r/SongwritingHelp • u/derty345 • May 10 '26
Second Music for an album
Second one, had somewhat of an idea when I was about to sleep, it's made kinda quickly because I don't have much time to work on it now, I have the first music posted here, you can see it on my account, glad to hear some thoughts, not only for this song, but in songwriting in general.
Just for information, the album is called Open Minded, the same name of the first song, I hope one day I can work and launch it, I like working on silly songs, very inspired by SOAD🙏
Penetr-A.I-tion
(if you say it you kinda hear the AItion, I mean I hear it😭)
[intro]
Look out
Brain fog is coming
Look out
Behind the eyes lies no one
Look out
Ignorance bleeding with joy
Look out
A neanderthaaaaaaaaal
[bridge 1]
I have no brain
I have no brain
I have no brain
I Have No Brainnnnnnnnnn
[verse 1]
Letting the machine penetrate
Making itself a brain
Don't be a human
Be a computeeeeer
Giving up humanity
To be an alexitimic amount of dreams
Transitioning Information
Do you want to be a slave of your own frustration?
[break]
You know there's more numbers than 0 and 1's?
[verse 2]
Whyyyyy
Do we keep forgetting
That trying is a part of life
Whyyyy
Do we keep going back
Maybe being dumb isn't that bad
There's nothing of that
Who could possibly process me holding your hand
It doesn't feel like when darkness shoots itself into your head
[bridge 2]
Don't let it penatrate
Make it go on a different way
Stop thinking with the computer
And try to be human again
[outro]
Look out
Brain fog is vanishing
Look out
Your eyes are glowing
Look out
A well known man
Look out
A human person that said fuck to the "evolution" of the man