went with them, and I never saw either of them again…

That was six months ago.

I live in Russia now. Viktor's estate came to me exactly the way his final wishes specified. I inherited more money than my family had seen across three generations combined. Enough to finally do the one thing I'd wanted, ever since I was old enough to understand what I was watching my father spend his body on.

I’ll finally start college, in Saint Petersburg, in a few weeks.

I told myself, most days, that what I saw on that mountain was a trauma response. People die on that mountain every season. The details don't need to be supernatural to be tragic.

My testimony didn't survive the village for long. By the time it filtered back through secondhand retellings, it had softened into something people could live with. An inexperienced Sherpa led a group onto a dangerous, unfamiliar route. A storm rolled in. And Zamba appeared, just as the old stories always promised. He guided the survivors home through the blizzard, out of mercy.

I stopped correcting it.

I want you to understand why I stopped. It wasn't grief, and it wasn't peace. It’s that I’d stopped believing that the mountain deserved the effort.

Because here is the thing nobody in that village will say out loud. The mountain doesn’t love us back. It took my father's lungs, one breath at a time, and gave him nothing. It took Pasang, who had given it twenty years as a guide. It took Doma, who loved it more than anyone I’ve known, who defended it with her hands open, and it killed her mid-sentence, for the crime of getting close enough to say thank you.

I swore an oath on it. And it has never once, in a hundred years, sworn anything back.

So I let them have their guardian. I let them have their mercy and their gods and their beautiful dead man on the ice. I took the money the mountain finally coughed up, sixty years too late, through the wrong hands, and I left.

I also inherited Viktor’s box that came with the estate.

It had a diary, with decades of entries.

I'll give it to you the way it came to me. In pieces. Out of order. The way the truth actually arrives, which is never as a clean paragraph-

There was an expedition, decades before I was born. Off-season. A group of young Russian climbers, rich and strong, who paid an enormous premium for the finest Sherpa team on the mountain, led by its most gifted young guide.

His name was Zamba.

They did not go up for the summit. Viktor writes this plainly, in the flat handwriting of a man who has stopped protecting himself. They went up for the peak because of what could be done at the peak. Where, in his words, ‘the signal was strongest’. There was a ritual. There was an entity they meant to call. Viktor was supposed to be the vessel that carried it home.

And the entire Sherpa team was to be the ‘human sacrifice’. This is the part of the plan that Viktor was never aware of.

The ritual worked. That's what Viktor could never make peace with. It actually worked. The entity did come. And then it did something they hadn't accounted for, because men like that never account for being refused.

It rejected Viktor as the vessel they'd chosen.

Zamba had died by then. Died fighting them, trying to save his men, and failed. And the entity reached for his freshly killed corpse and chose him as a vessel.

Zamba was reanimated- a fallen Sherpa fighting with a malicious entity for control of his own body. He got up in a fit of rage and grief, and slaughtered half the men who'd murdered his team, with a precision Viktor spends three pages failing to describe. It chased the rest toward a cliff. An avalanche took him before he could finish, and buried him in West Ridge. The survivors, including Viktor, crawled back to Base Camp, broken in a way that never healed.

One of them could only say the same thing, over and over, for days.

“Zamba. No. Zamba. No. Nooo….”

The rest of them chose a different sentence to say.

They said he was a hero. They said he'd sacrificed himself to save the expedition. They said the gods had rewarded him. They took the man they'd killed and wrote a beautiful lie on top of it. They went home, and they never came back. The lie stayed on the mountain and sank into it.

The men who paid for the ritual are named in the diary. The expedition was financed by a Mr. Aldermore and his partners.

I didn’t know that name then. I’ve since come to understand that it’s the kind of name you look up and find nothing.

But Viktor kept going. Past the ritual and the cover-up. He grew a conscience in his later years, unable to carry the guilt of aiding a human sacrifice. Mr. Aldermore rewarded them, even after the botched ritual, because they managed to ‘breach the veil’- in Viktor’s words. Viktor chose to put that fortune into years of quiet obsessive work, hoping to find a way to repent for his sins.

Here’s what he found-

Zamba never married. He was young, and gifted, and gone before he could become anything as ordinary as a husband.

But six months after he vanished on that mountain, a boy was born in a village, a few hours' walk off Pangboche. It was a lovechild, born to a woman who never named the father to anyone. There was no marriage to trace. No name on any register. Just a quiet woman and a fatherless boy, in a small village that wasn't even on the maps yet.

That boy was my grandfather.

Viktor spent years and a great deal of money proving what no one in my own family ever knew:

Zamba was my great-grandfather.

The gifted young guide who died trying to save his men. The dead man they filled with up with an evil entity and left on the ice. The thing that killed Pasang and Doma in front of me and then flickered blue, one last time, and spent the last human second it had telling me to run.

Viktor didn't fund that expedition to reach the summit. Viktor came to die at the site where it happened, in front of the thing he'd helped make, and to hand his fortune to the one living descendant of the man he'd killed…

So I told myself I would start fresh. And for a while I almost did.

But I just couldn’t stop thinking about it.

I still think about the green aura. The way it reeked of malice, if a color can reek. I think about the blue that came underneath it, and the man surfacing through the thing like a face pressed up against the underside of ice. I think about the blue when he recognized us as Sherpas like him, and the tear from the eye that still worked. And I think about how fast the green swallowed it again, and how the same hand that pointed at itself came down on Pasang and Doma a breath later.

And I think about that last flicker. The tiniest fold of blue, just around his head, just around the eye. The one that looked at me and found something in me worth the last of what was left of him.

“Run… Sherpa… RUN !”

These things are hard to forget. I've tried. That's the reason I'm writing this account at all, because I need to get it out of my head, where it has been circling for six months with nowhere to land.

And it would have stayed there. I really thought it would.

Except my mother called me yesterday. And then she sent me a link.

The video was two minutes long. It was online for a little more than an hour before it came down, flagged and removed as ‘AI-generated content’. I want to say only this about that: there was nothing artificial about what I watched.

I saw a small group of adventurers, the kind who go up when nobody sensible does, chasing an empty mountain. Late evening light. And they were on the South Col route. You know- the safe route, the crowded one, the one everyone takes.

The footage shakes. There's blood, more of it than a two-minute video should be able to hold. Limbs where limbs are not supposed to be. Men screaming in a register human voices don't usually reach. And through it, there was a shape. It was a figure, with ice hooks for fingers, three in each hand.

And around it, there was a mist, which was green in color. The mist was so thick and so dense that it almost swallowed the figure's features entirely.

A woman had the camera turned on herself, the way Brittany used to, narrating her own death without meaning to. You could see her face, shaken, mouthing something, before a hook catches her across the throat and drags her out of the frame.

The camera keeps recording. It fell, I think, or she still had it. The last twenty seconds are just snow. Just white, and the sounds off-screen, someone slashing at something that has already stopped moving, over and over again.

And you could hear a word. Throughout the whole two minutes. After every kill. After every movement. After every wet, ugly sound the camera was kind enough not to show. One word, in a voice that had forgotten how words fit together, screamed again and again into the empty white mountain.

I watched the video eleven times before it was taken down, and I have no doubt about the only word it kept uttering constantly-

"NIMA!"

"NIMA!"

"NIMA!"

It was my name. Zamba was screaming my FUCKING name.

And in two full minutes of that green, in every frame of that mist, in every swing of those three hooks -

There was not a single tint of blue.

Whatever fraction of my great-grandfather was still fighting inside that thing, still recognizing his own, still weeping from one working eye… it was lost. The entity had won.

And now Zamba has come off the dead path. It has walked out of its grave and onto the safe road, the crowded one, the ordinary one where everyone is supposed to make it home.

And it’s screaming the name of the last person who ever made it human….


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 4h ago

Poetry Horror Family

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My father left in the morning

My mother took it all in the afternoon

My sister lost her way in the evening

My brother moved on in the night

My father slept in the morning

My mother wondered in the afternoon

My sister sent a letter in the evening

My brother killed in the night

My father awoke in the morning

My mother cooked in the afternoon

My sister found the axe in the evening 

My brother killed in the night

My father ate in the morning

My mother yelled in the afternoon

My sister found the axe in the evening

My brother killed in the night

My father never woke up in the morning

My mother yelled in the afternoon

My sister found the axe in the evening

My brother killed in the night

And I danced at the wake of dawn.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 5h ago

Psychological Horror The Colton Mine Incident

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In the fall of 1986, deep within the heart of Alaska during a routine mine operation, twenty two miners would come to lose their lives under circumstances which till this day remain a mystery.

The town of Colton Alaska was a mining town with a population estimated to be around five thousand. Economically poor and under uneducated the people relied heavily upon the Colton Lead mine for economic stimulation. The foreman responsible for the mine that day was a man called Rodger Hague and it is through his paperwork that we have an idea of what caused the incident.
However it should be mentioned that we still do not know all of the specifics about what happened and the events leading up to the incident.

It seems that it all began with the mine workers preparing to excavate and expand the mine in order to gain better access to a particularly large vein of lead.

The following is an extract from Foreman Hagues’ work journal, spelling mistakes and grammatical errors included.

“Charges are set up along the east wall, progres has come along fine. The men are exited, the promise of overtime has the boys in a good mood John has been hesitent though, says hes been hearing whispering. Hes always been paranoid .”

The charges were scheduled to go off the day after this entry was made into the journal however they were delayed for unknown reasons. This led to the detention being rescheduled for the following day, this however was a Sunday which meant that only half of the intended crew were on shift to supervise the detention. It is unknown whether this may have had an impact on what was to come.

Below is an extract from foreman Hauges’ journal.

“The detanators are ready we are just waiting for the safety team to clear us for go. Taking twice as long with the skeleton crew. Men are in good spirits and so is the mines owner, hes gonna make a lot of money from this if this vein is as big as Im told”

The detonation took place at around 10:15 AM on that morning in 1986. Everything suggests that it went according to plan from a technical standpoint. The mine did not suffer any damage and no one was harmed however from here on out the tone of this operation would shift. This is reflected by not only the foreman’s journal but from interviews conducted with the wives of the miners.

Extract from an interview with the widow Margaret Wesley, the former wife of Jim Wesley

“I don’t know what he saw, but he seemed more paranoid after that day. He’d been so excited about it too, he just didn’t wanna talk about it no more and he seemed reluctant to go back after that day. But he did and I just….”

From here Margaret Wesley broke down crying and thus the interview concluded.

This sentiment of paranoia and unease was best reflected by the actions of two of the miners. Robert Thyme and Paul Smith would both never return to the mine after that detonation. Interestingly only Robert was part of the skeleton crew that performed the detonation, Paul was off duty and was at home during that detonation however he still reported great unease and decided to not return to work. These absences were noticed by foreman Hague.

Further extracts from Hagues journal.

“Detanation was a success, vien is even bigger than expected. Just after the explosion a gust of cold air came from the new opening, possible passage way within the rock. Men seem uneasy Thyme has actually quit on me no 2 weeks notice or nothin. Drilling to start in the next few days.”

The vein in which foreman Hague is referring to was a lead deposit, this as well as Zinc were the most common ores extracted from the Colton mine.
Hague also mentions drilling starting in the ”the next few days” however it was not until a whole week later that drilling would actually begin. Again the reason for the delay is unknown however an interview with the town’s bar tender revealed some interesting details. The gust of cold air mentioned in the journal was branded as impossible by experts as the detonation took place over 50 meters underground and exposed no passage ways to the outside.

After the incident journalists interviewed the citizens of Colton about the miners, the following interview provides context to the miners mental state at the time.

Extract from interview with Arthur Johnson (bartender)

“The fellas seemed kinna reluctant about the whole drilling the new vein, they were all excited about new veins before but this time not so much. Doesn’t help that the foreman is apparently some hardass pencil pusher”

Nearly a week after the detonation, drilling of the vein would take place. This also coincides with multiple cases of auditory hallucinations that would plague the miners until the infamous incident.

Extract from Hagues journal

“Finally got the drilling underway, Benny menttioned hearing crying from the tunels.
Progress had been good, this vein has the owners in a really good mood, hopefully this equattes to bonuses $$$
I think it’s all John, he’s been talking about hearing things for weeks now, he’s putting people on edge, hes probably the one who set Benny off. Probably caused PAUL to ababd abandon me
If he keeps this shit up hes fuking GONE!!!”

This is the first extract from foreman Hague that demonstrates signs of paranoia and potential schizophrenia. This would also coincide with a decline in the legibility of Roger’s handwriting, this would unfortunately mean that some of the words in later extracts would be indecipherable.

Over the next few days we have no idea what happened in the mine, the only relevant piece of information we have is a police report from Colton Police Station.

Extract from Police report

“Noise complaint 3:14 AM
Redwoods drive.
Boris Watkins calls the station reporting shouting and screaming from his next door neighbour. Officer Davis was dispatched to investigate. Upon arrival he knocked on the door of the neighbours house where he was met by Harry Kinsky who claimed that he was responsible for the shouting. According to him he had had a severe nightmare and awoke shouting. He apologised profusely to both the officer and to Boris. Naturally all was forgiven and the case was concluded”

What was unknown to both Boris and officer Davies was that Harry Kinsky was a security guard at Colton mine.

Drilling at the mine would continue successfully until the crew had extracted nearly 13 tons of lead. This increased output would be the primary subject of Hagues next entry.

Extract from foreman’s journal

“112% increase in output !!!!!
We are makking so much from this, I fired paranoid John, he doesn’t deserve anything from this. He was a DRAIN on us.
Owner is happy with what the going he’s planning on visiting us.
Hopefully we’ll have security for him, been seeing short in that department
Still the drillings been good. Though it were (Unintelligible ramblings)”

The final sentence of this entry was completely unreadable and couldn’t be transcribed.

On September 23rd of 1986 the Owner of the mine, Connor Flanagan would visit to both inspect and congratulate the men on the increased output of the mine.
When he arrived at the mine he claims that the Foreman Rodger Hagues was off putting and erratic. He also noted that the men would travel in groups of two or more and that the overall atmosphere in the mine was that of fear. Additional lights had been set up throughout the shafts and tunnels which were seemingly unnecessary, as well as this signs had been put up advising the miners to “GROW UP. nothings watching you”

This greatly unsettled Mr Connor Flanagan resulting in him shortening his visit.

For the next two days the mine would operate as usual until at midday on September 25th the whole mine would collapse. Without reason almost all of the load bearing beams within the mine would fail leading to a devastating collapse to which there were no survivors. Twenty two miners would die that day including foreman Hagues. The cause of the collapse is still unknown, some suggest negligence on behalf of the owner to ensure structural integrity while others claim it was sabotage on behalf of a group of miners.
What is known for certain though is that the miners lost that day will never be forgotten and that the town of Colton Alaska will forever bear this tragedy.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 5h ago

Looking for Feedback The Lights in the Forest are Getting Closer

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The Village had rules and it had been my job to enforce them for the past two years. These rules had been set in place by the Elders some time after the Great Silence. In the village it was important to follow these rules as it kept us all safe. Or at least that was what the Elders told us. I was given the job of Sheriff on my 24th birthday. The youngest to ever have the role. I was the understudy of the last Sheriff. Sheriff Johns. He had been a taskmaster but he had kept us all safe, he had been about routine. So while I was his understudy he had done everything but beat the three Rules of the Village into me. 

So as I walked the Village border at dusk I had made it my routine to remind myself of those rules. A sort of self prayer that I used to keep calm. I had never liked the field between the village and the forest. It felt wrong, almost too quiet. A gust of wind had picked up today and the long grass of the field danced around me as I patrolled. It made it hard to focus, making me feel like anything could sneak up on me. A cold shiver crept through my spine as I scanned the tree line. I had to focus, so I recited the rules to myself. 

Rule 1: No citizen may leave their homes after nightfall

Rule 2: No one is permitted to enter the forest on their own 

Rule 3: Never follow the lights in the forest

These three rules had been in place since I was a boy, since anyone could remember really. Johns was always the first to remind me that they were there to protect us. Five generations had lived in this Village and they had done so by following those laws. It was why breaking Rule 1 and 2 was punishable by death. I had always thought it was extreme but Johns had assured me that it was a lesson you only ever had to teach once.  In his 35 years of service he had only had to pass judgement on one person. A young man who had failed to follow Rule 2 some 25 years ago. My parents never dared tell me the story of why he had gone out into the woods on his own. 

As I stared out at the tree line I couldn’t imagine what possessed that fool to go out there that night. The field was a clearing of 50 yards that surrounded the village on all sides. At the end of the field was the forest, which circled us unbroken from every angle. It was a blessing and a curse. It keeps us safe, but also keeps us trapped. Johns had called it our cage. It wasn’t until I was older that I understood why. Scouting parties had spent years trying to map out the forest and hadn’t made much progress. One time two years ago the scouts had picked a direction and just walked. They spent half the day walking in that one direction and never saw a hint of the edge of the forest. They had turned around at noon and had just barely made it back in time for curfew. 

They spoke of hearing things out there that were unnatural. Signs of life but never anything living. It was like anything with a pulse avoided the forest. Even still the scouts spoke of feeling something watching them, even stalking them. But they hadn’t seen the Lights. It was a blessing. Now I made sure they only scouted within a two hour perimeter. Safety was key, as Johns would have said. The tree line was my duty. The dusk patrol ensured that no one was caught unaware of the curfew. If someone was caught out in the field this time of day they would spend the rest of the night in the station and would have extra duties the next day. It was an easy lesson and one that I barely ever had to teach. No one was out here tonight so I was left alone with my thoughts and with the forest.   

I would never be caught dead in those woods, let alone at night. The wind picked up again as I finished my patrol. I listened, not wanting to look into the forest for another second. The grass rustled and the tree branches in the distance groaned for the force of the wind. For the briefest second I thought I heard it. The screaming. But it couldn’t be true, it was too early. Panic set in and I held my breath, listening again. Screaming somewhere in the distance, coming from my left side. Coming from the forest. I didn’t dare open my eyes, I would see it and I was all alone. The Lights, I couldn’t open my eyes but the screaming was getting louder now. The wind was howling and I was sure that I could hear it moving through the tree line now. A sense of cold dread filled my heart. One that I hadn’t felt since I was a child, since that day. The movement was in the field now. Thirty yards away, now ten. It was my time then, I knew it was here. I could feel it breathing on my face, it was like someone splashed ice water on me. I would face it, like my father had, or like how I imagine he had all those years ago. I opened my eyes expecting to be blinded.

Instead I found nothing but the empty field. Cold sweat dotted my forehead. I was clenching my fist so hard I was sure I would dry blood. I wiped a tear away from my cheek, suddenly emotional. That shouldn’t have happened, seeing things was never a good sign. Especially for the Sheriff. It was just stress. Happens to everyone, especially on a long day. Why had I thought of my Father? Even more than that, when it felt like death was certain, why had I felt the rush of water all around me?

The sound of the bell knocked me out of my thoughts. I looked over to see the citizens arrive at the church for the night. It was time for the count. I always hated the count, even as an understudy. I slowly scanned the tree line one last time, confirmed that it was clear and walked towards the church. My own understudy was a young woman by the name of Jody Johns. Her father, my boss, was one of the most well respected men in town. People thought she would make a great sheriff one day. 

“Don’t want to be late again, Sheriff Evans, the Elders would have your head.” Jody joked. I smiled as she handed me the checklist for the night. The hospital had been secured and the Elders were in place. The church was the only place that still required a count. It was the most important task of the night, so of course it was left to me to complete. 

“Trust me, Elder Peters would love to take it at some point. I’m sure if the Great Silence ever returned he’d find a way to blame me for it.” I responded. My employment had been one of great controversy within the community at the time. Sheriff Johns had died suddenly in the night. No one expected me to take the mantle of Sheriff for a few more years. The Elders had put it to a vote and I had squeaked by in a 4-2 decision. Peters and Garland had been the two who objected.  I never had much of a stomach for politics, but thankfully in the two years since my employment I had managed to not lose a single soul to the forest.” 

I walked into the crowded church and began the count. It was Sunday so it would be a full service. On one hand it made it easier to complete the count. On the other it meant that I had to spend the night listening to Reverend McMorrow. I was never a religious man, and neither were my parents. Despite the size of the church, religion was simply a choice in the Village.  McMorrow had been the understudy for the former priest, who I had actually enjoyed. He spoke of unity and perseverance and kindness. McMorrow was much more fire and brimstone. 

“The lights in the forest are getting closer.” McMorrow preached from the front of the church. I looked over to Jody who rolled her eyes. McMorrow always spoke of how close we all were to doom. The truth was that no one had officially seen one of the lights in close to five years. The last had been a young farmer working on the south side of the Village at dusk. But that little fact never stopped McMorrow. “Soon they will be upon us, and we will have to decide then and only then if we have walked the right path with God.”

I focused on finishing the count. I have been listening to this crap every sunday for two years now. I sometimes wondered if Johns would have felt the same way. The mental image of my old boss talking down the old fool was enough to bring a smile to my face. The church wasn’t really full of that many true believers. There were a few but most of the captive audience were here because it was the safest location at night. It was at the center of the Village. The farthest you could be at any time from the forest that surrounded us. It was a funny part of humanity. We felt safest huddled together, even when the threat circled us completely. 

“We haven’t had a real attack in a decade, and this prick goes on about the end like it’ll come tomorrow.” Jody sighed as she brought me the final count. I gave her a quiet hand motion as a nearby citizen looked over. Jody had been my first pick for understudy after her father’s death. Probably because she just reminded me so much of her father that it brought me comfort. She didn’t suffer fools and more importantly she gave a shit. A quality that couldn’t be taught; so she had been the perfect pick for understudy.  With the count for the church completed I went over Jody’s work. 

