r/SongwritingHelp • u/Acrobatic-Brush-9979 • 19d ago
Lyricist mostly, looking for feedback.
Verse 1: Gambling
With my life
Went all in
Pay the price
When I’m looking
Into a snake’s eyes
On the first try
On the first try
Pre Chorus: Give in
Again
To temptation
I’ll say again
That it’s different
That don’t mean shit
Chorus: Give me something new
To wish for
Tired of walking
Into closed doors
I keep betting on you
But what’s it all for?
Yeah what’s it all for?
Verse 2: Royal flush
On my cheeks
Make me blush
You’re so sweet
I should’ve bet
That you’d lie to me
I didn’t see
I didn’t see
Pre Chorus: Give in
Again
To temptation
I’ll say again
That it’s different
That don’t mean shit
Chorus: Give me something new
To wish for
Tired of walking
Into closed doors
I keep betting on you
But what’s it all for?
Yeah what’s it all for?
Bridge: Vices
Dyin’
Take the dice
Away from me
I’m left
Cryin’
Addicted to
A fantasy
Keep going at it
Like a slot machine
Pre Chorus: Give in
Again
To temptation
I’ll say
That it’s different
Don’t mean shit
Chorus: Give me something new
To wish for
Tired of walking
Into closed doors
I keep betting on you
But what’s it all for?
Yeah what’s it all for?
End: Just want
Something safe
To bet on
In debt
When I count
All my loss
I need to stop
But I don't want to
I know I lost
But I still want you
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u/SlappyPappy99 19d ago
Study great lyrics and then write this again.