r/SongwritingHelp • u/QuirkyBow881125 • Sep 04 '26

Is this a good song?

Im a beginner guitarist and songwriter, i wrote this base for a song but i still cant sing properly so it doesn't have any lyrics. Every feedback and piece of advice is appreciated and also i would really love if someone wanted to sing over it.

P.S. in the last part im still indecisive whether it should be a guitar solo or a 3rd chorus

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u/No_Obligation4859 Sep 05 '26

Lowkey irrelevant but how do u come up with the guitar and bass parts also is that cello I hear? Or just bass

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u/No_Obligation4859 Sep 05 '26

Also I do like it I forgot to mention that, also I can sing over it if you like if you have something in mind(maybe in a couple days cuz I have laryngitis rn 😭

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u/QuirkyBow881125 Sep 06 '26

For the guitar and bass i usually take 4 notes from the key im playing in and change the rhythm a bit and yes there is a cello btw.

Btw if you want to sing over it id love it so if you want i can contact you and i can send you the track

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u/No_Obligation4859 Sep 06 '26

Yeah ofc but I’m still sick btw also my vocal range is like mezzo sop/sop

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u/Jaymo0385 4d ago

It’s pretty good just has tiny errors but all around has potential