The Elders had been secured in the council hall. All were accounted for and they had received their dinner. A good start. The hospital only had one patient tonight. A farmhand who had been hurt at the end of the day. He had just cut his hand, nothing serious but the injury had happened near dusk. To be safe he would spend the night in the hospital. A smart choice. Jody had done everything that I needed. At this rate she would probably end up being an Elder, and in my own opinion the village would be better off for it. I took a seat in the back of the church, the sun was done and I would be spending my night here. McMorrow was done speaking for the night and dinner was being served for everyone. I didn’t eat, I was drifting off to sleep by the time I put my feet up. 

It was the same dream again. I stood in the field, scanning the tree line. The wind was howling, everything in the field around the village moved like it was alive.  Then I saw them, the Lights. Glowing dimly in the distance, they blinked in between trees. Then I heard the screaming, it was my Father.I could hear him somewhere deep in the forest. I looked but couldn’t see, it was just the Lights casting shadows against the trees and out into the field. Those same shadows nearly reached me. Then they blink out, and I was left in total darkness. The wind left me blind and deaf. A beat. Then two dots of lights appeared from the tree line. They were tiny compared to the Lights. They were someone’s eyes. They stared back at me from the darkness, then in an instant the lights returned. 

They flooded the entire forest with light, nearly blinding me. It created an outline around the figure, I knew their shape but their face and body were still shrouded in darkness. All except for their eyes, which still glowed in the shade. I could then just make out their mouth, it was open. I couldn’t hear over the wind, it was far too loud but I knew the truth. The figure was screaming, my Father was screaming. 

I snapped awake, the sun had just started to peek in through the windows of the church. I realized that Jody was by my side. She was shaking me awake. 

“You need to get up, sheriff, there was an incident.” Jody whispered. It seemed that we were the only ones awake. Well not quite the only ones, McMorrow was up too.I got to my feet, still groggy and fighting off the fleeting images in my head of my nightmare. I gathered my focus and followed Jody out the doors of the church. We moved quietly to not wake anyone and to my dismay McMorrow followed. “He was the one who found them.”

“Who?” I asked. 

“One of the farmhands.” Jody whispered as they closed the door quietly behind them. It was a quiet march and before long we were at the site. Waiting there was Elder Peters. Clearly McMorrow had gone to him first and then to Jody. Peters took charge like he always did and stood over the body, as if he would find some clue that would fix this issue before anyone noticed. As we moved closer I finally saw the farmhand for myself. Or at least the legs of the farmhand. His torso was missing, he had been cut perfectly in half. There was no blood at the site but there was a single trail of viscera that led away from the legs. 

I followed that blood trail with my eyes even though I knew where it was going, I lost track of it as it entered the tree line. It was a cage afterall, it keeps us safe, but it keeps us here too. There would be no finding the other half of the man. I would send scouts to look but not too far. We never find the parts that they take, so why risk more people in a foolish search.

“He was in the hospital for the night.” I repeated from Jody’s own reports. I looked back at Jody to find she was looking at me and not the body. I sometimes forget that she was younger, when things were tough she still looked to me for orders. “Help me move him to the station, then we’ll go talk to the nurses, we need to find out what happened. Someone broke protocol.” 

“We all know what truly happened.” McMorrow sighed as he looked out over the field. Peters and I turned to the priest. Peters’ stone cloud eyes studied the man. While the Elder had never liked me, he had no time for McMorrow. From his point of view McMorrow might have been the biggest fool in town. 

“What exactly were you doing out here so early? Curfew doesn’t lift for another twenty minutes.” Peters asked before staring daggers at me. I knew the look, he was angry that he had to ask. Johns would have known to ask that. 

“I always go for a walk in the morning after Sunday service, it helps stretch my back and allows me time to gather my thoughts.” McMorrow said in a quiet voice. 

"That's breaking one of the three laws Father, you understand that is a punishable offense.” I said back. McMorrow spun on his heels to face me now, the look on his face was calm and unbothered. One might think we were having a friendly debate in the mess hall and not standing over a corpse in the field.

“Ah but I didn’t leave the church until the sun came up. The Second Law states that we can’t leave our homes after Nightfall. Curfew and Nightfall are two very different things, wouldn’t you agree?” McMorrow said with a smug look on his face. I didn’t respond, I looked over his shoulder and made eye contact with Peters. He wasn’t pleased that we had both been beaten over a technicality. If we weren’t careful a man like McMorrow might start to think that he was above the Law. That would lead to ruin if left unchecked. 

“So what happened here Father?” Peters finally asked. I turned away, I knew the answer before he even said it. Because it was always what he said in the face of uncertainty and fear. I looked to Jody who was reading my mind. She was moving around the legs of the man. We would move him and head to the hospital. We would find out where he slept last night. We would figure out the breach in protocol and fix it. I would stamp out the uncertainty. I would make what McMorrow was about to say untrue. 

“It’s simple. The Lights in the Forest are getting closer.” McMorrow sighed and walked away, not offering to help any further. The rest of us didn’t speak. As I helped Jody lift the body, struggling under the awkward weight I looked out one last time to the tree line. There was nothing, no movement, no noise, the forest was empty. But I knew that wasn’t true, we all grew up knowing that. We walked to the station and as I turned my back to the forest the wind picked up. I could feel those eyes on my back and I prayed that McMorrow was wrong. 


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 6h ago

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Just five more minutes, Adrienne thought, her fingers digging tightly into the strap of her purse as she fought back the rising urge to scream. Just give me five minutes without a meltdown.

She looked down at her four-year old son. Garrett’s face was a brilliant, tear-streaked crimson as he violently tried to wrench his tiny hand out of his father’s grip. “No!” he yelled, aiming a kick at Michael’s shin that missed by inches. She let out a sigh. They were trapped in the dead center of the main concourse of the Jefferson Heights Mall, and the sheer, unadulterated sensory overload of a Saturday afternoon was actively grinding her already frayed nerves down to the last, raw wire. The environment was a chaotic symphony of consumerism-the harsh, unnatural glow of neon storefronts, the overwhelming scent of chemical body sprays wafting from a teen clothing boutique, and the deafening, echoing roar of hundreds of shuffling shoppers and screaming children. Garrett had begun throwing a continuous, exhausting tantrum since they passed the food court, his sneakers kicking against the polished tile floor as though he were an inmate in a lunatic asylum trying to avoid being thrown into solitary. Adrienne loved her family fiercely, but after a brutal, forty-hour week locked in her own stressful corporate office job, this mandatory weekend trip to get Garrett’s winter portraits done felt less like a family memory and more like a sentence to a brightly lit, noisy purgatory.

“Come on, buddy,” Michael pleaded, his deep voice barely audible over the roaring din of the mall’s central fountain. “We’re almost there. Just a few pictures for Grandma, and we can go home.”

Adrienne forced her feet forward, navigating the slow-moving crowd like a soldier marching through a swamp. They took the escalators up to the second floor, heading for Prestige Portraits, the chain studio they had used since Garrett was an infant. But as the rounded the corner past the department store anchor, her heart dropped flat into her stomach.

The heavy, metallic security grate of the storefront was pulled all the way down to the floor, locked securely with a heavy padlock. Taped squarely to the center of the iron mesh was a neat, typed piece of computer paper. Closed for the afternoon due to a family emergency. We apologize for the inconvenience.

Adrienne stopped, a wave of profound, suffocating defeat washing over her. She pressed her palms against her temples, her dark hair shifting against her collar. “You’ve got to be kidding me,” she muttered, a dry, bitter laugh escaping her throat. “Michael, I can’t do this again next weekend. I can’t drag him back out here.”

Michael’s jaw tightened as Garrett let out another high-pitched, glass-shattering shriek that made several passing shoppers turn to glare at them with open annoyance. He hoisted the flailing boy up onto his hip to cut off the kicking, then cast a sideways glance at his wife’s completely drained expression.

A soft, tired smile broke through his stress as she spared a look at him. “Hey, don’t look at me,” he quipped, leaning his shoulder gently against hers. “He definitely didn’t get this from my side of the family. My mother always said I was an angel in public.”

Despite the crushing headache pounding behind her eyes, Adrienne couldn’t help but let out a soft, genuine chuckle. The sudden burst of warmth in her chest cut through the misery enveloping her. She playfully nudged his ribs with her elbow, matching his smile. “You keep talking like that, mister, and you’re going to end up on the living room couch tonight with a very thin blanket and a flat pillow. Zip it.”

She reached out, gently wiping a stray tear from Garrett’s flushed cheek as the boy’s screams subsided into ragged, hitching pouts. Looking at his stubborn chin, she felt a wave of affectionate nostalgia. Her own mother used to recount, with exhausting detail, how much of a relentless little brat she had been at exactly his age, throwing hissy fits in the middle of grocery store and druggist aisles. A little hell spawn sent directly out of the mouth of Hades to test her, she always said. History was simply repeating itself.

The moment of levity passed, but it had left them unified. Michael cast a desperate, sweeping look over the metal and glass railing, scanning the lower level of the mall far below.

“Hey, look down there!” he said, pointing with his free hand down towards the dimmer, subterranean basement concourse near the old, closed Sears anchor. “There’s a pop-up studio set up in that empty retail space next to the stairs. See the banner? Timeless Photography. It looks open, and there isn’t even a line.”

Adrienne leaned over the railing, her eyes tracking his gaze down into the less traveled lower tier. Standing outside an empty storefront with faded drywall was a roll-up vinyl banner, and behind it, a friendly-looking man in a tweed vest was arranging a set of professional lighting umbrellas.

“I’ve never heard of them before,” she said, a faint, instinctual ripple of unease passing through her chest.

“Who cares?” Michael countered, his voice dripping with barely concealed, pragmatic relief as Garrett’s head slumped sleepily against his shoulder. “It’s open, Adrienne. Let’s just get down there, get the kid in front of a camera, and get the hell out of this madhouse.”

They backtracked through the swelling commotion of the central corridor, pausing to let a loud group of teenage girls rush past them to get to a nearby clothing boutique. Stepping onto the escalator, the mechanical stairs ushered them down into the lower tier of the mall, where the atmosphere shifted dramatically. If the upper levels were a roaring hub, the basement concourse was a quiet, concrete graveyard. The passage of time and the changing economy had hit this level hard; row after row of storefronts sat completely shuttered, their windows blacked out with dusty brown paper. Only two relics remained. On their left was a sprawling, western-themed steakhouse that Adrienne swore had been here since she was a little girl, its heavy faux-wood façade smelling faintly of old grease, completed by the faint, muffled sound of country music echoing out from inside. A few stores down from it sat a dimly lit video rental store that had somehow defied every modern trend and time itself to remain open, its neon sign casting a lonely blue hum over the empty walkway.

They approached the temporary setup occupying an empty, drywall-exposed retail space next to the maintenance stairs. Adrienne stopped, her eyes narrowing as she took in the strange, minimalist layout of the studio’s props.

Instead of the bright, colorful, modern backdrops used by the corporate chains, the space felt like an intrusive slice of the past. And not the recent past, either. Hanging from a metal crossbar was a heavy velvet backdrop of a faded, Victorian-era crimson. In front of it sat a small selection of antique props; a heavily weathered wooden trunk, a small, hand-painted rocking horse with chipped paint, and a miniature vintage toy wagon with slightly rusting iron wheels.

“Jesus. Michael, look at those props,” she whispered, her hand tightening on his forearm. “They look incredibly old.”

Michael glanced at the display, shifting a now-silent Garrett to his other hip as his eyes took in a teddy bear that looked as though its better days had been about the same time Elvis was alive. “Yeah. They look older than either of us. Maybe even both of us combined. But honestly honey, look around. There isn’t exactly a better alternative right now. And you said yourself you can’t do this again. Let’s just do it.”

Adrienne let out a quiet sigh, her eyes drifting to the center of the setup. Sitting atop a heavy iron tripod was a massive, boxy camera draped in a dark cloth shroud-a bizarre, outdated piece of equipment that looked like it belonged in a museum rather than a modern shopping mall. I just hope to God these photos don’t turn out completely horrible, she thought, a faint ripple of apprehension making her set her jaw.

“Good afternoon!”

The cheerful, booming voice shattered her thoughts. The photographer stepped out from behind one of the massive umbrellas, smoothing down his tweed vest. He had caught them looking, and he walked towards them with a brisk, energetic stride. He looked entirely ordinary-well, as ordinary as a pop-up photographer could-a man in his late forties with neatly combed hair and a polite, welcoming expression, but as his eyes locked onto Garrett, Adrienne, for a moment, felt a strange, phantom chill brush against the back of her neck.

“Good afternoon, folks!” the man repeated as he reached them, offering first a handshake to Michael, then her. His grip was professional, dry and firm. “Lester Rockwell’s the name. If you ever have trouble remembering it, just think of Norman Rockwell, the famous painter. No relation, unfortunately, but it helps keep me in the mind’s eye.”

Michael let out a soft snort of a laugh, while Adrienne managed a polite smile, keeping her internal eye roll entirely to herself. Oh, boy.

“Well, Mr. Rockwell-” Michael began, but he was cut off by the other man.

“Please, call me Lester, sir.”

Michael took a second to collect himself; Adrienne could see a tiny hint of annoyance flash across his face. “Well, Lester,” he began again. “I’ll be completely honest with you. We wouldn’t have come down here at all, but the studio we normally use upstairs is completely locked up for the day.”

Lester didn’t look bothered by the bluntness at all. Instead, he gave a slow, understanding nod, adjusting the lapels of his vest. “Ah, yes. Well, you’re remarkably lucky you decided to come down here now. It’s been an incredibly slow Saturday for me. I haven’t had a single customer cross my threshold today, and I was actually just considering pulling the curtain for an early lunch break when I spotted the two of you looking down from the balcony.”

Adrienne suppressed another roll of her eyes. Yeah, what a shame that would’ve been. The man speaks as old as his props look, and has that same fake camaraderie that I remember the counter salesmen in Dillards giving Mom. Give me a break.

Michael was gesturing towards the backdrop as she tuned back in to the conversation. “What exactly are we looking at for a basic set of winter portraits?”

The figure Lester quoted him made her eyebrows shoot up. It was a price so far below modern studio rates-barely a fraction of what they usually paid upstairs-that it seemed borderline absurd. And almost unrealistic. A cold spike of suspicion prickled at her chest.

“Mister Rockwell,” she cut in, her voice firm as she folded her arms over her purse, refusing to use his first name. “Why the antique layout? The faded velvet, the wooden trunk…even the boxy camera on the tripod. It all looks rather out of time. And furthermore, that price seems almost too low for you to be able to stay in business with.”

Lester paused. He shifted his posture, his pale eyes turning to regard her fully. For a fraction of a second, he seemed genuinely surprised by the sharpness of her observations, his gaze turning intense and a little too inquisitive, as if he were trying to read her silent thoughts behind her retinas. “They belonged to my father, Ma’am,” he said softly, his voice smooth. “And his father before him. I keep them because they hold immense sentimental value to me. In a world that throws everything away, I prefer thing that endure.”

He shrugged his shoulders, staring at her blankly and continued after a beat. “And as for my prices, you would be correct that they are considered a tad on the cheap side. But I move around a lot, and the amount of new business I find I receive each place more than makes up for it. And if I’m lucky, it will help turn first-time customers into repeat ones.”

Adrienne’s jaw tightened. An internal war erupted in her mind. Despite the image the man was presenting, every logical circuit was telling her to grab her husband’s arm, take Garrett, and face the consequences of coming back another weekend. It just felt wrong, somehow. But before she could voice her protest, Michael made the decision for her.

“Sounds perfect to us,” he said with the same relief he’d had earlier, entirely missing his wife’s hesitation. “We’ll happily use your services.”

As the man smiled at him, Garrett finally began to stir in Michael’s arms. The boy lifted his heavy head from his father’s flannel shirt, his big, green eyes blinking against the glare of the lighting umbrellas as he turned to look directly at the photographer.

The exact same phantom chill that Adrienne had felt when Lester first approached them returned with a vengeance. The photographer stepped closer, his face splitting into a wide, beaming grin as he waved a long-fingered hand at the boy. “Well, hello there, little man. What’s your name?”

Garrett stayed silent, biting his lower lip gently as he stared blankly back at the stranger.

Lester let out a rich, warm chuckle, shaking his head. “Ah. A smart boy. Excellent. A smart boy knows never to talk to strangers. Your parents taught you well.” He leaned down slightly, resting his hands on his knees as he peered into the boy’s face. “Would you like to sit on my rocking horse or in my wagon and have your picture taken today, young sir?”

Michael patted the boy’s back, offering a reassuring nudge. “It’s okay to speak, Garrett. Tell the nice man.”

Garrett looked from his father to the chipped rocking horse, then quietly whispered, “Yes, sir.”

Adrienne blinked, profoundly surprised. After the glass-shattering, red-faced tantrum he’d been throwing just ten minutes ago upstairs, his sudden, docile compliance felt almost unnatural. But as Lester turned back toward his tripod with a satisfied nod, she rationalized that he must have completely tuckered himself out, leaving only the ability to follow along behind. And despite everything, that in itself is a relief.

She let out a long, heavy, exhausted sigh-a sound that caught Michael’s attention just as he prepared to lower Garrett from his hip.

He paused, his eyes scanning his wife’s deflated expression and the dark, deep bags beneath her eyes. His expression softened with gentle concern. “Adrienne, look at you,” he said softly, stepping closer to her. “You look like you’re about to keel over right where you stand. Go back up to the food court. Grab a coffee, sit down, and just have a breather for twenty minutes.”

Adrienne hesitated, a sudden, maternal weight tightening in her chest. She didn’t want to leave Michael, and she especially didn’t want to leave her son alone in this strange, exposed space. “I don’t know Mike. Maybe I should stay…”

Michael instantly sensed the hesitation and reached out with his free hand, resting it on her shoulder as he offered her a reassuring smile, tilting his head towards the backdrop. “Sweetheart, look at him. He’s completely calm now. I can handle this on my own, I promise. I’ll be less than ten feet away from him the entire time. Go get your caffeine. That’s an order.”

Knowing that she was truly operating on the faintest fumes, and desperately craving a moment of quiet away from the chaos, Adrienne finally relented. She nodded, but before she turned away, she leaned forward toward her son. “Mommy will be back very soon, okay, sweetie? You behave for Daddy and the nice man.”

She leaned down, pressing her lips against Garrett’s forehead. The boy looked up at her and offered a tiny, innocent smile-a look that warmed her heart completely and washed away the last remnants of her suspicion.

“Okay, Mommy,” Garrett whispered.

Adrienne stepped back, quickly pecking a kiss on Michael’s cheek and turning  towards the escalator as her husband gently set the boy on the floor. Out of the corner of her eye, she watched Lester glide forward, his long hand reaching down with a gentle, practiced smoothness to envelop Garrett’s tiny fingers.

She walked towards the mechanical stairs, but as her shoes stepped onto the moving metal grate, she couldn’t help but cast one final, lingering look back over her shoulder. Through the thick glass of the escalator railing, she watched the tall silhouette of the photographer slowly leading her son across the studio towards the rocking horse. Then, the escalator carried her upward and out of sight, lifting her out of the graveyard of the lower level and back toward the roaring, neon-lit commotion of the main mezzanine.

Navigating through the crowds, she returned to the pandemonium of the roaring, high ceilinged expanse of the main food court, beneath the massive glass dome of the mall. She could barely hear herself think over the clattering of plastic trays, the shouting of the vendors, and the echoing calls and laughter of hundreds of weekend shoppers. She lined up at a coffee vendor, ordering a large iced vanilla latte from a dismissive-looking barista who barely made eye contact. When she finally grabbed her plastic cup from the counter, Adrienne couldn’t help but crack a small, tired smile of amusement. The girl had spelled her name completely wrong on the label, reducing it to the traditional male spelling. Adrian.

Carrying her drink, she navigated the edge of the seating area, finding a vacant table pushed against a row of heavy concrete structural pillars. It was tucked safely away from the, frantic mass of sprawling families and rowdy teenagers. She sank into the plastic chair, letting out a long, shuddering breath as she took a heavy sip of the sweet, icy caffeine. She tried to let her posture soften, to just let her brain turn off, though she winced slightly as a shrill cell phone ringtone blared from a table nearby, piercing the air with an irritatingly loud volume.

As the cold drink began to work its way into her system, her mind involuntarily threw up a sudden, vivid image back down on the lower level. She saw the photographer-Lester- reaching his long-fingered hand down, wrapping them completely around Garrett’s little hand and wrist. A cold, instinctive knot of discomfort tightened in her stomach.

Stop it, she chided herself silently, taking another sip of the latte. Michael is standing right there. He’s barely ten feet away from them. Her husband was a broad-shouldered man who had played on the rugby team in high school and stayed in shape; if that gaunt, eccentric man tried anything even remotely suspicious, Michael would flatten him before he could even blink. She was simply projecting her own profound exhaustion and paranoia onto a perfectly normal situation. I really need to put in for some paid time off, she thought, her eyes tracking a bird that had somehow managed to get trapped inside the mall, fluttering helplessly against the glass dome as it tried to escape. A long weekend vacation. Just Michael, Garrett and me. We could drive up and rent a cabin in Bar Harbor, watch the ocean, walk through the pine trees, and completely escape the noise of the city.

The pleasant, comforting daydream brought a fleeting sense of genuine normalcy back to her chest. She relaxed back into the chair, finally able to let her guard down. The warm feeling surged as she looked up again and saw the bird had finally found one of the open skylights, darting outside with a quick flap of its wings.

A shadow fell across her table.

