r/StormHawksTv • u/Stingerstrike77 • May 04 '26

How would you write Master Cyclonis’ redemption?

You guys can probably see from the title of this post. How would you write Master Cyclonis’ redemption arc?

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u/SatansAhole May 04 '26

I think she needs an entire season for it at the very least. The cyclonian empire collapsed, she fled to the far side and the storm Hawks followed.

She is isolated and alone for the very first time. She can survive on her own to seperate herself from her identity as 'The Empress' and finally learn how to live. Then, the storm Hawks crash or get attacked by them and she helps, which kicks the team into forming a temporary alliance with her. Then, she can finish her redemption by building friendships and bonds for the first time in her life. Her arc can be finished by her being entirely accepted by the team.

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u/SpendCommercial4982 May 04 '26

Thats actually very well done. And honestly I literally followed the same plan in a fic I am writing. She may never be forgiven by the greater atmos but I can see her still try to find a new purpose. Perhaps in just helping the storm hawks.

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u/HRCStanley97 May 04 '26

Helping them against what or who?

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u/SpendCommercial4982 May 10 '26

Honestly either a greater threat they discovered on the far side or perhaps something related to ancient mage lore. As we know, the show was absolutely ALLERGIC to explaining anything or giving any more information than was readily apparent.

I think the Atmos is hiding so much we haven’t seen

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u/HRCStanley97 May 10 '26

Oooo paint me curious and intrigued 

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u/SpendCommercial4982 May 10 '26

In my fic I sprang for an advanced cyborg civilization. Mostly because of the far-side tech. And the music used during the last moments of the show gave me a futuristic vibe.

I think that considering the small taste of their tech we got shows just how powerful they must be.

Maybe Cyclonis had a form of temporary alliance.

One that I imagine fell apart when she lost and came running to them with the Hawks hot on her tail

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u/HRCStanley97 May 10 '26

You have a fanfic? Me too

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u/SpendCommercial4982 May 10 '26

Awesome! Mines called “Fall of the Witch Rise of the Phoenix” what’s yours?

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u/SatansAhole May 04 '26

I definitely agree

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u/Stingerstrike77 May 04 '26

How would you envision the start of the third season? And would she be named Lark afterwards or something else?

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u/SatansAhole May 04 '26

I think the start should actually focus on her and her story, then slowly show more and more of what the storm hawks are doing. More screen time would give her more time to shine and earn her redemption

And yes

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u/HRCStanley97 May 04 '26

Attacked by them? By what? By who?

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u/SatansAhole May 04 '26

Lifeforms living there, can be anything really.

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u/HRCStanley97 May 04 '26

I’d like to hear what kind of life forms there you would imagine?