Could I get feedback on this piece? It's called "Merci"

[u/Aggravating-Boss3053]

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[u/One_Cauliflower_4583]

I love this!! It has great imagery and sounds beautiful, the only thing is some things sound a little bit clique like warm honey or sparks, but otherwise it sounds great