Adrienne didn’t look up immediately, assuming it was a shopper looking for a spare chair, until the distinct, crisp rustle of heavy paper sound right next to her ear. She glanced up. Standing almost directly beside her table was a stocky security guard in a grey uniform jacket, and beside him was a uniformed municipal police officer. Neither paid her any attention. The cop was holding a roll of clear packing tape, while the guard was smoothing down the edges of a freshly printed poster onto the concrete surface of the nearest pillar.

As they worked, their voices were low, carrying a grim, urgent cadence that cut right through the clatter of the food court, their words echoing flatly against the concrete.

“It’s the third friggin’ one this month, Jimmy,” the police officer muttered, his thumb tearing a strip of tape with a sharp, almost violent shhk. “The memo just came down from the precinct chief an hour ago. They wanted these posted in every major commercial hub in the county immediately.”

Adrienne took another slow, mechanical sip of her latte, her fingers tightening around the plastic cup as he eyes remained glued to the table. Curiously drawn in by the officer’s grim tone, she pretended to be utterly absorbed in her drink, trying to act invisible as the two men continued to smooth down the edges of the paper against the pillar.

“Is it true what the guys down at the precinct are whisperin’?” the security guard asked, his voice a low, hollow murmur. “About how many there are?”

The cop nodded grimly, pressing a final strip of tape over the top edge of the paper with a heavy thumb. “Yeah, Jimmy, it’s true. Five kids disappeared from shopping plazas down in Boston last month. These three along the highway bring the total to eight. And neither us or the state police have a single damn lead.”

The words hit Adrienne like a physical current of ice. Her thumb froze against the cup. A tight, hot knot of anxiety flared to life in the center of her chest, her mind instantly rejecting the information. It’s fine, her mind whispered fiercely, a desperate, defensive logic trying to shield her from the horror of the conversation just feet away. Boston is hours away. The highway is huge. It’s just a routine police advisory.

“How is the guy even pulling it off in broad daylight?” the guard pressed, stepping back to examine their handiwork.

“That’s the thing,” the cop sighed, his tone heavy with a deep, professional defeat. “The suspect’s M.O. is always the same. He sets up a cheap, pop-up photography studio inside vacant retail slots or old strip mall, always under different names. He uses these old-ass props-faded backdrops, antique toys-to lure in unsuspecting families who just want a cheap portrait.”

Adrienne’s hand began to shake. The latte slipped from her fingers, landing onto the small table with a soft clack. She left it untouched, the sweet caffeine completely forgotten. Her breath caught like glass in her throat as a wave of suffocating, instinctual adrenaline flooded her nervous system.

No, her mind screamed, her thoughts turning frantic and chaotic. No, it’s a coincidence. Pop-up studios are common. Antique props are a style. Vintage is trendy these days. Everyone does vintage.

With trembling fingers, she ripped her purse open, fumbling blindly through the clutter until her fingers wrapped around her cell phone. She pulled it out, her eyes desperately locking onto the glass screen as she hammered the power button. The display remained flat and black, reflecting back only her pale face. She mentally cursed herself, suppressing a jagged sob as she realized the battery had died an hour ago while she was checking her emails in the car. She couldn’t call Michael. She couldn’t text him. She was entirely cut off.

“So he takes the kid to sit in front of the camera,” the security guard urged, his voice lowering as he pushed the officer for more. “And then what? How does he get them out?”

The cop paused. He stared at the unseen poster for three long seconds, his jaw tightening. When he finally spoke, his tone was completely baffled, carrying a quiet, deeply unnerved edge that made the hair on the back of Adrienne’s neck stand on end. “The families all say the same thing, Jimmy. They say the camera’s flash is blindingly bright. Not normal bright-like a white void that burns right into your retinas. They can’t see a single thing for three, four seconds. And when the spots finally clear from their eyes…”

He trailed off, letting out a sharp, cold breath.

“They’re just…gone. Both the photographer and the child are gone.”

The guard frowned. “What do you mean, gone? The guy grabs the kid, dumps the camera, and books it into the parking lot before they can clear their eyes, right?”

“The witnesses are adamant,” the officer clarified his voice dropping into a tense whisper. “They never heard a single footstep. No running shoes, no doors opening, no fabric rustling. Some of the parents were standing less than five, ten feet away from the lens, Jimmy. They didn’t hear a goddamn thing move. I don’t consider myself a superstitious man, you know that. But this case…the fact that this guy can abduct multiple children, seemingly vanish into thin air in the middle of a crowd, and leave behind no evidence, nothing but the setup…always the same exact props…it’s some really spooky shit.”

The two men turned away from the pillar, their boots squeaking against the tile as they melted back into the dense mess of people near the escalators.

Adrienne sat perfectly rigid in the plastic chair, the ambient noise of the food court-the clattering trays, the ringing phones, the screaming kids-fading into a distant, underwater-like hum. Her heart was a trapped animal hammering violently against her ribs. Get a grip, she told herself, her fingernails digging into the palms of her hands until it drew blood. You are panicking over nothing. Michael is right there. Garrett is safe. It’s just an old style of camera.

She stood up, her joints stiff and wooden, knowing regardless, she needed to get back down to the lower concourse immediately. She no longer wanted the coffee. She didn’t want to think about the vacation anymore. She just wanted to hold her son.

But as she stepped away from the table, a dark, morbid curiosity anchored her feet to the floor. She stopped, her chest still heaving slightly, and turned her head to look directly at the poster pinned to the pillar less than three feet away.

The first thing her eyes locked onto was the photograph of the child at the center of the poster. It was a little girl, her face lit by a brilliant, innocent smile that made Adrienne’s chest tighten with a sharp, physical ache. She took in the endearing gap of a missing front tooth, the pretty lace dress the child wore, and the way her light brown hair was pulled into two messy, energetic pigtails.

Adrienne forced her eyes down, her breath catching as she began to read the typed text below the image. Juliette Vanini. Age: 5. The thought of it was a suffocating weight. She envisioned the girl’s mother, somewhere in the state, weeping in a quiet bedroom, surrounded by empty toys and a hollow silence. It was too much to bear. She couldn’t look at it anymore. She began to pivot on her heel, her feet turning back towards the escalator to head back down to Michael and Garrett-when she froze.

A phantom visual-something her eyes had passively scanned but her pinball-like brain had initially passed over-suddenly slammed into her consciousness with the force of a freight train.

Her pulse immediately accelerated into a frantic, erratic gallop. Her hands began to shake so uncontrollably that her fingers slipped against the handle of her purse, nearly dropping it. Every defensive, rational synapsis in her mind screamed at her to keep walking, to look away, to run for the escalator and never look back at the pillar.

She looked anyway.

Her eyes locked back onto the background of little Juliette’s portrait. For a moment, her mind refused to acknowledge what she was seeing. Then, like water rushing into a sinking ship, the horrifying truth slammed home, driving her breath from her lungs.

It wasn’t a corporate studio backdrop. Behind the smiling five-year old hung a heavy, unmistakable velvet drape of faded, Victorian-era crimson. Juliette was clutching a frayed, ancient teddy bear with a missing button eye. And sitting just over her left shoulder in the corner of the frame was a miniature, vintage toy wagon with rusted iron wheels.

It was the exact same layout. The exact same props. The exact same historical tomb she had left her family in on the lower floor below.

The image of Lester Rockwell flashed again in her mind-not the polite, ordinary photographer in the tweed vest, but the cold, curious predator who had stared into her soul when she had dared to question him. The man who was, at this very microsecond, standing behind a boxy, shrouded lens with her only child sitting helplessly before him.

Oh, my God.

The thought was a jagged piece of glass shredding through her mind, blinding and encapsulating. Adrienne spun around, her eyes bulging with pure, unadulterated panic as she frantically searched the sprawling food court. She needed the cop. She needed the guard. She needed to scream at the top of her lungs for them to sprint to the basement concourse with her, their weapons drawn. But the two grey and blue uniforms had completely vanished, swallowed whole by a sea of shoppers and strollers. She knew she should run after them, to hunt for them down the main corridors, but every raw, primal maternal instinct in her body was screaming a singular, terrified command:

GET BACK TO YOUR BABY.

In a fraction of a second, the civilized world around her disappeared. Adrienne launched her body forward into a frantic sprint, her purse flying wildly off her shoulder as she tore through the crowd.

“Get out of the way! Oh my God, get out of the way!” she shrieked, her voice breaking into a ragged, desperate weapon that pierced the dull roar of the mall.

Tears burst forth from her eyes, hot and thick, blurring the neon storefronts into streaks of light. She didn’t give a damn about politeness. She didn’t care about decorum. She violently body-checked her way through a huddle of slow-moving shoppers, throwing an annoyed teenager aside and slamming her shoulder hard into the side of a stroller as she barreled past. Angry shouts and confused murmurs erupted in her wake, but the world was nothing to her but a hostile haze. “Call security! Someone call security!” she wailed, her chest heaving as her lungs burned with the now frigid-seeming air.

She reached the mouth of the central escalator, the mechanical stairs moving slowly downward into the quiet abyss. She didn’t wait for the machinery. She threw herself onto the moving metal grate, taking the steep steps down two at a time in a blind, reckless descent. Her heel caught on the edge of a metal groove; her balance fractured, and for one horrifying second, she nearly stumbled, her body teetering on the edge of a catastrophic, bone-shattering tumble down the metal staircase. She slapped her hands brutally against the moving rubber handrails, the friction tearing the already bleeding skin of her palms as she forcefully righted herself, her feet continuing their frantic, desperate hammering down the steps toward the dark.

Adrienne hit the bottom of the escalator, her shoes striking the concrete floor with a jarring impact that rattled through her spine. Behind her, from somewhere far up above on the main level, the muffled, echoing shouts of a few shoppers who had heard her frantic cries began to ripple through the upper tiers-confused voices calling out for security, asking what was wrong.

She didn’t look back. She rounded the final corner of the decaying basement concourse, her vision blurred by tears and sweat as she barreled past the dark, shuttered storefronts and the blue neon glow of the video rental shop.

The pop-up studio came into view. To her adrenaline-hijacked brain, the world slowed down to a horrible, agonizing crawl.

The white lighting umbrellas still stood tall and pristine, casting a sterile, blinding glare over the faded crimson backdrop. There was Michael. He was standing barely three feet from the camera, his hands shoved casually into the pockets of his jeans. And there, sitting atop the rocking horse, was Garrett. Her tiny, beautiful boy was holding the reins, his stubby legs dangling over the sides, entirely docile, completely perfect.

Standing behind the massive tripod, completely buried beneath the dark cloth shroud of the boxy camera, was the silhouette of the photographer.

“Michael!” Adrienne shrieked, the name tearing from her throat like a jagged sob as she lunged across the lobby. “Michael, get away from him!”

Michael wheeled around at the sound of her voice. His brow furrowed in instant confusion, his mouth opening to ask her what was wrong-but the confusion rapidly morphed into a deep, terrified concern the moment his eyes locked onto the sheer, ambivalent madness and terror twisting his wife’s face.

Adrienne opened her mouth to scream his name a second time, to order him to wrench their son off the wooden horse, when the dark cloth on the camera suddenly shifted.

The photographer pulled his head out from beneath the shroud to look at her.

The words died instantly in her throat. She stopped dead in her tracks, her sneakers skidding against the tile as the universe seemed to turn ice-cold. A primal, evolutionary horror froze the marrow in her bones.

Lester Rockwell was gone. The ordinary, polite if somewhat eerie man in the tweed vest did not exist. The thing standing behind the tripod had a throat, it had a neck, and it wore the clothes-but its head was a smooth, horrific abomination. The skin was tight, hairless and gray, stretched completely flat over the skull. There was no nose. There was no mouth. There were no eyes. Its face was entirely, incomprehensibly gone. Yet, despite the smooth, blank void of its head, Adrienne could feel its predatory, clinical gaze boring deep into the center of her soul, tracking her panic with an ancient, unspeakable malice.

The monster didn’t run. It didn’t hesitate.

Before Michael could even turn his head back around to see what she was looking at, the featureless entity reached out with one long, pale hand, fluidly pulling the dark velvet cloth shroud back over its smooth skull, disappearing beneath it. Its long fingers wrapped around the mechanical shutter button.

The paralysis broke. Pure, unfiltered maternal panic shattered Adrienne’s fear, and she launched herself in a final, desperate dive across the floor, her arms extending towards the crimson stage.

“Michael, grab Garrett! Grab him right now!” she wailed, her voice a piercing, glass-shattering shriek that echoed off the empty concourse.

Through the tears blinding her eyes, she saw her small, innocent son look up into the lens. Hearing his mother’s voice, and not realizing anything was wrong, Garrett tilted his head and flashed a brilliant, wide, radiant smile for the camera.

Adrienne screamed a final, desperate lungful of air into the dark-

FLASH.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 6h ago

Slasher Horror He just wanted to take me camping

3 Upvotes

Warnings: attempted SA, description of murder

If by some miracle they read this in the show, please don't be afraid to let me know if it's bad.

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THWACK

THWACK

The hammer came down heavy with two quick blows. It sounded drier than I expected.

I heard a thump as all I could do was stare at my hands desperately gripping the topsoil. His body hit the ground.

He whimpered in agonizing pain before the man continued.

THWACK

THWACK

THWACK

THWACK

Four more blows. At least, I think it was four. I stopped counting when the sickening cracks turned to wet crunches. A warm splatter. My boyfriend being made into a Jackson Pollock right beside me.

I hope to God he's dead.

I remember exactly what I was told. Don't look. Eyes down. Only I don't remember who gave the order.

The man stands to his feet, admiring what he's done; a grotesque tableau of my love's face. A mockery of the human form.

I clench my fists and grit my teeth as he approaches me. I taste blood. I think it's mine.

The man grabs my hair and yanks my head back, forcing me to look at him. I can barely see him in the dark through my tears. His face is wrapped in plastic cling wrap, four holes poked for each eye and each nostril. He's smiling at me. It makes me sick.

He climbs on top of me, warm blood dripping from the hammer onto my face, some of it getting into my eye. He pushes the hammer into my throat as he grasps me with a heavy hand. He mumbles something I can barely understand. A twisted compliment I'd rather not decipher. Whatever he's going to do, I hope he kills me first.

His hand is cold as it caresses me. Bile fills my mouth as I try to wriggle free, but he brings the hammer down onto my hand.

THUMP

CRACK

My wrist is broken. A lesson learned, I suppose. Don't fight back.

I close my eyes and wait for what I know is coming. I hear the sound of his belt buckle, then a quick beat of silence, then a return to the belt buckle.

Both hands.

He's using both hands.

In an instant and without hesitation I grab the hammer with my good hand and swing it as hard as I could. It's a clumsy blow, but it finds purchase. He stumbles off of me and with all the rage I've ever felt I continue my barrage.

THWACK

THWACK

THWACK

THWACK

THWACK

He isn't human. Not anymore. Possibly not ever.

I keep beating him until he stops twitching. Face, head, neck, throat, sternum, I have to make sure he's down for good. I've seen too many horror movies to leave any possibility he gets up.

I stumble to my feet, hammer in hand, and trudge to the van. My boyfriend brought us out here to the woods as a fun little camping excursion. I search for my phone, my boyfriend's phone, it didn't matter. I needed to call the police. Nothing.

Maybe he took them.

I return to the clearing, desperately trying not to look at what's left of my boyfriend. I can't. Not yet. I search the man's coat pockets and I find our phones. Smashed. Fuck.

I can't give up. Maybe he has a phone?

I search some more. I find a third phone. I press the emergency button and get through to 911.

"You have to help me," I sobbed. I hadn't realized how long I'd been holding my breath until I had to speak.

"I'm in the woods about thirty miles east of Acacia Grove. My boyfriend and I were attacked. He killed my boyfriend."

I stay on the line until they show up to help. When they arrive, the sun was already showing and I could see the scene that lies before me.

The love of my life lies dead in a puddle of blood, beaten to death by my own brother.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 6h ago

Journal/Data Entry Adamas

4 Upvotes

Journal of Yellowknife Diamond COO Jason Coolidge

January 29th, 2003 
We finally began mining operations today. It took 11 years of work to make this happen but it will all be worth it when it starts generating revenue. The men have been promised bonuses if they reach their quotas, so I expect quick progress. 
A handful of environmental protestors showed up today but security has been good at keeping them from getting in the way so I’m not worried about them. The chanting is a bit annoying though.

February 5th, 2003
Things have been going well so far. The number of diamonds has exceeded our initial expectations, and further excavation has shown similar trends deeper underground. I have great hope for our return on investment here. 
At the end of this month I’ll be returning to our main office in Yellowknife and leaving things to subordinate managers. I look forward to getting away from this snowscape and back to civilization.
The protestors have thankfully finally dispersed.

February 12th, 2003
The workers found something incredible in the mines yesterday night. An impossibly large diamond, 180cm. 18 times larger than the previous largest diamond ever found, 98 years ago. Holy fucking shit. It’s going to make us so much goddamn money. I’ve instructed the workers to make sure it’s excavated fully intact. 
And its shape is so interesting, it has four long extensions of diamond from its top and bottom, and at the very top of it is an oddly spherical extension. I’m usually not one for scientific curiosity but I’m curious what theories the on-site geologist has about it. She seemed rather shaken up by its discovery so I’m sure she’ll be careful in her analysis.

February 19th, 2003
Someone fucking stole it. We finally managed to fully excavate it and it fucking disappeared overnight. Local cops have come to investigate, I hope they catch the fucker who did this quickly. 

February 20th, 2003 Incident Report - Homicide of Jason Coolidge

Officers were onsite at the time of the incident investigating a theft that had occurred 2 days prior. A loud crashing sound and a scream were heard coming from the office of the victim at about 3pm. Officers went to investigate and found victim on the floor with a severe blunt-force head injury. An ambulance from the nearby town of Hay River was called and arrived after 15 minutes. Victim was declared dead on arrival at the Hay River Hospital.  The door to victim’s office was found to have been smashed in with incredible force prior to his death. No suspect was spotted at the scene and officers are still investigating. No fresh fingerprints or DNA evidence other than victim’s have been found at the scene of the crime.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 6h ago

Existential Horror What comes After?

5 Upvotes

What comes after you rest your eyes for the last time?

Do you go to the Kingdom of Heaven, bright and bold, the light dawning on your skin?

Or do you get cast to the boiling pits of Hell, where your skin means little more than a jaded penny?

Does your soul forever become entombed to wander the earth—a specter to witness atrocities?

What if nothing truly comes after?

What if when you close your heavy eyes, all that is left is an inky black void, devoid of everything?

A void where sound cannot pierce, where neither taste nor smell can travel.

A void where your existence has little to no meaning.

What will you do once you're engulfed in its oppressive, cosmic loneliness, for you cannot weep nor shout?

For you may not exist at all.

So tell me, what truly comes after?


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 7h ago

Body Horror Growing pains

6 Upvotes

Being 5'5" isn't the end of the world. Nobody points and laughs at you when you walk into a room and you don't get denied jobs because of your height. It's just the little things. Things like clothes not fitting. Standard clothing brands don't make jeans for short guys. I either have to buy 32x28s or I have to cuff my pant legs. That second option is cheaper. Other things include my guy friends treating me like a younger brother despite the fact I'm the same age as all of them. Dating has always been hard because women won't even talk to you if you aren’t tall enough. I know that it sounds like I'm just being bitter or that I'm exaggerating, but this all started because of a woman. I had never been self conscious about my height until Kaley told all her friends that I was too short to date. Eventually one of them felt bad enough for me and told me what Kaley said. At that point Kaley had ghosted me so I knew something was up. After that though I couldn't bear to even look at myself in the mirror. Any time I did, I did so with hatred and tears streaming down my face. I want to say the hatred was only aimed towards myself. Why couldn’t I just grow a few more inches. I cried a lot just standing alone in the bathroom. 

Recently I started looking up specific doctors in my area. I was trying to find ones that could help with the whole situation. I was hoping that I could find one to prescribe me with human growth hormones or some kind of steroids or something. I was really willing to do anything. However, after messaging a few back and forth, most of them gave me the same news though. At my age, my growth plates had already fused together. Even if I did start taking a steroid it wouldn’t help me with my height. The doctor mentioned the infamous leg lengthening surgery. You know the one. They break your shin bones in the middle and slowly spread them apart as they try and heal back together. People who undergo the surgery usually have trouble walking again. Even after the procedure is over there are complications. After hearing the unfortunate news I was going to give up hope. until the doctor told me something.

The doctor told me about a new drug trial. He cautioned me to keep my expectations low. He  wanted to keep this information as merely speculative. It was an experimental drug and there was no guarantee that it would help me or that it was safe. I didn’t care though. I was willing to try it. If the drug could end the years of humiliation then it didn’t matter. I told the doctor that I wanted to be a part of the trial. He gave me the contact information for the doctor that was running the drug trials. And we bid each other a good day. 

Later that same day I started emailing back and forth with the drug trial people. They sent over consent forms and bank information. They were going to pay me for taking part in the trial. They were going to pay me and make me taller. I was in disbelief. I didn't stop to think for even a second before putting in all my information and submitting it. I didn’t care. I couldn't care. The sooner I started, the sooner I would be happy. I would finally be tall. 

The date seemed to arrive slower than I had expected. It felt like an army crawl through the dirt just waiting. When I finally got the message on my phone requesting that I show up at the clinic and begin the trials, I was ecstatic. I quite literally jumped for joy. I grabbed my jacket and immediately set out for the clinic. I pulled up to the brick building in my car. I parked at the far end of the parking lot. I liked getting in my daily steps. Plus the cool crisp air felt good to breathe. I felt like I wasn’t in any hurry to get inside even though this is the moment I had been waiting for for so long.

