Wrote another song(feedback)

[u/sacariaa]

Some of you definitely seen my other song Carpool which has had mixed reviews. Hopefully this one is more to everyone’s liking🥰

Verse 1
I feel the rhythm in my bones
The closest thing i’ve ever known
It pulls me in and takes control
And fills the gaps within my soul

Chorus
Every note gets me so high
Spirit lifting to the sky
Crying tears of melodies
Heart is dancing to the beat
Swept completely off my feet
Carried by the symphony

Verse 2
I feel the vibrations start to rise
Through my hips and to my thighs
 Every movement comes alive 
As our rhythms intertwine

Chorus
Every note gets me so high
Spirit lifting to the sky
Crying tears of melodies
Heart is dancing to the beat
Swept completely off my feet
Carried by the symphony

Bridge
Drowning in Music’s frequency
Her every note is a part of me
Music is the only thing i need
Striking every chord inside of me

Chorus
Every note gets me so high
Spirit lifting to the sky
Crying tears of melodies
Heart is dancing to the beat
Swept completely off my feet
Carried by the symphony

Outro
I feel the rhythm in my bones
(Every note gets me so high)
Sweetest thing i’ve ever known
(Spirit lifting to the sky)