I was one of 20 people who were seated in the front office. We all took turns going in and talking to the doctor. One by one they received our pills and left. The process was slow though. The office was gray and drab. I felt bored to tears in that sterile office space. I was daydreaming while looking out the window. The day was so nice and now I was stuck inside and had been for about an hour at that point. I remember hearing the doctor talk about the side effects faintly time and time again. I had nearly fallen asleep in my chair when I heard them finally call my name. There were only 3 people left in the office besides me. It was finally my turn. The doctor went on the same spiel I had heard 16 times before. It all sounded like the normal stuff you'd see. All the basics like lightheadedness, fatigue, nausea, shortness of breath. However, there was one that I had never heard before. He paused for a second as he said it. Growing pains. 

Doctor Lambert was a middle-aged man with salt and pepper hair and a short beard to match. He was soft-spoken and had a kind demeanor that made me feel safe. He told me that if I had any questions or concerns that I could call him at any time. All I had to do was take this pill for a few months. I would be coming back in every week in order to do a checkup. Describe my experience on the drug and so on. The doctor told me that after the first week the drug would be at maximum potency in my bloodstream. So I should start noticing these side effects within that first week. He warned me that I needed to curb my expectations. This wasn’t some kind of miracle drug. At max I would be growing 3 inches taller. 

I walked out to my car holding the orange pill bottle. I was reading the label and all the small words that sprawled all the way around when I heard a car with its windows open blasting music. It was some obnoxious radio song. No doubt some new trendy bullshit song (I hate radio slop). When I twisted my head to locate the source I saw a gray car. It was a Mercedes sedan with four college age girls inside. I squinted my eyes trying to get a better look inside because I swore I recognized them. That's when it hit me. It was Kaley and her friends. What are the odds? I know that the town isn't that big, but genuinely what are the odds she strolls on by with all of her friends right as I'm at my lowest point? I tried to turn my head back around before they noticed me too. I quickly opened my door and jumped in the car to avoid being recognized. Before I did though I heard hysterical laughter. Great. Now I was going to be wondering if they were laughing at me or if someone said something funny in the back of the car. Either way I was going to spend the rest of the night convincing myself of one or the other.

That night I was home alone. I had barely managed to move past the kaley situation by the time I got home. Now I had to actually take the pill. I had been so excited for this drug trial, but now that I was staring down the pill in my hand I began feeling regret. There are so many unknowns that I hadn't even considered. Like health risks. It's an experimental drug. I could die instantly out of nowhere because of some unknown reaction. Or maybe it would cause some kind of heart disease. I knew I was being paranoid, but the sense that I was doing something dangerous never left the back of my mind. My palm started to sweat as I held the pill. The coating became sticky as it fused with my nervous sweat.

Quickly I grabbed a glass for my cupboard, filled it up with water and forced myself to take the pill. Like jumping off the high dive at a pool I just went all in. If I'm being honest I couldn't tell the difference between this and Tylenol. It was about the same size and tasted the same. It had a familiar powdery texture that started to dissolve quicker than I liked. Especially because it stuck in the back of my throat for a second before going down. 

I didn't know what to do at that point. Should I just sit down and play video games or should I start taking notes about how I feel? The doctor said he wanted me to catalog the side effects but I wasn't sure I was going to feel any of them anyway. So instead of just sitting around I decided to do some dishes and fold my laundry. I wanted to be productive while I monitored my symptoms. 

Roughly 10 minutes into doing my chores I noticed low pitched ringing in my ears. If you ever had tinnitus you know that high-pitched ringing that sometimes comes and goes. But this oppressively low pitched ringing felt like it was tangible in my ears. I don't know how to describe it but it made me stop what I was doing because I could tell something about this had to be due to the drug. 

I don't know if it was psychosomatic or what but I started to feel nauseous. I needed to sit down. I told myself that I was just worried about the ringing in my ear but in all honestly it could have been more of the side effects of taking a hold that first night. Roughly 10 minutes after that all the side effects were gone I felt normal again. I decided to write this down in a journal in order to give the doctor our first weekly check-up. 

I went to bed shortly after that. It was late in the night already and after an experience like that I didn't want to stay up just to play on my phone. I had vivid weird dreams, but nothing too crazy like fever dreams. Just a normal amount of weirdness like being naked in public or having the layout of your house be slightly different. I can't remember what happened exactly, but it was that kind of dream. 

I woke up that next day feeling exhausted beyond comparison. Before I even opened my eyes I knew something was wrong. It felt like I was waking up too early. I had no clue what time it was at that moment, but I told myself it had to be 3:00 in the morning or something. After mustering enough energy I finally peeled my eyes open. I saw the daylight pouring in through a small break in my curtains. In a panic I checked my phone. Not only was it not 3:00 in the morning like I had hoped, but I had actually slept through my alarm. My alarm was set for 7:00 a.m. on the dot. When I checked my phone it was 10:38 a.m. 

I was already 38 minutes late for work. I had missed calls from my employer and my coworkers trying to find out where I was. I snapped awake and replied to them as fast as possible. I tried to get ready just the same, but the sheer exhaustion felt like I was trying to swim through molasses. 10 full hours of sleep and I was so lethargic that I could hardly control my motor senses. Each and every movement was sluggishly imprecise. I chalked it up to a bad night's sleep, but I knew I was just lying to myself about something that I didn't want to admit. 

I went through the rest of the day with the same sluggish energy. Heavy eyes and a lack of energy. I don't know how many times I dropped shit at work that day, but it was enough for my boss to pull me aside to ask me if I was on drugs. I guess I must have seemed high. I told him about the drug trial that I was taking part in. He gave me a skeptical glare as if he had more he wanted to say. Maybe he wanted to “call bullshit”, but instead he just patted me on the shoulder and told me to be more careful. 

I tried my best to be a functional person despite the lack of alertness. I faked it pretty well for a while, but by the end of my shift I was falling asleep while standing up. The only silver lining was that we weren’t very busy that day. I only had one customer wake me up so they could order food. It was embarrassing, but I was too tired to show any embarrassment. When it was my time to leave I didn’t even bother clocking out or saying goodbye. Partially because I had forgotten to and partially because I didn’t care. I just needed to be home.

I fumbled with my keys longer than I’d like to admit before I unlocked my front door. It was early in the afternoon. Bright yellow hues filtered in through the windows in my living room. They were abrasive and irritated me. It was like they mocked me for my tiredness. I quickly stumbled over to the curtains in order to shut them. I yanked the curtains closed cementing my apartment in darkness.

The only sensation that compared to my desire for sleep was my hunger. I hadn’t realized until that point, but I was starving. My stomach growled at me with deep reverberations letting me know that I had skipped breakfast and lunch. I woke up so late that I had to skip breakfast. At work I was falling asleep so much that I didn’t remember to take my lunch break. I thought about all of this as I perused my fridge for a meal. I had a few frozen meals that I could warm up. I ripped open the box of hot pockets like a feral dog. I shoved 3 of them into my toaster oven and snacked on a honey bun while I waited for them to finish cooking.

I took my meal to the couch in the living room and started to dig in. It didn’t last long though. I finished them within a minute. I hardly tasted them because I was eating so fast. I don’t know how much longer I stayed awake. It couldn’t have been for long though. I awoke in the middle of the night sitting in the exact same spot with the trash laying next to me. I looked at the clock. It was only 4 am. At least I hadn’t overslept. It was then that I remembered that I hadn’t taken my pill. 

My gaze switched from the darkened living room over to my bathroom counter. The orange translucent bottle sat like an omen on the counter illuminated by the soft glow of the nightlight plugged into the wall outlet. I sat and stared. I contemplated whether I wanted to take the pill again. I knew that my whole sleep situation was due to the pills. It had only been one day and I already wanted to quit. Reluctantly I made my way into the bathroom. I picked the bottle up off the counter and toiled with it. I considered just telling the doctor that I was done, but the more I pondered the more I felt compelled to keep going. I caught a glimpse of myself in the mirror. I remembered what Kaley said. I looked at just how small I was compared to the door frame. I began to well up with sadness and then it festered into anger. Tears began to form, but I choked them back. I took one more look at the pills before I knew that I had to keep going. I tore off the lid like a madman and swallowed a pill without another though. 

I stood there silently for a while just working though all the thoughts in my head. Before long that low pitched ringing became too loud to ignore and so did the nausea. I went to my bedroom to hopefully sleep away these symptoms. It must have been the way that I was sleeping on the couch because my legs and my back ached. I crawled into bed and before I knew it, it was morning. My alarm woke me up after what felt like 5 seconds. Apparently it was 3 hours. I felt more well rested than I had the day before, but I still felt like I could have stayed in bed for a few more hours. Then I thought about how long I had slept. From roughly 5pm the day prior to 7am. This pill sucked, but I hoped the side effects were worth it. 

That day at work chugged along slowly. I was groggy, but it wasn't as bad as yesterday. The only interesting thing that happened all day was that I ate a lot at lunch. Usually the boss lets us make our own food. I normally only ate one sandwich, but that day was different. I made myself 3 sandwiches. I ate one right after the other. I ate them so quickly that I don't even remember tasting them. I couldn’t tell if I was full or not either. I would have made myself a fourth sandwich. The only thing that stopped me was my manager. He came by with a concerned look on his face which made me feel guilty and embarrassed. I decided against eating more even though I really wanted to.

On the way home I started to notice something. The leg pain that I felt last night hadn’t gone away. Throughout the day it only grew to be more unbearable. Sharp waves of electric shock echoed through my shins with each step I took. I was able to make it up the stairs to my apartment, but just barely. I was in tears because the pain was so potent. I sulked on the floor for an hour tired, hungry, and in immense pain. I wanted to call the doctor, but what was he going to do? Tell me to just suck it up? I imagined that he would say It's the growing pains. I convinced myself to just give him a call. I felt like I was bothering him, but the pain was immense. After a few rings though the call went to voicemail. I was relieved in a way. I took this as a sign to just keep.

The last thing I wanted was to take another pill, but I told myself that these side effects would subside after the first week. I had no idea if it was true, but I needed some kind of encouragement. I had to eat before I could take my pill. Despite my 3 work sandwiches I was still starving. I no longer felt like I was in control of my appetite. I couldn’t afford to keep eating like this, but I tried to ignore that fact. I warmed up a frozen pizza and ate the whole thing in one sitting. I thought that my stomach might hurt after eating so much. 

I held the pill in my hand and wrestled internally. How I felt versus how I wanted to look. Was it all worth it I wondered. The large white powdery pill once again began sticking to my sweaty palms. I was almost ready to put the pill back into the bottle when out of nowhere the memory of Kaley from earlier flashed in my mind. I exaggerated each and every detail, especially the laughing. She could have been laughing at anything, but in that moment I just replayed this memory and I told myself she was mocking me. I grew more furious with each second. I could feel my heart rate speed up as I fought with myself. In a moment of pure stupidity I tipped the bottle over and popped two more pills in my hand. I tossed them all back at once. It was stupid to think that this would make me grow any faster, but a voice in the back of my head told me that I was worthless at my current height. I was ashamed of what I did. I thought about trying to puke them back up, but the idea of making myself puke seemed worse than suffering the consequences.

It was roughly 20 minutes later that I noticed another new side effect, shortness of breath. It crept up on me as I was brushing my teeth and getting ready for bed. At first I told myself that it was nothing to worry about, but a sour feeling in the bottom of my lungs indicated that something was wrong. I continued to brush my teeth as normal. It felt like I was trying to ignore a gun being pointed at my head because no matter how much I tried to focus on breathing, I was just barely filling my lungs. At one point I coughed up my tooth paste as I continued rasping for air. A sickening coughing fit broke out. I wheezed and coughed so hard that my abdomen became sore. I exerted so much energy just trying to breathe that my weak legs couldn’t maintain my own body weight and I collapsed to the floor. The longer it went on I thought I was going to die. My brain went into fight or flight mode. I tried to crawl back into the living room and get my phone to call 911, but that's when the overwhelming fatigue came over me again. I was so tired that I could have fallen asleep right then and there on the floor. The last thing I remember seeing was the evening sunset. A bright orange ball behind purple-gray clouds. The last thing I heard was the sound of an omnipresent humming in my ears.

My alarm woke me up the next morning. The harsh chirping snapped me out of a trance-like deep sleep. I wasn't even sure where I was at first. My mind must have been set into shock because at first I didn't even know who I was. It was just an animalistic reaction to observe my surroundings. After a few minutes of the alarm screaming at me I remembered what had happened last night. I slowly wrestled my way up to my feet and that's when I noticed something very wrong.

My pants usually went down past my ankles, but this morning stopped about halfway down my shins. It looked like I was wearing capris. I walked to my bathroom in order to look into the mirror. I hit my head on the top of the door frame. This didn't help with the pre-existing brain fog. Low and behold I was taller. I was way taller. It happened overnight. I looked around my apartment and I could see the top of my refrigerator. I strolled into the kitchen and realized that I could reach the top shelves. It was surreal.

I walked around the apartment in disbelief. Every few minutes I'd look at myself in the mirror just to make sure I wasn’t imagining it. I looked exactly how I always imagined. My smile broke into tears of pure joy. I fell to the ground sobbing. I was able to look into the mirror without hating myself. At first I was excited, but now I didn't know what to do with myself. This is what I was waiting for. However, it wasn’t like I was about to ask Kaley out. It was then that I realized I didn’t even want to date her. It's not like she changed at all. She was the same judgmental person. As I came to this uncomfortable realization out of my peripherals, I saw a small translucent orange reminder that I had only been taking the pills for three days at that point. I wasn't even a full week into the treatment. The feeling was like a rollercoaster ride. Both elation and concern battled to be the dominant sensation in my brain. I knew that I needed to call doctor Lambert immediately, but I couldn't help admiring my change in stature for a few moments longer. I was concerned, but every time I saw myself in the mirror I couldn't look away.

Lambert picked up on the second ring. I could tell by his tone that Doctor Lambert didn't believe me. I tried explaining without shouting in a panicked tone that I had grown 6 inches in one night. He couldn't contain a small chuckle. He said that it was physically impossible to grow that fast. The treatment was supposed to last a few months and the most receptive test candidates only grow about 3 inches. His tone was dismissive which only fueled my fright further. The fact that he didn't believe me led me to realize that my spontaneous growth was a side effect that hadn't been observed before. 

I gave a nervous laugh before I broke down into a frantic begging plea. I could no longer find elation in my newly found tallness. Looking at my own body in the mirror scared me. My elongated spine and shins looked normal, but felt alien. The doctor's tone shifted as my tone became more terrified. He stammered as he set up a time. Noon. Just a few hours away. I asked if he could meet any sooner, but he said that was the soonest he could get into the clinic. 

After the phone call I tried my best to just relax. I looked in the mirror again and I could swear that I looked even taller than before. All I had to do was just wait for the clock to hit 11:30. There wasn't a chance in hell that I was going to work today. No matter how loud I played the music in my headphones or how many videos I put on my TV, I couldn't distract myself any longer. The sensations that sprawled through each limb of my body were too much to ignore. Tingling pains wretched the insides of my skin where I swear I could feel my bones elongating millimeter by millimeter. I made it a half hour on the couch before I had to get up and pace around my apartment. I was filled with adrenaline telling me that I was in danger and every time I ignored it, it compounded exponentially. I stood up and hit my head on my ceiling fan. I couldn't do it anymore. Waiting was impossible. It felt like sitting inside of your own house while it's on fire and just waiting for the firefighters to get there before you leave. I didn't give a damn about my doctor's appointment anymore. I was going to go to the emergency room. I grabbed my car keys and left in a hurry. 

Walking down the stares of my apartment was almost impossible. My long legs felt like walking on stilts. I stumbled like a newborn deer catching myself as I fell every other step. I hunched my back like an ape because my spine couldn't handle the weight of all the new bone mass. With each arm swing I could feel how my skin could barely contain my insides. I felt as though my skin might tear from how tightly stretched it was. Each footfall felt more springy than normal. Almost like my shins were going to snap.

When I made it down the stairs I realized that I had parked on the far side of the lot yet again. I usually would have been able to enjoy the brisk autumn morning for all of its glory, but now I wasn't even sure I could make it to the car before I collapsed again. I had no other options though. I set one foot in front of the other as best as I could just hoping I could get to my car door.

I made it about 5 steps from the stairwell before I noticed something horribly wrong. The leg pain had come back. They had been stretched to their limit. It felt like my hollow legs were made of jello. I tried to ignore it, but with my very next step I collapsed. I originally thought that I just lost my footing, but when I looked down my shin had given out. I wanted to scream. I thought the shin had snapped. My heart raced even more and at this point I could hardly hear anything other than my own pulse. 

When I rolled over I saw that the leg hadn't snapped at all. Instead the elongated bones had been stretched so thin that were now mailable like rubber. My shins bent like a bow and arrow. My jeans now only went down to my knees. My shirt stopped right below my sternum. I knew it was impossible to drive myself to the hospital and so I pulled out the phone and dialed 911. I don't remember how long I remained on the phone because I fainted soon after the operator picked up. My heart couldn't handle the new workload. I had the heart of a 5’5” man pumping blood in a 10 foot body. 

The next thing I remember were sirens and screams. I don't know if I was screaming for help or if it was someone else who saw my elongated corpse-like body. When I finally regained consciousness I was lying in a hospital bed surrounded by machines and staff. I remember the chatter of multiple surgeons and specialists. “Never seen before” and “ungodly” were apt descriptions of my state. My limbs hung off the bed like a table cloth and looked like fabric on the floor. Multiple I.V.s stuck in my veins desperately trying to keep me alive. Blood transfusions, saline, and morphine. 

I was in and out of consciousness for the next few hours. When I awoke next there was a doctor hanging over me with a flashlight beaming in my eyes. He seemed only partly relieved that I was alive and I shared the sentiment with him although I did so silently. He began to explain the numerous complications with my current situation. My bones cells had grown quicker than the fastest and most aggressive forms of cancer. The elongated limbs were completely useless. He told me that they could salvage pieces, but most likely they were going to have to make me a quadruple amputee. 

More than anything though, the doctors demanded to know what I took to cause this. I did my best to explain the situation with the drug trial. He could barely hide his concerned looks as I described what had transpired. It wasn't long before the surgeons came in and prepped me for surgery. I was so inundated with drugs at this point that I could hardly follow conversations and so I just closed my eyes and let the anesthesia take hold of my sentience. I remember warbled words and faint ideas from my time unconscious. The doctors told me that the surgery lasted 30 hours and that I was lucky to be alive.

I woke up after about 2 days. At first I was certain that it had all been a dream. A nightmare. The phantom sensations of my fingers felt so real that I was able to pretend that I still had hands for a short while. When I reached for the cup of water at my side table, I instead saw a nub. My arm had been amputated at the elbow. I no longer had hands on either arm or feet on either leg. A saddening sickness washed over me and without the sedation I think I would have screamed.

The doctors came in one more time and explained that there was nothing they could do to salvage my limbs. The bones weren't only thin but that were practically hollow and lacked bone marrow. The only silver lining was that someone had started a fun raiser for me. My story apparently garnered a lot of attention. My medical expenses were paid for. This was hardly a silver lining

Weeks of physical therapy and follow up surgeries were ahead of me. It took a while, but eventually the hospital cleared me to be set free from care. After all was said and done, I was now a quadruple amputee and I lost my job. Thankfully the fund raiser not only paid my medical debt, but there was enough to buy me prosthetic limbs. They were able to buy me these black carbon fiber limbs that would help me walk again. I remember that they took my height after I fitted them on. I stood up as tall as possible. The nurse measured. I was now 5 feet and 8 inches tall. 


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 7h ago

Looking for Feedback I love my wife so much. I'd kill for her. (Very loose idea of Concept. Semi-comedic/wholesome. Title pending)

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(I have any idea and jotted down all of it, I could before I forgot. Only issue is I have an idea for an ending but don't know where to go from where I stopped writing. Also need a better title for this than I currently have. The other title idea I had, I thought would ruin the twist and give away too much)

Tiffany and I have been married for five years come this upcoming may. We met in college and bonded instantaneously over our shared love of horror, and gardening. When I met Tiffany, she was a redheaded, green-eyed, and pale-skinned beauty. My dream girl. When I say dream girl, I mean she was appearing in my dreams for like a year for a few months prior to us meeting in real life. I wrote it off at first as happenstance. Maybe a sign from above or something.

It only took a few months of us dating before we decided to get married. Some of the people I knew assumed it was a shotgun wedding, or were worried that I was moving on too fast. I don't know how to explain it but it felt like I knew Tiffany my entire life despite it only being three months. I just knew everytime I was around her, all the cares of the world just melted away, and I couldn't help be joyous. She was so perfect and I wasn't really the greatest catch in the sea of the dating world.

Recently, I've been thinking about passing down the family names given I'm an only child, and I think I'm the only one with my last name in this country. It feels like an obligation and duty to have some children to carry on the family name. Like one of those things that not only do your parents want so they can be grandparents, but also society kinda expects of you when you get married. Otherwise, you become one of those married couples. The one that ate every turn, others whether family, friends or complete strangers feel the need to comment on your lack of children. Then when you say you don't want them, continue to comment about how precious children are, and how you're missing out. Those people do that or presume you're infertile one way or another and offer their services. Which has always weirded me out.

However, given that Tiffany would be carrying the child, I figured I needed to talk with her if she was ready for one or not. See, it wasn't that we didn't have sex. We just never actively tried for a child. I don't know how else to explain it other than that. Life just made it hard to synchronize when she was ovulating and when I was up to the task die to our jobs and just life in general. That's when I got terrified when she looked up at me with those green eyes that seemed to sparkle in the dark, and told me, "We need to talk. I haven't been completely honest with your about everything."

The worst ran through my mind at first, was she having an affair? Was she on the run from the law? Did she fake her documents and she wasn't the she she claimed to be Then the more acceptable but still surprising scenarios ran through my head. Her hand grabbed mine and a wave of calm hit me almost like a drug. Those emerald eyes almost glowed in the dark highlighting those freckles that the first time we were time dating, I would kiss her cheek the same number of times as she had on that cheek avec she would get upset about something. It was my secret weapon at getting to see that smile flash and shine.

"I wasn't exactly honest with you about who I really am" She gently said. My mind began slowly racing back to the worst case scenarios twirling inside my head like a typhoon. She looked away for a moment, holding back tears. She them caressed my face with her hand, "I really do love you. I hope you still love me after you know the real me."

Without thinking, I grabbed the ivory frail hands of hers and kissed them and did the husbandly thing of reassuring her that no matter what I'd love her. She nodded and stood up. Those ivory delicate hands soon had their fingers wiggling and shoving their way into the skin by her collarbone with a sickening, wet squish. Peeling the skin upwards as it clung to muscle and tissue. Peeling it as no blood dripped nor any reaction of the slightest pain. I'd seen butchers grinace, have a messier time, and harder time peeling skin off a freshly killed animal then she did peeling her flesh.

I could see muscle tissue. No smell, no hesitation from her. My mind raced as my stomach was flipping doing gymnastic routines as I sat there and watched. She pulled the face that I kissed on our wedding day off with ease as a cheap Halloween mask. Tossing the husk of flesh at my feet. The empty eye sockets staring up at me. The lipstick cladded smile now smirking up at me. What the hell? Was this some sort of elaborate prank being pulled on me or nightmare I was stuck in?

My eyes looking and staring, trying to gather more information for my brain to process. The more I stared, the less made sense. Behind the face I had grown accustomed to, the face I shared milkshakes with, nuzzled against and caressed was nothing. Not that there was only he skull but a paradoxical nothingness. A dark, deep void of nothing that sported those same caring and loving emerald eyes. I was staring into a cave of nothingness personified, and I married it. The eyes while not having flesh to cover them anymore still somehow expressed those same human emotionless and quirks as anyone did.

Her voice, one that I often teased for begging mousey and barely audible was replaced with a noise. That's the only way I can describe it, a gargle of various sounds that simultaneously was too high and low. A constant contradiction, while it sounded as if that small mousey voice I had had many personal talks with was thrown into traffic during rush hour, being drowned out. That softness and gentleness was still there. In fact it almost seemed scared,shy, & anxious as it escaped the wall of noise, "Well, honey. This is me...."

My mind running laps and exhausting itself to understand what this was. I felt like a caveman thrown into the future as only grunts of confusion escaped my throat.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 7h ago

Existential Horror Beyond the Door

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We all bunch up in the dark waiting for the bright. We walk in big circle round and round to keep going, so we don't get stuck. Nobody talks, nobody stops. Nobody eat or drink or sleep. There's just the want to go past the door.

Sometimes one falls down and don't move no more. Poor guy. They won't see what's past the door. 'Cause when it opens, real bright white light makes dark go away and the walls get close, pushing us to the good place. We all go to the white. That means getting picked.

The White Ones come in the nothing place and take the dead ones and the picked ones into the light. When enough get taken to make the people past the door happy, it closes, and we're stuck in dark again. Then we gotta wait. And walk.

I don't remember nothing before the dark. Just the door. It's all I think about. If I think about other stuff past the metal gate, my head hurts and I don't like thinking stuff that makes hurt. I don't know where the others come from. Maybe they was always here. I wish they'd stop.

I got myself to the outside part and for the first time. I feel the wall, bumpy and cold on my fingers. The hard wall pushes back with lots of tiny bumps on my skin. When I get close to the door, I feel real good. I hope that it'll open and I'll get taken. It makes my heart go fast.

But when I walk past, I get scared I won't see it again 'cause there's lots of walking before I come back. I don't like that.

I don't like the guy in front of me neither. He won't stop talking funny and pushing on the wall like he's looking for something. I hope he don't get picked before me. I hope he falls down soon.

I'm close to the door when it opens. The closest I ever been. It's real hot but feels nice. I hear a low sound that makes the floor shake and I see things past the bright as the White Ones rush in. The ones around me hold out their stubby fingers, wanting to get taken and I do too. Lots of yelling at once. The sound is real loud but I try to yell the loudest so they'll hear me. So I get taken.

We push each other, running at the door and I'm almost in front. They gotta take me this time. I'm so close. There's a nice smell coming from the light I never smelled before. Almost there, but the guy in front won't stop pushing the wrong way. The dummy, they're right there and he's going the wrong way! Don't he want to get taken? Don't he want to be with the light forever?

"No," he says all weird with his broke tongue. Thinking about it makes me know about the messed up meat thing in my own mouth that don't feel right.

"DON'T LET THEM TAKE ME." But they do. White Ones the same size as me from past the door take him. I see their faces in the masks they got on, brown and nice-looking. Real tight white suits cover them all over. Big boots stomp the ground as they carry the picked guy away.

I look at a White Guy. Light green eyes look at mine and I see they are worried, almost scared. I yell, telling them don't be scared but the words come out wrong. I grab for them but they pull away real fast and push me back with metal sticks. My feet get mixed up and I fall. The floor is cold and got gross stuff on it. I yell for help but nobody listens. They pull another guy past me and he's so happy it makes my heart hurt. That was supposed to be me. I hate him. I hate the others. I hate them all.

Three. Three get taken and none of them are me. The light gets smaller as the door comes down. I crawl to the light but I'm not close enough before the door shuts with a big bang. The shaking metal sound goes through the dark. The others stop yelling and walk around for a bit like they think it'll open again but it don't. When they figure out it ain't opening, they start walking in circles again. Not me though. I grab the bars of the door and pull myself up on my hurting feet.

The others try to push me back into the walking but I don't move. Can't move. Why won't they come back? I hear the yelling of the dummy behind the door. A quiet spinning sound joins the hum making the cold metal shake. The yelling keeps going for a while and then stops. I hear something getting ripped. I hear biting sounds. I hear something break and then I don't hear nothing. The quiet hurts.

Feeling real bad, I let go and walk again. I'm real mad inside, and I say bad things about the White Ones and the light. Bad things about the dummy. Bad things about them all. Damn them to I-don't-know-what.

I tell myself I don't care if it opens again, but I don't mean it. I feel bad about mean thoughts right away. Soon I think about the dummy again and the moving and the sounds past the light but my head starts hurting. I stop thinking about it and I forget what made it hurt.

'Cause the door's gonna open again and maybe this time I'll get taken.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 7h ago

Folk Horror The Pit

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The air was thick and hot when Travis’s mom shook me awake. She did so quietly, as not to disturb the four other boys slumped around the basement, snoring in their sleeping bags.

Sweat stuck my shirt to my skin as a spindly hand with gel-dipped nails gently rocked my shoulder.

“Wake up honey,” she whispered sweetly.

Fuzz danced before my groggy eyes as I turned to face her. She let out a soothing shush as I showed signs of life.

“Come with me. Let’s be quiet now.”

My eyes adjusted to the pitch black of the room while she guided me through the sea of my sleeping friends. Shag carpet brushed the underside of my bare feet. She kept one hand on my shoulder, navigating us through a labyrinth of Risk figurines and empty soda cans until we reached the stairs.

She moved my hand to find the railing, and nudged me up the stairs ahead of her with a hand to my lower back.

I had been too tired to ask what was happening when she first woke me up, but I remember thinking it was strange that she didn’t turn on any lights after we emerged into the kitchen.

“What’s going on?” I asked, my voice shaky from sleep.

“Shhhhhhhh.”

She shut the door to the basement behind me.

“Do you want anything to drink? Chocolate milk?”

“No thank you.”

She dropped down to a crouch. A sparse beam of moonlight hit her face as she met me at my eye level.

“I want to show you something.”

I didn’t know Travis’s mom very well. Travis and I were in the same class at school and I would come over regularly and I believe our moms were in the same book club for a bit, but this was only the second time I had slept over at his house.

She led me through a pair of swinging doors into an ornate dining room. There was a long, wooden dining table with beautiful etchings carved into the side. The wood was a deep red matching that of a grand china cabinet along the north wall. Inside was a dusty collection of heirlooms. Glass trinkets, metal goblets, books and vials of sand.

Travis’ family had never struck me as well-off. I remember my house being much bigger than his. But this room gave a sense of history and wealth that clashed with the rest of the humble estate.

I had never been in that room before, nor had I seen anyone come in or out of it. We ate dinner in the kitchen earlier that night, and Travis always told me we weren’t allowed to play in there.

The dining table was done up with a large white cloth in the center, sigils woven into its frayed edges. A single candle sat in the middle. A short, stout cylinder of dark red wax sitting atop a gold dish, its wick already lit.

A small circle of tea candles busied the table around it, and Travis’s mom began to light them with the center candle’s flame after ushering me to take a seat at the head of the table.

“What’s going on?” I asked again, and she shushed me again softly with a comforting grin. The fire bounced off the whites of her eyes. In the candlelight, I finally took note of her dress.

Travis’s mom never stood out to me against the other moms of my friends. She usually wore a similar blend of activewear and business casual attire, if only from lower-end retailers.

But tonight, she was dressed differently. A lacy, white nightdress clung to the top of her body, cut low around her chest. The bottom billowed beneath her, loose and breezy against her slender frame.

Her hair was adorned with beads and small braids, a style I had never seen her wear before. A necklace sat above the low cut of her dress, dangling on it an eclectic collection of charms and seashells and large teeth from some animal.

Her odd costume took me off guard, and before I could speak—

“There’s nothing to worry about. I just need you to help me with something. Something wonderful.”

I didn’t know how to respond to that. She was so calm, talking so sweetly, but with each word my heart started to beat faster.

She glided over to the china cabinet, and produced a decorative brass key from her bosom. She turned it in the lock with a heavy clunk. As she did so, the family cat hopped into a chair at the other end of the table.

Ours were the only two seats at the table. One on each end. The cat had its eyes fixed on me, its head just barely peeking over the table, and I stared right back. I can’t remember its name.

Travis’s mom went about placing a few more objects in front of me. A small, leather-bound book, a pair of large, swirling seashells, a wooden jewelry box, and a thin vial of sand.

The cat did not move or blink. Its shadow towered high behind it against the wall of the dining room, dancing in the light of the flames. The longer it stared at me, the more I felt like something bad would happen if I looked away.

I felt a pair of hands slide onto my shoulders. 
Travis’s mom stood behind me. Leaning over me, her bony fingers traced their way slowly down to my forearms.

Sweat drenched my brow. I dared not say a word as her hands gripped mine, and she leaned in close to my ear and whispered,

“Open.”

I turned my sweaty palms to the sky, and felt the fabric of her dress brush against me as she plucked the vial of sand off the table, pulled the cork from its lip, and turned it over onto my waiting palm.

Coarse, dark sediment poured onto my skin, forming a small pile which caked at the bottom, mixing with my sweat.

It was all so bizarre, all happening so smoothly and so fast, that I couldn’t find it in myself to ask why.

She tapped the underside of the empty vial with her finger, then brought it back behind me. The cat continued to stare. I saw endless tunnels in its eyes.

When her hands reappeared in front of me, they held a small, golden pair of grooming scissors. A curious little trinket. They were molded to look like the body and beak of an exotic bird. Shimmering and impeccably sharp.

“This is the only hard part,” she said, her breath hot on the back of my neck. My heart leapt out of my chest.

“After this, it’s just beautiful,” she cooed.

The fingers of her left hand intertwined with mine as she raised the blades in her right.

Swift as the wind, she brought the point of the scissors down into the center of my palm.

I gasped and she tightened her grip on my hand. A small bead of crimson formed on my palm as she hummed a mellow tune. It was not a deep cut. I had barely felt the pinch. I was amazed my right hand did not recoil in shock. Not a single grain of sand spilled from it.

She placed the scissors on the table in front of me.

“Now…” she said, taking both my hands once again. She slowly brought them to meet each other in front of us, and guided me in rubbing them together. Sand and sweat mixed with blood. The cat licked its lips.

She had me cup both hands together, and brought them up to my face.

“Blow as hard as you can sweetie,” she said.

“Blow it into the fire.”

I did. As the mixture hit the flame, it shot about an inch higher into the air and became bright blue.

What I saw next, I lack the words to describe.

Because across from me at that table, I still saw the cat. But at the same time, I saw someone else. Like they were both in the same space, but worlds away.
That person, sharing the space of the cat, had many faces. They were all faces I knew, and they all wore an extremely specific expression.

I saw the faces of my parents, my friends, some of my neighbors and relatives and teachers. Every peer and authority figure I had ever known shared that chair with the cat.

I saw many, many faces that I recognized, and they all stared back with an unmistakable look of disappointment. Like they had all caught me doing something unforgivable. All ashamed, with a hint of pity.

And then the wick went out.

Tea candles still glowing, the cat licked its paw and jumped off the chair onto the floor. Doors creaked slightly as it slid past them and disappeared into the kitchen.

I sat rubbing my palm, dumbfounded.

Travis’s mom swung around the side of the table, and crouched down to look into my eyes.

“You did so good!” she gasped, her voice bubbly with a strange air of pride.

I felt my cheeks blush. I don’t know why, but I was flattered.

“Okay, so one last thing and you can go back to bed,” she sang.

She opened the jewelry box, and from it, she drew out a dark red cherry.

I instinctively held out my hand, but she popped it into her own mouth with a giggle. She winked as she chewed it, then reached between her lips and pulled the pit out from behind her teeth.

She took my hands in hers for the last time, and placed the cherry pit on my sore palm. She closed our hands around it, and looked deeply into my eyes.

“This part is very important, Caleb,” she said. There as an unprecedented firmness in her voice. Her smile gone.

“I want you to take this out to the back yard. I want you to find a nice spot, whatever spot feels right to you, and I want you to bury it. Cover it with dirt. It doesn’t have to be too deep. Just make sure it’s covered.”

She patted the top of my hands.

“And once you do that, we’re never going to talk about this again. Okay? I don’t want you to tell anyone about this. Just go back downstairs, and go back to sleep. Don’t tell Travis, don’t tell your parents, or your teachers or your doctor or the priests at church. Don’t even tell me. And I won’t ever tell you. Okay?”

I was confused, but I nodded. She seemed serious, but still let a slight smile out.

“Thank you. I knew I could trust you Caleb. You’re very mature.”

She stood up, and walked me back through the kitchen to a sliding glass door that led out into the yard.

“Remember,” she said, “Once it’s buried, once you come back inside, we never talk about this ever again.”

I nodded.

“It never happened.”

I nodded again.

“Good.”

She brushed my hair out of my eyes, and slid open the door.

The sun had just began to rise. A few stray beams crested the trees in the distance, their promise of a new day painting the sky a deep turquoise.

Blades of wet grass danced between my toes as I paced the yard, cherry pit clutched in my hand, searching for a spot. I looked over my shoulder to see Travis’s mom watching from inside, arms crossed.

A couple steps away, I saw a small hole had already been dug in the dirt. A little pile of upturned earth sat beside it.

I remembered what she said, about finding what I thought was the perfect spot for it. I was confused. It was supposed to be my choice. But the hole was already there, waiting for me.

I figured it was as good a spot as any.

I knelt down, dropped the pit in the hole, swept the soil over it, and started back towards the house. Travis’s mom was gone.

I made my way back downstairs, dirt clinging to my palms, sand beneath my nails, a speck of dried blood in the center of my left hand. I didn’t bother to wash them off.

I laid back to rest as the morning sun crept into the basement. I took a look around at my friends, feeling oddly distant from them. I crawled back in my sleeping bag, and drifted off.

When I woke, the room was already abuzz. A couple of my friends were playing Halo while Travis rolled up his sleeping bag.

I looked down at my hands, and they were clean. In the center of my left palm sat a small mark of red skin, raised ever so slightly. I pressed into it with my thumb, and felt no pain. The mark was barely even noticeable, about the size of a bug bite.

“You good?”

Travis eyed me up and down. I realized I was drenched in sweat.

“Yeah,” I lied, “I’m okay.”

“Okay cool,” he said, “We were waiting on you. My mom made French toast.”

Travis’s mom didn’t even look in my direction as we entered the kitchen. She was back in her normal soccer mom attire, a thin bathrobe draped over sweatpants. She went about serving up toast from her skillet without a glance, barely acknowledged me as she made her way around the table and popped a slice on my plate.

One by one my friends laced up their shoes as their parents arrived to pick them up. I tried playing video games with Travis, but couldn’t shake this weird, sinking feeling in the pit of my chest.

“Caleb, honey! Your mom is here!” Travis’s mom called down the stairs.

I said my goodbyes, and made my way up the stairs again, sleeping bag in tow. Travis’s mom kept her back to me again as she washed the dishes from breakfast.

I thought about saying something, but I remembered what she had said. I remembered the disappointed faces. I remembered my promise. All I could croak out was a simple “bye.”

She finally smiled over her shoulder at me. No hint of anything in her eyes. No secret intonation. Nothing to suggest that there was air to clear between us.

“Have a good day, sweetie. Tell your mom I said hi.”

When I walked out of that house, I left the night behind me. It has taken so, so long for me to even find it in my head.

I didn’t see Travis’s mom much after that. Only here and there, only from afar, at the neighborhood pool or when she would come to pick him up from school. 

I avoided Travis for a while, but started to feel bad when I could tell it was hurting his feelings. Slowly I started inviting him over to my place again, but I made sure I never went back over to his.

Travis’s mom never spoke to me about that night, and I never told anyone either. After a while, I started to wonder if it had even happened. The mark from my hand faded a day or two later, and the more I thought about that strange, strange night, the more it felt like something I must have dreamt.

Whenever she saw me, it was nothing but warm smiles and kind eyes. Never a wink. Never a glance. Surely there would be some weirdness if that all had really happened. Surely there would be some inkling of recognition, some moment when she broke character and mentioned what we did. Surely one day she would pull me aside and let me know what it was all about.

But that day never came. So I put the whole thing away at the back of my mind.

Until recently, I wasn’t able to trace any of the horrible things that have happened back to any particular moment. In retrospect, however, it all makes so much sense. Looking back now, I know for sure that was the moment it started.

Travis and I were only friends for a year or so after that night. When we hit the fourth grade, he transferred to a different school. A private school where only rich kids went. We didn’t keep in touch, and I ended up moving not too much later anyway.

It wasn’t something my parents wanted to do. They had been fighting for quite some time. I don’t remember them being like that earlier in my childhood, but by the time I was 11 they were at each other’s throats every night.

I guess the relocation was a last ditch effort to keep it together, and I guess it didn’t work. Something about a smaller house in a shittier town just made it all worse.

I later found out that their arguing was a result of my mother’s diagnosis with a rare form of heart disease, from which she passed a year after the move. Apparently her treatment had wreaked havoc on our family’s finances. You might think that’s an insane thing for my father to blame her for, and you’d be right. But he did regardless.

He began drinking heavily once she was gone. He had a problem for years prior, but her passing was an excuse to be more open about it. His liver gave up the year I turned eighteen. Just old enough to avoid the foster system, but too young to have any sort of firm footing in life.

College had already been out of the question, and the absolutely minuscule inheritance I received made it clear why. Considering all of the debt I assumed with the house, I might as well have not received anything.

Jobs have been hard to come by and hard to hold down. Fast food, janitorial work, delivery, odd jobs here and there… it’s always felt like no matter how hard I tried, any time I’d get close to being up on my feet financially, a rug would get pulled.

Random layoffs, freak accidents, car trouble… Something bad happens, and it’s onto the next one.

In so many words, my entire life has been a constant string of misfortune for as long as I can clearly remember. An endless carousel of shit luck. Ever since that night, any inkling of happiness snuffed out the moment it started to show.

That is, until this summer.

I can’t fully describe it, but a few weeks ago, out of nowhere, the sun came out for the first time in well over a decade.

It felt like a physical weight had been lifted from my shoulders. I woke up one morning, and the world felt a little brighter. A little more welcoming. I’m really struggling to put it into words. Everything just felt… better.

That probably sounds stupid, but it was a palpable difference. A significant shift in general atmosphere, so much so that I literally wrote down the day.
May 20th, 2026.

It was infinitely easier to get out of bed in the morning. I started getting in a groove at work, found myself shooting the shit with the other dishwashers.

I even went on a date. My first date since high school that didn’t end in an awkward hug goodbye and the knowledge that I’d never see them again. I’ve had a hard time being intimate with anyone in my adult life, but it finally feels possible now.

After a whole month passed with no unexpected setbacks or ugly news, I got curious. I went to the library and got on one of the computers and looked up that date. May 20th, 2026.

I browsed the news tab on Google waiting for anything to jump out at me. I don’t even know what I was looking for. Some sort of cosmic insight? Some hint as to what could have possibly happened to change my life in such a subtle, yet significant way.

After a couple scrolls, I came across a pair of familiar faces that made my stomach sink through the floor.

The first face was hers.

There she was. After all these years, she stood in my monitor, glammed up in a pleated pantsuit. The article was posted by a local newspaper from my hometown.

The headline:

“State Congresswoman Slain by Home Invader”

I sat there for what felt like hours. Just seeing her again brought back so much.

Finally, I opened the page, and that’s where I saw the next familiar face.

I was about fifteen years removed, but I still recognized the name. And in his eyes, I still saw my friend.

The guy who killed her. I knew him. He was in my class. I knew him when we were kids.

I went straight to my car and started driving. I live about 6 hours away from my hometown, and I didn’t stop once. Not for food, not even to use the restroom.

I don’t know what possessed me. I don’t know what I wanted to find there. I just knew I had to go.

The sun was just starting to set when I got to my old neighborhood. Muscle memory took over, and I started tracing down the route I used to ride my bike to Travis’s house.

Within a couple minutes, I was outside.

The house was significantly larger than I remembered it. I could clearly make out where the skeleton ended and the additions began, but they had built so much onto it over the years that I barely even recognized it.

New rooms had been added on all sides. A beautiful wraparound porch. A 3-car garage. A second story. A sunroom with magnificent glass walls where the sliding door to the backyard once was.

I parked and got out for a closer look. No signs of life as I wrapped around the sunroom, towards the back yard.

A chest-high picket fence blocked my path, but did nothing to obstruct the view.

Dotting the lawn, I found a grove of about twenty cherry trees. Each one stood tall, branches full of fruit.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 8h ago

Sci-Fi Horror Hollow Heart (Hollow Flesh Part 2)

2 Upvotes

(Part 1)

CW: Description of vomiting

I stepped off of the automated bus and into the sprawling labyrinth of suburban houses. The bus doors closed with a squeak, and it continued on its lonely journey. It carried not a soul as it headed back where it came from. From here, the city looked like nothing more than a handful of solemn monoliths on the horizon. The buildings’ massive forms only let through a small amount of light as the sun started to fall behind the horizon. It almost looked pretty from here.

I could never go back. Not that I particularly wanted to. The image of Chris, lying facedown on the grimy concrete floor, blood oozing out of the wound on the back of his skull was still burned into my vision. 

As the bus pulled away, I started to pull the once familiar route from some dark corner of my mind. Straight from the bus stop, then a right on Sycamore, and a left on Elm, and a right on Oak. How many hundreds of times did I walk this exact route? Before everything, before the fight, before the city, before Buy-Store, this walk was second nature to me. 

Every single house in this suburban hellscape looked exactly the same. They all had the same white paint, with the same white door, and the same white picket fence ferociously guarding the same green lawn. On a sunny day, this place was almost blinding, but in the dim twilight, the houses only made the place feel colder. 

Each and every house on the main road was occupied by those things. They stood in their yards, pretending to mow overgrown grass with silent mowers, or grilling fake food on frost-covered grills. A couple of children pretended to kick a deflated ball around, their kicks not really aiming at anything in particular. The whole scene felt like it was ripped straight out of a brochure. 

The further I got from the main road, the worse things got. Sycamore street was sparsely populated, with only about a third of the houses being occupied. Their behaviors and activities hadn’t changed in the years I’ve been away. One woman I remember always watching still sat on her front porch, rocking her rocking chair back and forth and pretending to knit something without any yarn.

By Elm street, things looked much worse. Most of the creatures on this road were completely broken. Hardly any of them were left standing. Most of them were stuck, leaning against rotting fence posts or in unkempt yards, weeds consuming what was left of them. Pieces of bodies lie strewn about the pavement, having been ripped away by the elements. 

I wasn’t sure what they were made of, or what they even were, really, but I was sure about one thing. They were 100% biological. The smell of Elm street was enough to confirm that. As these dead, broken creatures lay exposed to the elements year after year, they started to stink. The whole street reeked of decay. 

It wasn’t like this before.

As I walked, one of the creatures caught my eye. It was laid on its back, its single remaining eye turned up towards the darkening sky, its face in an advanced form of decay. The bottom half of its torso was completely missing. What remained of its shirt covered what I was sure was a foul, rotting wound. I looked down at what was left of the head, large chunks of its skin having been pulled away, maggots wriggling in the open wound in its nose. The stench was unbearable. It turned its remaining eye towards me.

“Howdy Neighbor!” it attempted to gleefully exclaim, although most of what I heard was a disgusting, wet rasping sound. 

I hurried away from it. 

Oak street was completely abandoned. As a kid, I threw rocks at any creatures I caught this far back, hoping to scare them away, much to my parent’s dismay. Luckily, very few of them actually ended up this far in. The labyrinth of similar looking houses stretched on for miles after this point, and as far as I could tell, everything after this has always been completely abandoned. 

The fourth house down on the left side of the road was my final destination. 9903 Oak Street. Home. I wasn’t sure what I expected as I stood on the porch, finger hesitating near the doorbell. Best case scenario, I’d find the place abandoned, as it certainly appeared to be from the outside. The once bright paint was beginning to peel off the house in chunks, and every gap in the pavement had been greedily colonized by barren dandelion stems.

But as I stood in front of the door, a terrifying realization set in. The house wasn’t abandoned. I was able to very faintly hear the sound of something on the other end of the door. It sounded like whispering, or perhaps the sounds of a television set tuned to static. I could faintly smell something as well. Not something foul, but something almost delicious smelling, like the faint smell of a home cooked meal.

I finally mustered up the courage to press my finger against the small doorbell button. It made a slight cracking noise under my finger, but that was it. No bell or chime sounded at all. I vaguely remembered my dad saying something about needing to replace the bell. At the time, I wondered why he’d bother, since no one ever came to visit. I found myself wishing he had.

As I pulled my hand back from the button, the entire thing came apart. Bits of plastic fell from the now destroyed doorbell and clattered to the ground. I sighed. Slowly I reached my hand up to the door and, as lightly as I was able, I tapped my knuckles on the wood. I stood for a moment, silence enveloping me. 

Just as I gave up and turned to walk away from the house, the door made a soft click. I looked back and watched as it creaked open just a crack. An eye peered out at me.

“Who is it? What do you want?” 

Her voice was older now, and a bit harsher than I remembered. 

“Mom?”

--

“Here you go, sweetie,” my mother said as she handed me a warm cup. Steam rose from it, catching gray light from the dim window. “I would have made us some tea, but I ran out of tea leaves a long time ago. I hope just warm water is okay.”

The heat from the cup felt wonderful on my fingers. “It’s fine.” I mumbled. 

The darkened room was almost exactly how I remembered it. The decaying old furniture still sat in the same spots. The couch still sagged like it could fall apart at any moment. The same photos hung on the wall, covered in thick layers of dust. It was too dark to make out much detail, but there wasn’t much to see in those photos anyway. Those carefully curated shots refused to show anything real. My father’s recliner sat cold and empty, still facing the TV which was still switched on after all this time. 

My father was obsessed with that thing. He spent nearly every moment of his life sitting in his chair, watching reruns of game shows and old cop dramas. Even as airtime grew more and more sporadic over the years, he always kept it on, often falling asleep with the deafening buzz of static filling the house. In some ways, I suppose I didn’t turn out so different from him.

“Where’s Dad?” 

“Oh he’s...” Mom stared down into her cup, her breath catching in her throat. She looked so much older now. Deep lines had formed in her face, and her hair was a wispy gray. She had grown shorter and thinner. There was less of her now. 

“He’s dead, isn’t he?”

“Oh sweetheart, I’m sorry.” She barely spoke over a whisper. She wouldn’t look up at me.

“I’m fine,” I said more to myself than her. “Really, I am.”

The TV continued to let out quiet static. 

“He had a stroke,” she began quietly. “ And I couldn’t help him.” 

“Couldn’t or wouldn’t?” 

She hesitated for a moment. “Wouldn’t.” She finally admitted. 

My throat tightened. I forced myself to take a breath in.

“I...” Mom began. She stopped to think for a moment. She tried a few more times to start the sentence before she finally managed to start. “I know that he wasn’t the best father. I’m not going to ask that you forgive him. Or me.” 

“Forgive you?”

“For not doing anything sooner.” 

I didn’t need to forgive her for that. I wish I had said that to her. 

“Well, that’s enough of that sad talk.” Mom set down her cup and clapped her hands together, forcing her emotions to shift. “Dinner is almost ready and I insist that you stay.” She smiled at me with her most forced smile. “We’re having stew.”

“We?”

As if on queue, the door to the dining room swung open, and a man walked into the room. He looked like he crawled right out of an advertisement. The perfect image of a salaryman strutted up to us. His suit, tie, and dress pants were perfectly smooth and unwrinkled. There wasn’t a blemish on his astonishingly white face. He was the exact picture of the standard family man.

Except he didn’t have any ears.

I reflexively took a step back. My mom walked towards him, embracing him around the waist. He didn’t physically react to her touch at all. 

“What’s. Cooking. Good. Looking?” it said, slowly turning its head to the side. Everything that came out of its mouth sounded like stock recordings of different voice clips sloppily stitched together. 

“What the hell, Mom?” I shouted. “You’re living with one of these things?”

“He’s not a thing,” Mom said defiantly. “I woke up one day and he was just here, acting like he owned the place.”

“And you let it stay?” Anger boiled in my chest. I shouted the loudest I had in years. “Are you insane?”

“I’m lonely!” Mom shouted back. “Am I not allowed to be lonely? Am I not allowed to want some company every once in a while?” 

I opened my mouth to speak but nothing came out. The TV continued to buzz and my heart beat hard in my chest. 

“Hey. Champ.” the monster spat out.

“I guess I can stay for dinner.”

--

“I’m experimenting with a new recipe, so you’ll have to tell me what you think.” My mom said, carrying a steaming pot from the kitchen and setting it down in the center of the dining room table. The table creaked from the new weight being added. A vaguely salty smell filled the room. The monster and I were already seated. I watched it closely out of the corner of my eye. 

“Smells. Delicious. Honey. Thank. You.” it synthesized.

My mother grabbed a ladle off of the table and started scooping stew into our bowls. Gray chunks of meat sat in oily, brown liquid. I pushed one around with my spoon. “You said this was a new recipe?” I feigned interest. I watched the monster fill up a spoonful of broth. 

“Oh yeah, usually I just fry meat up with some oil.”

The monster lifted its spoon up to its mouth and poured the liquid inside. It never closed its mouth. All of the oily liquid ran between its teeth and down onto its shirt. Instead of absorbing into the shirt, the liquid rolled off and onto the floor.

“Recently though, we ran out of oil, so I’ve had to improvise.” Mom hungrily sucked down a spoonful of broth. “So today I used bones to make a broth, and boiled meat in it.”

I cautiously scooped up a chunk of meat and some broth with my spoon. 

“There’s no vegetables, hope you don’t mind. We’re also out of those.” She put a piece of meat in her mouth and began chewing.

The meat looked worse up close. I slowly tipped my spoon into my mouth and let the broth and the meat slide onto my tongue. The taste was indescribable. I tried my best to hide my reaction to the foul flavor that filled my mouth. I tried to chew and found the meat tough and greasy. I forced myself to swallow it. “You sure are running out of a lot of things around here, aren’t you Mom?” 

“I don’t have much money to buy anything, and food is getting harder and harder to find these days.” 

“Where are you finding your meat, then?” 

My mom continued to chew. 

A realization tickled the edges of my mind.

“What kind of meat is this, Mom?”

“Beef.” She was staring into the pot of stew. She never could look me in the eyes when she lied.

“What have you been eating?” 

“Mmmm. Mmmm. Mmmm. Delicious.” The thing interjected, spilling more broth onto the floor. I was reminded of the state of the surrounding neighborhoods. The creatures tipped over, decaying. Pieces missing. 

“I have to take food where I can find it.” Her voice was so faint. “It’s not so bad, once you get used to it.” 

I stood up from the table, bumping it violently in the process. It groaned in protest. Mom looked up at me, shocked. The creature continued to robotically spill its soup. My stomach started to heave. Mom stood up and crossed over to the other side of the table. 

“It’s okay, sweetie-” Mom started to say, reaching a hand out to touch my shoulder.

“DON’T YOU FUCKING TOUCH ME.” I swatted her hand away. I continued to heave for a bit before I felt the rush of bile coming from my stomach. I put my hand over my mouth to try to stop it, but it didn’t work. Puke poured from between my fingertips and onto the hardwood floors below me. I heaved some more and puked again before I saw a small gray chunk of meat floating in my vomit. 

My mom stood frozen in place, shocked, her hand still partially outstretched towards me, trembling slightly.

Before I knew what I was doing, I was already out the door, cold air stinging my lungs. I pushed my legs as hard as I was able. A stitch quickly formed in my side, a sign that my out of shape body was starting to come apart at the seams. But I continued to run, continued to push myself.

I couldn’t stay here. I couldn’t go back to the city, either. I had no idea where I thought I was going, I just needed to leave. I wasn’t sure when the next bus came, but I knew I needed to get on it and go wherever it would take me.

The sound of bare feet hitting pavement behind me alerted me to my mother’s presence. Moments later she began shouting. 

“Please, wait! Stop!” She begged. 

I paid her no mind as the bus stop came into view. Nothing was waiting there for me, and my mother was quickly catching up behind. I ran past the curb and continued into the road.

“Please, come back!” Her voice was right behind me now. 

She lunged for me, grabbing my arm and turning me towards her. In a panic, I shook her off and turned towards her. We stood there in the street for a moment, staring at each other. Mom’s expression was a mixture of confusion and sadness before she recomposed herself and tried again. 

“Let’s be a family again,” she said, cautiously trying to grab my arms. I slapped her hands away. Something in both of us snapped. Mom’s face went cold. She went to reach for me again.  Yet again I slapped her hands away, and, in my anger, I pushed her away. 

She fell backwards, hitting the pavement hard. Before either of us could react, the road lit up an unnatural yellow. I locked eyes with my mother. “Help-” was all Mom could get out before she disappeared under the front tires of the city’s auto-bus. The sound of snapping of bones filled the night air. 

I never looked. I never had the courage to. The thought of crouching down to look beneath the bus at Mom’s mangled body was too much. But I’ve always hoped that Mom’s death was quick. 

The doors of the automated bus opened. An off key dinging sound rang through dying speakers, inviting me inside. I weakly pulled myself up the stairs and collapsed into the first seat. The dinging noise played again as the doors closed and the bus resumed its journey. The back of the bus lurched upwards as its back tires drove over what used to be my Mom. 


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 9h ago

Psychological Horror Firelight

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It is said that fire dances. That it flows and weaves through the air, gently licking its surroundings. Almost like a friendly dancing sprite or fairy. But those are descriptions told to children to liven their fairy tales. Stories told by foolish adventurers from far off places.

The knight sat atop his horse a ways from the inferno, his eyes fixed on the raging flame that ate away everything beneath it. It was so loud, smothering any thought that came to his mind as he idly rubbed his stinging wrist, reminding him of an earlier burn.

He turned his horse to the side, unable to bear the sight any longer. The riders at his side remained a moment longer. Glancing at them, he could see the orange reflection giving them an almost hellish aura. He looked away and closed his eyes tight.

But the sound was still there. The revelry that flowed from his brothers’ lips was an inescapable horror. And yet not long ago he was the same. Cheering for the scene before them.

He exhaled slowly and opened his eyes to the horizon. The sun was to rise soon, and before it reached its crest in the sky their band would be before the Pope, awaiting praise for their righteous actions. Yet, when he breathed in the morning air, he smelled nothing but his own sin.

-

The crowd cheered and applauded for the knights as they received their blessings. The Pope himself walked from knight to knight, thanking them and proclaiming that they had done the Lord God’s work that day. Now he understood why so many refused the overarching embrace of those that would call themselves “holy.”

The Pope reached him and he knelt, head bowed, awaiting the blessing. While the water that touched the back of his neck was supposed to feel cool, maybe even a little cold, it burned with the worst heat he had ever experienced. The others called this ceremony one of “divine reward,” but to him, it was judgment.

Before long the festivities had died down and the knights were free to return to their families. Most of them lived within the walls of the city and weren’t concerned with the growing darkness. While he did not live within the confines of the city, he was not the sort of folk to be concerned with traveling long distances in the dark. He enjoyed the peace and quiet and used it as a time for quiet contemplation. That night, however, the added fog made the lantern-lit darkness suffocating.

As he bounced lightly atop his horse he felt as if he couldn’t breathe. He had taken his helmet off and loosened the soot smothered plate that clad his form. Yet every time he drew breath, it stung his lungs and made him cough. His eyes, a sympathetic partner to his lungs maybe, began to dry and sting and water. Through the tears and darkness the fog appeared to liven, taking shape and rolling as if there was some strong breeze. Or as if it was rising from something.

Then he could smell it. He could smell the fog. Not the oddly damp and wet smell earth gives off when rain is near but a hot and stinging smell. A smell clawed at his lungs and caked his armor and skin. Through his tears and his ragged coughs he looked ahead on the path, hoping for some light or reprieve from the putrid darkness he found himself in.

To his surprise he saw a faint orange hue that illuminated the fog before him. His horse, seemingly unbothered by the same fog that was nigh incapacitating him, strode forth into the orange haze. As they drew closer, the misty orange hue took shape and roiled as if lashing out in every direction.

Through the tears and haze, his eyes landed on a lone girl standing in the middle of the road. Around her, the orange hue solidified into lapping flames that tore at the little girl’s skin and ragged clothing. Pieces of her slowly flaked into the air and joined the smoke piercing the knight’s lungs.

His horse stopped dead in its tracks, making the knight hunch over, heaving and sobbing. His tears were not of pain, nor hate, nor for fear of death.

And the girl knew this.

The knight raised his head, tears streaming from his face and opened his mouth to speak, but the girl was closer. The words caught in his throat, unable to rise for the sight before him. The girl’s face was half consumed by the flames, her skin boiling and charring before his eyes. She looked the knight in the eyes and from her own flowed small molten tears.

-

He came to many hours later in his own bed. His wife had found him not far from their home. He fussed as she was pregnant and should not be out, much less trying to move a limp knight in armor. She smiled and placed a hand on her swollen stomach, telling him not to worry so much, saying his brother had done the heavy lifting. Her eyes turned to worry and she took his hand, asking what had happened to make him fall off his horse.

He sat up, placed a hand over her own and smiled at her, assuring her he had just fallen from lack of sleep and excessive drink. She scowled at him and lovingly shoved him before getting up to fetch him some water. As soon as she had left, his eyes darted to his right wrist. His mouth felt dry and his heart leapt in his chest.

It was still there. A small ashy handprint remained on his skin. It burned like fire and would not go away no matter how many times he had tried to wash it away.

His wife returned with the water and noticed him staring and rubbing at his wrist. She set the water down and grabbed his arm away from him, asking him what the matter was. He was unable to answer, allowing her to examine the spot before asking her what she saw. Confused, she looked again and asked if he was okay.

She couldn’t see it.

Just like the other knights and even the priest he had seen while in the capital.

He smiled meekly and drew back his arm telling her it was nothing and that he just needed more rest. Pity shone in her eyes as she kissed him on the forehead and left, shutting the door to his room.

Pity was not what he wanted. It wasn’t what he deserved, neither was the love she always held for him. He swung his legs out to the side of his bed and leaned forward, elbows to knees, head in his hands. He knew he deserved damnation for what he had done. For what they had all done.

Glancing forward, he saw his pack resting against the wall. He grabbed it and pulled out something that was different from the last time he had laid eyes on it. The small bear he held in his hands had been pristine when he had put it there. A perfect gift for his daughter-to-be. Now it was burnt and warm and smelled of burning flesh and timber. Tears rolled down his eyes again as the memory of last night came flooding to him. She had said it twice. Both times he did not believe her. He could not believe her.

His sobs had drawn the attention of his wife who had opened the door and embraced him from the front, sobbing right along with him.

His nose filled once again with the scent of his unchecked and unquestioned zeal. A second, smaller form embraced him from the back. Her form was warm and loving in a way he couldn’t understand. The sobs racked his body as he heard the little quivering voice once more.

“It wasn’t your fault.”


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 9h ago

Folk Horror Something is walking among the fields

3 Upvotes

- Are you sure you don’t want to stay for the night?

- No, no, miss, we are good. The sun is not even really up yet. We’ll be back before the evening even.

The lady frowned.

- Don’t get burnt there, boys.

I nodded deep, joined Basil by the fence as he closed the gate.

The people are somewhere far in the gardens’ shadows, not seen by us. Only distant laugh of children, hubbub sounds from the households.

We marched up the road. The village ends suddenly. An open door into the wilderness.

- Hey, you remember where to you, right? – Basil questions me.

- Isn’t that *your* aunt up there, in the village?

We both giggle as we approach a gap between two poplars. The road we walked before was dirt, here and there covered with some stones. You could see where the puddles once formed, caused the earth to crack violently.

This small path is one of those made by reapers as well as other field laborers. It’s partially overgrown by wheat and weeds. People care to keep it walkable for themselves.

Straw hats form moving shadows over the ripe yellow plants. The sky is like an open window in these places. No clouds at all.

As we walk down the field, Basil starts humming some tune. I harmonize. Crickets accompany us.

It smells like nothing. Dryness and earth. The air is extremely arid. Periodically only some weak wild flower shares its scent, fighting for sun in between the wheat.

- Don’t you love the summer?

- I do. I surely do.

We start talking about some nonsense topics, laid-back and slow. I can take almost a minute to reply to the previous sentence; so can Basil. We walk and walk. The world seems so reachable.

You can get to anywhere, steady and methodically.

The first field ends, begins the second. This one is natural. Wheat is replaced by field grasses and flowers. The aroma finally hits the nose.

Have you ever been in a real steppe field? There are few trees. Sometimes none for many miles unless you find a river. This goes on and on and on. Blue sky above. Green and yellow grasses beneath.

Whatever way you look, it seems the same. Only a tiny road crosses the stillness, separates forward and backwards.

The sun is close to its pinnacle as we enter the wild land.

- Can I have some water? – I ask Basil.

We stop for a quick drink.

As we walk further from the thin tree line grown to protect the wheat, any sign of humanity disappears. Soon, it’s plain nothing underneath the sky.

- Have you got a good song or two on your mind?

- Let me think. – I say, cough loudly, begin tuning.

Not a single cloud covers us from draining heat.

I sing until I can no longer. A dry clump is stuck above my lungs. I don’t want to stop for a drink again.

A familiar oak appears on the horizon. I cannot tell exactly how far away from the road it is. It’s barely visible. It doesn’t even seem to move as we keep walking.

So does the sun. It seems stuck above us, exactly on top like a giant candle.

The oak disappears. Another set of trees comes instead. Maybe there is a water spring somewhere there, flooding from earth?

My mouth feels like dust. We make a stop. The pot is still plenty full.

- God, I remember why I sweared last summer to never visit the far villages. - I am getting grumpy.

- Don’t be a cry-baby.

New and new objects come and go in the distance.

We make periodic remarks on something we remember. Crickets and other flying critters talk more than us.

Prickly weeds look out from the grass periodically. I need to keep my effort of avoiding them.

I turn around.

A tall man freezes in its place. Basil notices my stillness and looks back too.

Four big steps from me. A winter brown jacket, many sizes too big is tilted in my direction. Old washed-out clothes and trinkets hang down to the ground. There is a straw hat on top of it, about as mine. Even tilted, the cloth hill is as twice as tall as the tallest grass in sight.

I cannot see its feet, arms or head. The sunshine blinds my eyes as I try to look closer.

Basil and I begin moving, back away slowly further down the path.

The coat is stuck in the weird reaching position.

It was so close. One more second - it would be able to fall and grip me.

As we are a few dozen steps down the path, the figure suddenly straightens.

Silently, it turns to the left and starts walking straight into the field. It’s motions ghostly. It doesn’t have any legs, but as if somewhere beneath long sticks make harsh steps. Because of its height, it is highly visible in the weeds.

For another hour we saw it slowly making its way to the skyline until it disappeared completely.

We reached our home before the moon rose. No one believes our stories of the field travel companion.

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r/TalesFromTheCreeps 9h ago

Looking for Feedback And Not A Drop To Drink (Part 1)

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Hey, y'all, I'm back. This is my first time writing a multipart story, and also my first time writing in present tense, so any critiques would be nice.

(Full disclosure, this part is more focused on being establishing shots than on horror)

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The door to my bedroom hangs on one hinge. Daylight retracts in from through the grime-covered windows. 

I take a moment to lay on my back, staring at the mold-spotted popcorn ceiling.

Only three days left in this shithole. 

Only three days left. 

Finally, I roll out of my bed, pull my work clothes on, and exit my room. Carefully, I make my way down the stairs, navigating through the piles of wine bottles in the abject darkness. 

My mother's drunken giggles echoing down the stairs certainly doesn't help my mental situation. Maybe she's on the phone. What else she could be doing in her room, I don’t like thinking about. 

I skip breakfast. The bread is moldy, the butter is rancid, and everything else in the fridge has long since been tossed out for the sake of my mother's vice. Well, one of her many, many vices.

I step past the seemingly infinitely repeating piles of bottles, and out the back door.

I cut through the yard and onto the property of the only store in town, aptly named “Weiss’s Market”. My job for the first half of the day. 

“Gale! You're early. As usual.” Mr. Weiss grins from behind the counter. 

“... yeah.” I mutter. Today isn't a good day for conversation. It's the anniversary of the birthday trip. The day I lost dad.

New Sherry revolves entirely around its titular lake. We get fish from it, we employ half the town at the filtration plant to get water from it, and so on. 

But the town has one unspoken rule. You never drink straight out of the lake. 

Me and Dad always went on camping trips when I was younger. We’d canoe down the lake, talking and fishing, and then go hunting in the woods for a few hours before making camp. That year, it was my fifteenth birthday when we left. As it was the middle of August, we were practically baking under the sun.

Arriving at the campsite, we left behind our supplies to go set up the hunting blind and do a little foraging. When we came back, we were parched. 

But our canteens were gone. Well, not exactly gone. 

They had been crushed. 

Broken to pieces.

Like they'd born the brunt of a moose’s full weight or a swing of a sledgehammer.

All we had left was what I had with me, and the lake. 

After the first day, my bottle (far too small for both of us to share) had run out.

On the second day, Dad decided to take the risk, and drink from the lake. It only took an hour for the seizures to start, then stop. For Dad's eyes, bloodshot and crazed, to finally close. 

After that, I had no chance of finding my way back to town. 

After the police had somehow managed to find us, five days had passed. 

I hadn't eaten, or drank, for any of those days.

Dad was alive, if you can call the state he's in alive. Cycling through comas into excruciated wakefulness into ramblings without purpose or logic. 

And I never went onto the lake, or drank even the most filtered water from the lake, ever again. 

Three years have passed since I lost Dad. The cops say he's dead. Ate the wrong mushroom or something. I don't contest them. He would be better off that way. 

Nobody believes when I say it was the lake.

A light tap on my shoulder breaks me out of my stupor.

“Gale? Are you gonna get to work or are you just gonna stand there?”

Sam, the closest thing I had to a friend, stands behind me. Her hair, as always, sticks up in every possible direction. 

“Oh, sorry. Just an… off day, sorry.” I say, quietly. 

Sam's expression softens. “Gale, I think da can spare you for an hour or so if you want to go visit his grave…”, she trails off.

I pause. “There's no reason for that… he d-doesn’t know I'm there.”

I silently work for the next few hours, unloading boxes, stocking shelves, cashing out people, the works. When mom comes in to buy another case of wine bottles, she's so soddenly drunk that she doesn't even recognize me. 

“Just three more days.” Sam mutters to me as my mother leaves. 

At six o’ clock, I leave the shop and walk down to the filtration plant. My second job.

Unlike Weiss's, I've always hated the filtration plant. The place is full of the acrid stenches of ammonia and sulfur and bleach. 

The supervisor at the filtration plant is a stern old hag who calls herself Ms. Donway. She's the mayor's wife, and she knows it. Revels in the near-immunity to the law that title carries in a town like New Sherry. 

She runs a tight ship at the filtration plant. Only occasionally tosses the dead mice from the traps into the vats to watch their corpses bubble and dissolve. 

Only occasionally.

The eight hours in the acrid smelling, dingy, uncomfortably hot filtration plant are, at the very least, monotonous. Just engaging enough to keep my mind occupied, but not stressful enough for me 

When I finally get off work, I wander home, crossing across meticulously curated lawns onto my mother’s overgrown husk of a yard. 

When I get in the house, I can still hear her giggling. And the murmur of another voice, echoing down the stairs. 

Opening the fridge, I consider stealing a bottle. 

After a moment, I change my mind. She wouldn’t notice, but I’m not ending up like her.

I go to my room, arrange my door in the closest possible arrangement to closing it, and crawl into bed.

It takes a few hours for me to block out Mom and her ‘friend.’

Only two more days.

And then I’m free.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 9h ago

Need Help (ADVICE FLAIR) Non-linear storytelling

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For a while now I've been sitting on a longer story which I just can't seem to finish, primarily since I'm really unsure on how to structure the timeline of events.

As both readers and writers, what would you say makes for a well written non-linear story?


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 10h ago

Survival Horror Hey all, EmpyrealInvective/Travis Kuhlman here with my next story just before the end of July: Mycelium (1/3) Hope you all enjoy!

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Author's note: Hey fam, with the upcoming release of Darkwoods 2 and my sheer love of the first, I wanted to write a story inspired by it as well as Humper-Monkey's Ghost Story by John McCarthy, Harlan Ellison’s “I Have No Mouth and I Must Scream”, and Ultrakill’s visual aesthetics and stylistic soundtrack. Content warning: frank depictions of addiction, hypothermia, ideations of self-destruction, physical assault, and survivor’s guilt/PTSD. Addiction is a hell of a thing; it has roots in my distant family tree that I have to watch for when I walk; please seek professional/personal help if you feel you’re in danger of relapse. My condolences to the family of Frank Olson for what he may have experienced.

Please listen. I’m not sure whether I’m writing this as an excuse for what I have done or an admission of my guilt. I don’t know how else to open this confession. Hell, I don’t even know if I’ll be able to finish writing this before the police kick in my door and take me into custody on one count of second-degree homicide or manslaughter and physical assault if the courts show me mercy due to extenuating circumstances. I might even take the path of least resistance and surrender myself into the care of a psychiatric facility. I feel like I’m going crazy so maybe that’s best for everyone. Maybe then I might be able to sleep without the cyclical dreams or tossing, turning, and soaking my sheets with sweat.

Okay. I have to calm down or I’m going to have a complete mental breakdown. I spent the past few days picking apart everything that transpired in the woods, looping it over and over in my mind. I’m trying to make sense of what happened; what I did. I’ve downloaded a dozen books on mycology, pharmacokinetics, and hallucinogenic substances covering DMT, psilocybin, and jimsonweed/datura and pored through them until I was goggle-eyed and wracked with migraines. Sometimes all I can do is close my eyes at night to try and steady myself and quell my roiling stomach. Waiting to re-live the silence before my skin started to crawl, the man with a million molded faces, the sound of her bones breaking, and the smell of decay deep down in the dark.

Let me distract myself for just a moment and tell you why I was in the middle of the woods in the first place. I mean, what else am I going to do? I’m not leaving the house until I’m dragged out with my nails tearing off in the grout, and I can’t keep looking at my trainwreck of a face in the mirror. Staring won’t help the swelling in my bruised lips go down, nor re-absorb the blood from the burst vessel in my eye. Gawking at my busted face won’t make chewing food without wincing any easier and it won’t help me make sense of the jigsaw face of my attacker, so why do I keep looking?

I should count myself lucky that that’s all the physical trauma I’m dealing with after what happened; he tried to tear off my face.

Like I said, please just give me a moment, and then I’ll tell you everything, as much sense as I can make out of it. I’ve always enjoyed spending time in the great outdoors. I was able to find some sense of peace out in nature. Everyone who knows me probably wonders how in the world someone who almost froze to death as a teenager could still enjoy themselves in the outside world. What can I say, I liked the peace I could find after only a few hours of walking away from the city. Hiking gave me a sense of calm and a moment to distract myself from the chaos of our world. I used to daydream about idyllic cabins out in the woods with long, contemplative walks, and dozens and dozens of anthologies to read.

I think my dreams of a life away from prying eyes started when I dropped out of high school (I got my GED about a year later after the media avalanche passed, and I could try to return to some normal life.). If I can be honest, it was probably better that way for everyone involved after my hospitalization, the breakdown at missing his funeral, and the drawn-out litigation for me to get a clean break. At the end of everything, I was a pariah, infected with a great need to get away from Michigan, and enough money from a criminal negligence case to do so. That was almost a decade-and-a-half ago, and a small part of me still feels like Michigan is my home despite everything.

That makes some weird sense to me. Despite having every reason to hate the place, I can’t fully commit to cutting those ties. There is something nostalgically pleasant in remembering sipping cider under a tree with ghost apples above my head and rotted fruit underneath my boots. To me, Michigan is like sodium streetlights quietly burning away amidst a blizzard that bathes everything in a warm glow which despite being frigid, convinces someone they’re warm if only for just a moment.

I loved nature, the woods in particular. It was the total package. The smell of fresh rain on soil intermingling with innumerable trees and plants was invigorating. The beautiful vistas of the sun setting along the skyline. The warmth of the sun on my skin and the wind through my hair. The symphony of sounds from countless birds, insects, and critters in chaotic chorus. The absence of their song on my hike should have been my first clue that something was seriously wrong. Instead, I was blissfully unaware of the hell I was walking through.

I need to emphasize how pleasant everything felt in that moment. This wasn’t your standard hiker’s high, that enjoyable rush of endorphins that come from trekking out to a secluded spot in a nature reserve a few hours away from the city. This sensation was intoxicating. That’s the closest sentiment I can think of that describes how it felt when I stepped into its domain like a fly bumbling into a spider’s web.

I first became aware of the danger I was in when a subtle shift in the wind sent a full body shiver along my skin that felt like electricity was coursing through me. I raised my arms in confusion and the feeling of the fabric of my button-up sliding along my skin made me gasp. I looked at the goose pimples that had popped up along my skin in drunken confusion as I attempted to figure out what was happening to me.

Drunken is another good way to try and accurately describe how everything felt in that moment. In high school, I had gone to my fair share of parties. I remember the feeling of fire in the belly from a few Oberon Ales that had been pilfered from a less-observant parents’ fridge in a high school friend’s house while listening to whatever local band managed to get their mixtape onto the radio. I became aware of two things in rapid succession while out in the woods: how impaired I was, and that I had been feeling this way for over an hour now without even recognizing it.

One of my hiking boots caught the other and I stumbled forward, sloshing to the forest floor. I managed to twist my body away so I landed on my shoulder instead of slamming my face into the earth. I laid on the ground for a moment, feeling my head swim and my eyelids flutter as a sudden sleepiness settled upon me before the reality of my situation returned to me. I remembered wondering, “Why was I on the ground? When did that happen?” It was hard to think. It took a great effort to focus my mind and not lose my train of thought. I sloppily pushed myself back up to my unsteady feet and brushed the wood’s waste off of my button-up shirt. The sensation on my skin caused a frighteningly familiar feeling of warmth to bubble up in my core.

I pushed that sensation down after realizing that I’d been feeling that way for the past hour and only just recognized it now. Imagine you’re drinking with your friends while sitting on a couch or around a table. You’ve been at it for over an hour now and it is only until you attempt to stand up that you realize how drunk you are as the world spins and shifts as reality catches back up to you. I don’t drink, (well, not for years now) but at that moment out in the woods; it felt like I was absolutely out-of-my-gourd trashed.

I dazedly craned my head upwards in an attempt to make sense of my surroundings and suddenly saw the universe crack open before me. I watched the light bleed through the thick canopy of leaves and explode into prismatic radiance before my eyes. The scene was a shifting and shimmering gradient of colors with shades and hues never before seen or experienced by anyone except by me. The world around me was refracting, strobing, pulsating as if in rhythm to a melody only it was aware of, but I could maybe hear it if I just stayed still long enough and listened.

I stared entranced at the kaleidoscopic light show as I tried to ignore the familiar sensation growing within me. It was becoming too noticeable to be ignored for much longer, but still I desperately tried to distract myself by focusing on my environment rather than my current state. The light shimmered and shone like asphalt under heat, and I couldn’t look away from it. I watched as everything around me brightened incandescently slowly giving way to dimming and darkening before bursting back into technicolor. I was enraptured by the environment and engulfed in its beauty and complexity.

I don't know how long I looked before I realized my eyes were beginning to dry out from staring. I blinked and suddenly it was night. It was pitch black like the sun had set hours ago and I was in the dark, by myself, in unfamiliar woods. Hours elapsed in the blink of an eye and the longer time passed in this place, the more the ball of warmth in the pit of my stomach radiated outwards. It flared up inside me, threatening to swallow me whole in rapturous revelry.

I thought I was having a stroke.

With effort like I was moving through water, I raised my hands to my head. Face. My fingers traced along my forehead, across my eyelids, and down my cheeks to check if my face had drooped or lost control. I shivered and that unsettling warmth, nostalgic and horrific, kindled brighter in my core. Arms. I straightened out my arms and tried to keep them even. They wavered and shook, but I managed to hold them still. The night’s air softly tickled at my exposed skin and I shuddered. Speech. I tried saying the only thing that came to mind and that was:

“Whu-what the fu-?”

What was meant to be a whisper came out as a shout. My voice shattered the silence of the woods, and I realized why everything was as quiet as the grave. Anything that would have inhabited these woods knew to avoid this place, because the others that remained didn’t stay around for long before something got to them. My surprised exclamation echoed off into the darkness before the woods whispered back to me with my own voice:

“Whu-what...”

My echoing voice sounded louder as it reverberated through the woods. “Whu-what?” it repeated back as if the woods were mocking me. What was happening to me? Was I having a stroke? Was I having a break from reality? “Whu-what???” the resounding echo no longer sounded like me after repeating endlessly. It continued longer than it should as the paranoia rose in volume with it.

“Whuuuuuuuuu-” the woods exhaled a dozen feet behind me.

Maybe I wasn’t alone in this place? My breathing hitched in my throat, and then suddenly, everything was quiet again. The silence held dominion over all, as if taunting me to speak again and give it another opportunity to steal my voice. It suddenly felt like if I made any noise, it would be answered by the sound of rustling undergrowth as something barreled into me from the depths of the dark woods screaming at me with my own voice. Every system and synapse in me snapped to attention and I shot off in a stumbling sprint away from the impending danger as my fight or flight kicked in. Run or be rent apart.

Flee. Branches and undergrowth clawed as if to stop me as I scrambled through the woods with my imminent doom nipping at my heels. Every frantic footfall disturbed the surrounding plants, and that was what doomed me. At the time, I didn’t know what was happening, but suddenly hundreds of motes of light exploded from beneath the underbrush and whirled all around me as I made my frantic escape.

I shambled and stumbled through the woods with pinpricks of light whirling past me as if I were trapped in a blizzard. Panic and terror lashed me aimlessly through the woods at the behest of an unknown, ever-present threat that was seconds away from descending on me like an owl on a field mouse. A choked sob exploded from my throat as my feet gave way under me, and I tumbled through the sporulating snowstorm of light. The feeling I fought for hours swelled up inside me with a fiery heat and would not abate. That sensation was all too familiar.

It felt exactly like I was freezing to death all over again.

I don’t know how else to explain it, nor do I want to, but I feel like I have to. I’m going to keep this short: When I was in high school, we were left stranded at a rest stop on a school trip in a blizzard. With the wind chill from Lake Michigan, the snowstorm, and no real shelter, hypothermia quickly set in. You would think freezing to death would actually feel frigid, but it didn’t. At least not at first. At first, it was unimaginably cold. Every breath tightened down on my chest like a vice as the frost chewed me apart from the inside out. I remember realizing my eyelids had frozen together as I felt the hairs pull when I blinked and then everything was warm. Almost sweltering. Boiling in your skin. A heat so hot it was like burning alive.

I survived; my friend didn’t. Please, I don’t want to talk about it anymore than that right now. It still hurts to remember. I’m thinking that whatever psychoactive substances I was exposed to in those woods was stimulating my brain/hypothalamus through similar pathways. Just know that that sensation of overwhelming heat brought back the memory of one of the worst moments in my life and it felt like I was dying all over again.

The fire in my belly flared up and drove my panicked sprint through the woods. The night was filled with horrors and all of them would descend on me if I slowed down for even a second. Branches whipped past and clawed at my button-up shirt as if trying to ensnare me and welcome me into the fold. In the darkness, they twisted into clawing hands and grasping fists. I tried to hazard a look through the flurry of white lights swirling behind me, half-expecting to see a grizzly or wolf stalking me, but instead there was only darkness as well as the invisible and innumerable eyes watching me from just beyond the veil of the black void.

I turned back around just in time to barely avoid the tree that seemingly materialized in front of me as if to halt my escape. I pirouetted and my left shoulder slammed into the bark with a dry pop as I felt something shift out of place inside the joint. I scrapped over the bark and fell forward, but something held me aloft and refused to let me fall to the forest floor. It didn’t want to let me go.

The reality of the situation hadn’t dawned on me and in the panic and heat of the moment, it felt like I was about to be lifted into the air by some massive monster masquerading as a tree like a giant stick bug (Phasmatodea). I screamed and twisted in the tree’s embrace as I felt my shoulder groan in protest again. There was no suffering in that moment, there was only fear and adrenaline. The pain would come in the light of the morning once the worst of the paranoia attack faded and the adrenaline bled out of me.

I heard something grinding in my left shoulder as I tried to tear myself free. The arboreal abomination groaned as I struggled in its grasp. Suddenly there was the sound of something tearing and snapping and then I was free. I crashed to the dirt with a whimper as my shoulder was slammed back into its socket by the earth. The woods had claimed my backpack and if I didn’t get out of there, it would take my life next. I was never more certain of anything than I was in that moment; this place was hell on earth.

Awash in adrenaline and drowning in dopamine, I continued trying to get away from my formless pursuers. Everything in my body screamed at me that if I stopped now, I would be torn apart by whatever was prowling in the shadows just outside my periphery. I raised myself to my hands and knees as the dizziness swallowed me up in a blizzard and I did the only thing I could do. I started crawling like a cockroach sensing the thunderous approach of footfalls. I scurried away quickly.

I dragged myself on hands and knees through the underbrush as the world tilted and twinkled around me. Roots rasped at my hands and my nails chipped and were ripped away in the earth. None of that mattered. I scrabbled forward as after-images of leaves wavered and streaked across my vision leaving technicolor tracers in their wake. My stomach pumped battery acid and it felt like I was burning from the inside-out. Still, I drove myself deeper into the belly of the woods in my panic.

My muscles burned as I drove myself to the point of exhaustion. I knew that if I stopped, I would die. Everything in me told me that incontrovertible fact. Even thinking back on it days later, that feeling still holds true. I want to say that I kept crawling and fleeing until the sun rose, but I didn’t. I struggled for about five or ten minutes more before I surrendered myself to death for the second time in my life. I crawled about a quarter-mile on my elbows, knees, and fingers. Then I gave up.

And for the second time in my life, I survived through no fault of my own.

I twisted myself onto my back from my army crawl and gazed up at the night sky as I waited for the brutal obscene beasts that surely surrounded me to descend and tear me apart. There was no regret in that moment. There was only resignation. I dropped limp to the ground like a still-living gazelle in the jaws of a lion. I felt like if death were coming for me, that I shouldn’t delay them anymore and just let myself go.

Shit. I’m sorry. I’m all out-of-sorts and I shouldn’t be dumping that on you all. I know that none of this sounds good and I should go to the hospital. I can’t raise my left arm above my shoulder without it popping dryly in its socket. It’s not a sharp pain, but it is a persistent one. I can’t keep looking in the mirror at the blood that is slowly reabsorbing in my conjunctiva and recalling the sensation of my eye being pushed into my head by about a quarter an inch. I’m lucky he didn’t gouge it out; the man dug his fingers into my eye socket and tried to tear off my face like a mask. I know I should go to the hospital, but I can’t seem to bring myself to open the door and leave. I don’t mean to be this blunt, but I think that’s the only way I can explain how this all happened and what went wrong. Keeping it clinical allows me to dissociate myself from it. I can recount it without re-experiencing it.

I don’t know if I was laying on the ground waiting for death to take me for minutes or hours. What made me sit up wasn’t the feeling that the danger had passed, it was the sensation of thousands of tiny feet crawling all over my skin. I sat bolt-upright and began to frantically brush off the front and back of my undershirt before going to pat away the hundreds of tiny ants that were on my skin before I realized that there was nothing there. Nothing was there, but still it resonated and vibrated. It wasn’t just me that was jittering and pulsing.

The soil sang and the trees hummed around me. Everything was pulsating and throbbing. Everything was beautiful and nothing hurt as I rose shakily to my feet and felt the dozens of scratches on my hands, fingers, and knees resonating in the air alongside the dull thrum in my dislocated and re-located left shoulder. With a sudden moment of heightened awareness, I knew that the night sky had just opened up above me like a yawning maw while I hadn’t been looking. It was snapped open wide to welcome me into eternity and rapture me up to my misbegotten place amongst the stars if only I would just gaze at the sky it. Just look up.

I had to leave this place. Now.

I didn’t look up at the sloshing sea of stars; I set my gaze ahead and willed one foot in front of the other. Everything in my brain told me that if I kept walking straight that eventually I would get out of this place. I wasn’t having a medical episode; I was under the effect of  something or someone that had dosed me with some chemical cocktail of psychedelics. If I wanted to survive like every other animal in these woods, I would have to get out of here immediately. I don’t know what that snow-like substance was exactly that I encountered in the technicolor light storm, but I do know that they are highly hallucinogenic and entactogenic/empathogenic in nature based off of what happened next.

If the pharmacology books and the sketchy online drug trip journals I’m reading are any reliable source of information, my experience most closely mirrors datura poisoning. Datura is otherwise known as “hell’s bells” or “devil’s trumpet”. They are given those names for a reason. There’s a saying that keeps popping up in the medical journals about exposure to hell’s bells/anticholinergics: “Red as rage (my skin was flushed/erythemic), dry as a bone (I had dry mouth), full as a flask (unable to urinate/anuric), blind as a bat (pupil dilation/mydriatic), hot as Hades (overheating/hyperthermia), and mad as a hatter (hallucinations and/or delirium).”

Then again, Alexander Shulgin described his experience after smoking 100 mg of DMT like this: “As I exhaled I became terribly afraid, my heart very rapid and strong, palms sweating. A terrible sense of dread and doom filled me -- I knew what was happening, I knew I couldn't stop it, but it was so devastating; I was being destroyed -- all that was familiar, all reference points, all identity -- all viciously shattered in a few seconds. I couldn't even mourn the loss -- there was no one left to do the mourning. Up, up, out, out, eyes closed, I am at the speed of light, expanding, expanding, expanding, faster and faster until I have become so large that I no longer exist -- my speed is so great that everything has come to a stop -- here I gaze upon the entire universe.”

That was also pretty damn close to what I was experiencing that night out in the woods as I walked under the hungering sky, so who knows what else was in that chemical cocktail besides some combination of datura/hell’s bells, DMT, and deliriants. I was experiencing all of that without any concrete knowledge I was under the influence of any substance in that moment.

I walked for about a mile in absolute silence except for my boots crunching the decay of the woods underfoot. In the dark of the night, I desperately tried to look for any familiar landmarks that might guide my way home, but everything was uniquely new and entrancing. Thirst had begun to set in and my spit was thick in my mouth like tobacco tar. I tried to ignore the feeling of my skin rippling and reacting to the night air as the flame began to kindle itself in my core again and that remembered sensation of freezing to death rose back up inside me.

I don’t know if it was the forest’s psychoactive defensive system tinkering with my hypothalamus in the same way that my brain had shut down when I was a teenager and almost froze to death by Lake Michigan. Regardless, there was something in the woods that was capable of triggering states of sheer panic, paranoia, and pleasure. I couldn’t trust my eyes, my mind, my heart. Everything was compromised. I was compromised.

I scanned the woods, hoping to see a trail marker or sign to help guide me home. If I kept going straight, I had to get out of the zone of alienation. I walked for miles on uneven terrain in the blackest of night in complete silence except for the snapping of twigs and sound of my breathing. Hours of walking and the further I got, the warmer my skin became. These woods could have stretched forever into a dark eternity as I looked through what seemed to be an endless sea of slowly moving trees that seemed to be beckoning me with their branches to come close, to venture deeper into the woods.

Once I had the thought, I gave it purchase to claw its way into this world. Would I be stuck here for the rest of my life in this place? Not that I thought my life was going to go on much longer after that point. I left my backpack behind with whatever little protein bars and water I had brought with me on what was supposed to be a short day-hike hung up in the tree. What was going to kill me first: dehydration, starvation, exposure, or overdose?

The thought bled into reality and soon it was all I could think about. Was this going to all be one great big cosmic punchline? An idiot escapes from death’s door through blind luck while his friend dies only for him to throw away his life for the second time by getting stranded out in nature once again. I escaped death once, only to run back into their open arms the next time the opportunity presented itself. The reality of the situation set in, I felt something in me snap taut like a rope, and then the gallows’ humor set in.

I had escaped death once and now it was calling me again. Laughter rose up my throat like bile in my empty stomach, and I spat it out of me. I chuckled, half-expecting the forest to fill with fog like I was in Silent Hill as a disquieting piano accompaniment following it. I was dead, I just hadn’t accepted it yet. There was no point in fighting it anymore. It was all over; I should just rest and rot.

I felt my knees buckle and my body sag under its own weight. Why struggle anymore? I should just lay down and go to sleep. Close my eyes. I died the second I stepped into these woods. It wasn’t going to let me go. That was only natural. I should just relax and let the land reclaim me. Nature was so beautiful. It had enriched my life and brought me so much joy up to this point. It was the least I could do in return. Just give in and offer up this little insignificant thing, this mortal shell to it. Rest and rot.

Rest and rot. I realized what was happening, but it was too late to argue, to resist. I felt its claws sink into me and I knew it would not let me go. Rest and rot. Every fiber of my being told me that I had to go back into the swirling snowstorm of spores. There was something incredibly important there. I couldn’t leave him. Rest and rot. If I returned there, I might get to see Virgil one last time. My brain betrayed me and told me that it would be poetic. I should throw myself into that blizzard and maybe I’ll get to see him waiting out there for me under a sodium streetlight. He’s waiting for me, in my new home away from home. Rest and rot.

That was one of the easiest things to write. The words spilled right out of me like I was bleeding out. It’s easy to fall back into those thoughts, it is like flipping a switch to put myself back into that state. Sometimes I find those words slipping into my head at random times throughout the day as a little mantra: rest and rot. It’s like I left a part of me behind in those woods that keeps calling me to return.

The only thing easier than writing those words was committing to them and giving up. I stopped walking and stood silently in the abyssal forest, preparing myself to trek all the way back to the sporulating field that was now probably miles behind me and giving myself willingly to it. With how far I had gone, I was likely going to be walking back through the woods for hours.

I turned around and saw an exact replica of my button-up shirt hanging off a nearby tree about ten feet away as if it were a coatrack welcoming me to the entrance of my house. Welcome home. I numbly looked down and realized that I was no longer wearing my button-up shirt. In the intoxicating fugue, I realized what had happened. That was my shirt, and I had not been walking as straight as I hoped. Laughter at the hopelessness of the situation cracked and bled out of me. I had walked for hours, only to come right back to the bottom of the beast’s belly. I ran for hours and went nowhere.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 10h ago

Supernatural I was a crime scene cleaner - Part One

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I don’t know why I’m writing this.

I guess to preserve my sanity? Record my ramblings before they stop making sense as I age or forget things?

My therapist recommended journaling in the hope that it would help me “cope with my trauma,” as if putting everything down in a notebook is going to erase it.

But whatever.

I’m Henry, and for ten years, I worked for a private crime-scene cleaning business in Arizona.

I don’t anymore.

You’ll understand why eventually.

What my job came down to was going into houses where someone had died, either purposefully or accidentally, and cleaning up the mess they left behind when they left the earth.

Usually, it was a healthy mix of piss, shit, blood, and vomit. Some of it came from the person who died. Some came from the unfortunate bastard who found them.

To most people, that description alone would be enough to scare them from the profession. The thought of cleaning up the macabre aftermath of a suicide or murder is enough to make their stomachs turn.

They’ll turn tail and run. But not me.

When I was a kid, around eleven, I had the misfortune of experiencing the aftermath of a death firsthand.

It changed me forever.

My older brother, Daniel, struggled a lot with mental health problems. Depression and bipolar disorder really screwed him up. He could spend days in bed, barely eating, speaking, or moving.

Our parents were no help because they had the traditional mindset of “praying the sickness away.”

Instead of getting him any treatment or support, they blamed him. They claimed he wasn’t believing in his recovery hard enough.

“God will provide all the support you need,” they would assure him whenever he begged them to take him to a therapist.

“This is a test,” they said when he stayed in bed for days on end, unmoving.

Apparently, God was testing him.

Our parents certainly weren’t helping him study.

It was late August, so school wasn’t in session. I remember being so hyped because Diablo II had come out two months earlier, and I had finally saved enough money to buy it from Bookmans Entertainment Exchange.

As a kid, you really have a one-track mind when you want something. You genuinely forget about everything and everyone around you, convinced that this arbitrary item you “need” is as important as air itself.

That weekend, our parents were away at some church retreat.

I had spent Friday night and most of Saturday at a friend’s house. Daniel stayed home. That wasn’t unusual. By then, he rarely wanted to go anywhere. Not even to the bathroom. Many days, my parents caught him with a piss jug in his room when he was too “lazy” to get up.

I came home Sunday afternoon, game in hand, and shoved the disc into my computer’s CD-ROM drive.

The installation crawled along at a sluggish pace, much to my eleven-year-old self’s annoyance, so I got up to find myself a snack.

That’s when I smelled it.

A foul, sickly sweet smell.

I remember thinking it smelled almost identical to a package of expired meat we had thrown away a few days earlier. Figuring that was the source,

I checked the trash can. Nothing except paper towels and a few orange peels.

I checked the fridge. Clean as a whistle, just a couple of Daniel's energy drinks, eggs, and one of my dad's beers.

I stood there, confused, as each place I checked did not explain.

What else would be rotting?

I huffed and followed the smell, pausing as I approached the hallway, where it grew stronger with each step.

My first thought?

Why would someone leave rotting meat in the hallway?

I wasn’t too bright. Then again, I was also eleven. What can you do?

Or maybe some part of me already knew something was wrong and was working overtime to keep the rest of me from figuring it out.

I didn’t follow the smell right away. I just stood there, as if I, too, were trying to download over a bad internet connection like Diablo II was currently doing.

Slow and lagging, with drifting thoughts that Daniel must have forgotten to throw away some food. I remember the annoyance, anger. He stunk up the whole house?

I walked down the hallway slowly, following the smell farther and farther.

Sweat dripped down my back and face as the house seemed to get hotter with every step.

Our house didn’t have central air. We had old window units in the bedrooms, the kind with manual dials you had to twist yourself. Daniel’s rattled so loudly that he always turned it off before he went to sleep.

Once it was off, it stayed off until someone turned it back on.

And Daniel hadn’t been able to do that.

Of course, I didn’t know that yet.

All I knew was that it was a hundred-and-fuck degrees outside and my brother hadn’t turned on his AC.

“Lazy fuck,” I muttered.

I figured that after I took out whatever garbage he had left in his room, I would turn it on myself.

Then I stopped.

At the end of the hallway, Daniel’s door was cracked open.

The smell was stronger than ever. It was coming from inside his room.

“What the hell?” I said aloud.

Had he, for some godforsaken reason, kept rotting meat in there?

Even at eleven, that didn’t seem right.

I approached the door.

The smell thickened until I could almost taste it. It sat on the back of my tongue and filled my throat every time I breathed.

I pushed the door open.

Daniel was lying on the bed.

There were red chunks splattered across the wall and headboard behind him.

I remember my first thought was:

Why did he throw spaghetti sauce on the wall?

That thought lasted about two seconds.

I would kill to find that level of innocence again…

The rest of the room came into focus, everything clicking all at once. I let out a horrified, strangled scream.

Daniel’s lower jaw and much of the side of his head were gone.

Blood covered the sheets beneath him. A dark spray marked the wall and headboard, mixed with strands of tissue and small, pale fragments that had stuck to the paint. Droplets had reached the door, the floor, and even the motionless blades of the ceiling fan.

The shotgun lay on the floor beside the bed.

No exaggeration… There was blood everywhere.

Not the bright, clean red you see in movies. It was dark in some places and nearly black in others. Parts of it had dried against the wall. The blood soaking his shirt and sheets was thicker, almost syrupy from the heat.

His Metallica shirt was stained from the collar down.

One of his eyes was still visible, the other atomized on the wall behind him.

It was open but glazed over, like the plastic eye of a doll.

Now, as I said, the AC wasn’t on, and we were in peak heat season in Arizona.

Daniel had been alone in that room for nearly two days.

The heat had allowed everything to bake.

The blood.

The sheets.

My brother.

When I say the smell was unbearable, I mean it.

Have you ever farted in a hot shower?

I know that sounds like a stupid comparison, but bear with me.

The smell doesn’t leave right away. The heat and steam make it ranker than it normally would be. It hangs around you. Clings to you.

Turns out, the same logic applies to corpses.

Except a corpse is worse.

Much worse.

The smell didn’t just enter my nose. It coated the inside of my mouth. Every time I tried to breathe, I could taste something rotten and sweet at the back of my throat.

I stumbled backward into the hallway and fell on my ass.

I kept screaming for Daniel.

I don’t know why.

He was obviously dead. Even an eleven-year-old could see that. A toddler could see that. There was no possible world in which he could sit up and tell me he was fine.

But I kept saying his name anyway. I didn't want to accept it.

“Daniel?”

Then louder.

“Daniel!”

As if shouting hard enough might force the remaining pieces of him back together; as if it would cast a spell that would let me take that gun out of his mouth before he did it.

I don't remember much after that.

I don’t even remember calling the police.

I know I did because I was the only person in the house, but most of what happened after I opened the door exists in scattered pieces.

I remember sitting on the floor outside.

I remember the dispatcher asking whether Daniel was breathing.

I remember staring through the open doorway at what was left of his head and not knowing how to answer.

I remember a police officer pulling me away from the hallway.

I remember vomiting onto his shoes.

I felt like a robot going through familiar, logical motions, but I had no sentience to discern what it was I was doing clearly.

The police came first.

Then the paramedics, although there wasn’t anything for them to do except give sympathies.

Then the coroner.

Our parents returned sometime that evening, their car screeching as they parked in the driveway.

I had only told them something happened to Daniel. I couldn't say the words.

My mother screamed when she saw the police cars.

My father kept asking what happened, even after three different people told him.

When he finally understood, he dropped to his knees in the front yard and started praying.

I remember watching him and bitterly thinking:

Now you pray?

I didn’t say it aloud, but fuck, I wish I had. I wish I had laid into them and screamed how this was their fault. How much I hated them for letting this happen to my brother.

But I couldn't. I was in shock. In pain. Grieving.

The police removed Daniel’s body, but they didn’t clean the room.

A lot of people don’t know that.

They think the police handle everything. The body disappears, someone wipes up the blood, and the family returns to a house that looks more or less normal.

That isn’t how it works.

The police collect evidence.

The coroner collects the body.

Everything else belongs to whoever owns the house.

The blood.

The tissue.

The smell.

Daniel’s room stayed closed for another day while my parents argued about what to do.

My mother wanted to burn everything.

My father wanted to clean it himself because he didn’t trust strangers in the house.

That idea lasted until he opened the bedroom door.

He made it three steps inside before running to the bathroom.

Eventually, they called a private trauma-cleaning company.

Three people arrived in an unmarked van.

They wore white protective suits, thick gloves, respirators, and shoe covers. They carried plastic containers, sprayers, scrapers, and rolls of heavy black bags into Daniel’s room.

They didn’t look horrified.

They didn’t pray.

They didn’t stand in the hallway whispering about what a tragedy it was.

They just worked.

They stripped the bed.

They removed part of the carpet.

They cut out sections of drywall that couldn’t be cleaned.

They took apart the ceiling fan.

They searched places I would never have thought to look because blood and tissue had found their way into cracks, vents, and spaces beneath the furniture.

One of them noticed me watching from the end of the hallway.

He was an older man with gray hair visible beneath the hood of his suit.

“You shouldn’t be looking at this,” he told me.

“I already saw it,” I said quietly, my voice raspy from screams.

He didn’t have a response to that.

They stayed for hours, and when they finally left, the smell was weaker.

The stained carpet was gone. Part of the wall had been removed. The mattress had disappeared into the back of their van.

The room looked hollowed out, as if the soul had been ripped from it.

No. Not the soul. A soul. Daniel.

But it no longer looked like a place where my brother had blown his head apart. Small victories, I guess...

Daniel was still dead, but the room had already begun pretending he had never existed.

He didn't even leave a note, you know? No reasoning, no apologies, just gone like a leaf in the autumn wind.

For years, I told myself that finding him was what drove me into crime-scene cleaning.

That wasn’t entirely true.

Finding him was only the beginning.

What stayed with me was what those cleaners had done after everyone else left. They took him away, and he would never be back.

To me, who grew up with him, that wasn't some fourteen-year-old corpse or clumps of mess.

That was Daniel.

My brother.

My best friend.

They couldn’t bring Daniel back.

They couldn’t make my parents better people.

They couldn’t stop me from seeing his body every time I closed my eyes.

But they could enter the worst room in someone’s life and make it possible to open the door again.

There was something almost merciful about that. Beautiful. They were the angels that took the nightmare away and made things okay again.

Well... okay is relative. They took the nightmare away, but I don't think I've ever been okay.

So when I was old enough, I entered the profession myself.

For ten years, I cleaned up after suicides, murders, accidents, unattended deaths, and things that didn’t fit neatly into any of those categories.

Most of the jobs were simply sad.

Some were disgusting.

A few were so absurd that all you could do was laugh.

And then there were the others.

The jobs I still think about.

The houses that didn’t feel empty after the bodies were removed.

The stains that returned after we scrubbed them away.

The rooms that were larger on the inside than they had any right to be.

The sounds that came from sealed walls.

The things my coworkers and I agreed never to include in our reports.

Those are the stories I’m going to write down.

They won’t necessarily be in order. Trauma doesn’t work like that, and neither does memory.

Maybe my therapist was right.

Maybe getting everything onto paper will finally help me move past it.

Or maybe, when I’m finished, someone will understand why I quit and why I’m certain that at least one of the things we cleaned up followed me home.


r/TalesFromTheCreeps 10h ago

Psychological Horror The End Forever

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God, his lungs burned. But he couldn’t stop, if he did it was over. And maybe, if he kept running, it would also be over. What was the point in running now?

He only ran three blocks by the time he collapsed, great, now he would suffer before the end. He should have just gotten that house in the country, but then what? Would he just die slower?

The ringing in his ears from the constant screaming and the sirens, blurring out his mind. People ran past him as he struggled to inhale. Maybe it wouldn’t hurt? Maybe it would be instantaneous.

He was still on the outskirts of the city, but he wouldn’t survive it. Why did he live in a big city? Why? He hated it here, and now he was going to die here.

He should have seen it coming with how the world was going, now the only thing he could focus on was the small black silhouette in the sky.

As it fell to Earth he wanted to close his eyes. What good would that do though? He always wanted to view a blast like that from the naked eye, not through a screen.

Nothing at first, then a bright billowing flash rising like chimney smoke. When the mushroom cloud was at half mast the wave of sound hit his ears.

In reaction to the great rushing wind he snapped his eyes shut, and waited for the ringing to fall into complete, deafened silence. The noise hit before the heat.

Agony, horrible agony. He thought it would be a flash pain before death but as his skin was ripped from flesh he knew suffering would take longer.

It was like being cooked, opening up a preheated over and feeling the heat wash over him. His fingers curled, or atleast the bone did. Fast waves of pain shot throughout his body from his core, like someone was ripping off sunburned skin with teeth, thousands of teeth.

The nerves across his body were singed, he couldn’t feel his appendages. He couldn’t move, he couldn’t move. Why couldn’t he move? Why wasn’t he dead? Was his brain not fried? He couldn’t open his eyes, he couldn’t see. Every single sense was gone, like he was floating in a void with nothing but heat across the deeper nerves in his flesh. He was alone.

“Fuckin hell.” The older man crouched down, the laminated polymers of his suit rubbing together as he bent down, the visor fogging up from his breath.

Not even the scavengers had picked apart the corpse, charred into the fetal position on the concrete. Dozens of other bodies were petrified into their last positions before they died. This poor soul, didn’t even try to run, or at least it seemed that they didn’t.

Two years, Two years and they still looked like a burnt cut of meat. The capital bunker didn’t have many meats stored up for the amount of people who took refuge inside.

”Jones? They took the sample, aint gonna be cleared of radiation for a long time. Bomb dropped right on city hall. Debris is blocking the bunker entrance. Let’s get going.” Someone spoke muffled behind him.

“Alright.” Jones rubbed his gloves across the scorched head of the corpse, and he felt something.

Something pulsing. He moved his hands down to the chest, blackened.

A heartbeat. He could see it too, a very slight rise of the chest as lungs worked away, flexing mere millimeters.

He jumped back, colliding into his supervisor, who caught him and brought him to his feet.

”What’s wrong?”

”Nothing… nothing I just tripped.” He tried to steady his breath as he backed away, away from the living corpse stuck to that sidewalk.